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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Assalamo alaikum doston peish e khidmat hoon eik naiy aur
taaza aur as usual tooti phooti ghazal ke saath per jinke
liye yeh ghazal likhi hai woh bare khaas hain aur unke
kirdaar ko chhalkaane ki koshish ne is ghazal mein jaan
daali hai so umeed hai aap sub ko yeh ghazal pasand aayegi
khaaskar Zee bhai ko jinke liye likhi hai



Mein apne ye ashar tamaam
kar doon zee bhai ke naam

jo iski buraiy chaahein
woh hon sada hi nakaam

wo din bara azeez hoga
jab inke sath hogi shaam

per aaj kal yeh masroof
to hoti hai faqat dua salam

ye jo chahte hain iska bura
hain bad niyati se badnaam

issa hai na hoga kabhi kahin
Zee ke har ada ko salaam

qisse humare yaksan ye bhi
hote hain yaadon me gumnaam

panga jo inse le le kabhi koi
uska hota hai bura anjaam

kabhi kabhi ashaar likhte to
samette hain unme dukh tamam

inse likhne ki guzarish karte hum
ke dil ko chhu jate inke qalaam

jisne chaha hamesha subka bhala
ye ghazal us pyare bhai ke naam

***S_ChiragH***
 

mashraki.larka

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KHUDA KI BASTI
Assalamo alaikum doston peish e khidmat hoon eik naiy aur
taaza aur as usual tooti phooti ghazal ke saath per jinke
liye yeh ghazal likhi hai woh bare khaas hain aur unke
kirdaar ko chhalkaane ki koshish ne is ghazal mein jaan
daali hai so umeed hai aap sub ko yeh ghazal pasand aayegi
khaaskar Zee bhai ko jinke liye likhi hai



Mein apne ye ashar tamaam
kar doon zee bhai ke naam

jo iski buraiy chaahein
woh hon sada hi nakaam

wo din bara azeez hoga
jab inke sath hogi shaam

per aaj kal yeh masroof
to hoti hai faqat dua salam

ye jo chahte hain iska bura
hain bad niyati se badnaam

issa hai na hoga kabhi kahin
Zee ke har ada ko salaam

qisse humare yaksan ye bhi
hote hain yaadon me gumnaam

panga jo inse le le kabhi koi
uska hota hai bura anjaam

kabhi kabhi ashaar likhte to
samette hain unme dukh tamam

inse likhne ki guzarish karte hum
ke dil ko chhu jate inke qalaam

jisne chaha hamesha subka bhala
ye ghazal us pyare bhai ke naam

***S_ChiragH***
/:) panga jo inse le le kabhi koi
uska hota hai bura anjaam

was the best part of it , ...

Panga ...{(laugh)} lolz


keep writing Bro
 

Khwahish

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wowwwwwwwww
kiya baat hai saif ali bhai
Zee ki liye etni achi poem lekhi hai aapni
mashallah
bohot hi achi hai:)
qisse humare yaksan ye bhi
hote hain yaadon me gumnaam

panga jo inse le le kabhi koi
uska hota hai bura anjaam :p:p:p
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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wowwwwwwwww
kiya baat hai saif ali bhai
Zee ki liye etni achi poem lekhi hai aapni
mashallah
bohot hi achi hai:)
qisse humare yaksan ye bhi
hote hain yaadon me gumnaam

panga jo inse le le kabhi koi
uska hota hai bura anjaam :p:p:p
Bohot bohot shukria behna
 

Zee Leo

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awww so sweet saif {(confuse)} Thank u so much dear buhat he achi poem likhi hai aap ne {(thx)}

and InshaAllah aap ki farmaish pori karen ge aur jaldi apne kuch ashaar share karenge :) once again thank u so much .. its very difficult to write on any person :)
 

NamaL

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wowwwwwwwwwwww zee ki itni tareeeeeeeeeef soochna pary ga

nice wording chiragh brother
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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awww so sweet saif {(confuse)} Thank u so much dear buhat he achi poem likhi hai aap ne {(thx)}

and InshaAllah aap ki farmaish pori karen ge aur jaldi apne kuch ashaar share karenge :) once again thank u so much .. its very difficult to write on any person :)
Bohot bohot shukria pasand karne ke liye
bhai jan aur ji bilkul eik hi ghazal me guzarish
tareef aur ghussa plus sawaliya ashaar daal diye

ji insha'ALLAH hum sach me betaab hain aapke ashaar
parhne ke liye

aur bilkul ghazal likhna mushkil hi hai bhai jan
 

*khushi*

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Ghar :p
waalikumaslam

bohat achi poetry hai...

but zee k liye itni achi poetry :p

mtlb zee bechara to gya kaam say....
 

Wasif Safi

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Walekum Assalam Saif..

Asusual zabardast sharing bro aur bohot khusoosi log ke liye, Zeeshan bhai ke upar bohot jajti hai ye poetry..:):)
 
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