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~~MY FIRST POETRY on TM~~
meri mojoda zindagi ki surat-e-haal per mushtamil ye ghazal,
meri apni kahani hi hai,
kisi ese shaks se mere uthte sawal hain,
jin k jawab dhunde nai milte...
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~~koi nai janta~~
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meri muhabbat kya hai,
ye koi nai janta,
meri chahat kya hai,
ye koi nai janta...
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kyu tarpte hain hum,
koi nai janta,
kyu taraste hain hum,
koi nai janta...
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bikher rahe hain kyu
hum musam-e-bahaar me.
kya khiza humse hai duur,
ye koi nai janta...
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meri wafa jo samjhte,
to jaan pate wo,
kyun toot ker chahte hain,
ye koi nai janta...
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ilzam -e- husn parasti,
hai hum per jaan-e-jaan,
humne dil se tume chaha,
ye koi nai janta...
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khafa ho ker hum se,
zindagi cheen li,
ab maut kareeb hai mere,
ye koi nai janta...
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khwab dekha ker mene,
agr toda hai bharosa,
kis k sapne tote hain phir?
ye koi nai janta...
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ansu bahe hain mana,
dono taraf se.
dard kitna kisko kitna mila
ye koi nai janta...
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bewafai hai kya,
ye tum kya janoge,
hum ne nibhai wafa,
ye koi nai janta....
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ker k yakeen ghero ka,
hume nazro se gira dia,
kya dil se nikal sakoge?
ye koi nai janta...
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kya hume bhula sakogey,
ye koi nai janta...
muhabbat mita sakogey
ye koi nai janta...
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written
by
ADi
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realy koi nhi janta
realy baz okaat kia sy kia hojata hy
koi nhi janta
ye duniya hy kia
koi nhi janta
ye hy kia hum
koi nhi janta
pyar hy kia
ye koi koi
janta hy=D>
=D>
 
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Tariq Saeed

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bikher rahe hain kyu
 hum musam-e-bahaar me.
 kya khiza humse hai duur,
 ye koi nai janta...

is ki to bilkul bhi samjh nahi i....
or aik or baat kabi.... kisi ko mukhatib ker rahay ho or kbi kisi ko ... :s

well nice try hy.. hope k koi shayar hi janay shayari ka gur..
​
 
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wah kia baat hai ji mashaAllah aapki first poetry . well try inshaAllah agar aap likhte rahenge to aage perfection aayega.:-bd
 
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Atif-adi

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TARI 007 said:
bikher rahe hain kyu

hum musam-e-bahaar me.
kya khiza humse hai duur,
ye koi nai janta...​

is ki to bilkul bhi samjh nahi i....
or aik or baat kabi.... kisi ko mukhatib ker rahay ho or kbi kisi ko ... :s​

well nice try hy.. hope k koi shayar hi janay shayari ka gur..​
Click to expand...
pori shyeri me sawal kiye hain mene,
is sher me mene apni feelings sesons k zariye bayan ki,

bikher rahe hain kyu

hum musam-e-bahaar me.
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mausam-e-bahar ko humesha khush gawar or love season k nazriye se dekha jata hai,
is line me ek sawal hai k jaha sab khush hain mere ird gird ka mahool waha me kyu sad hun?

kya khiza humse hai duur,
ye koi nai janta...​

is line me im asking evey one k kya me khush dikhta hun (khiza patjhar ko kehte hain jo sadness loneliness se related hai)
kiya khiza mujhse duur hai, kya loniliness n sadness mujhse duur hai...kya me happy hun?
ye koi nai janta...

im not a poet, n pata nai mene lafzu ka istemal theek kya hai k nai...i dont know..

 
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