Hum jaise loug

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalamo alaikum doston kaise hain aap sub is umeed ke saath ke sub theek hongein
insha'ALLAH mein apni eik ghazal share kar raha hoon jaise ke mere baqiya toote
phoote qalaam ki aap lougon ne bohot si tareefein ki aur be shaq jo bhi kaha
dil se kaha aur bohot achha kaha us hi tarah aaj mein apni eik aur ghazal
peish kar raha hoon bas faraq yeh ke yeh ghazal das ishaar mein hai

umeed hai aap sub pasand karengein aur poora hi parhengein

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Hum jaise loug kaam se pehchaane jaate hain
sabab e ishq achhe loug wafa se jaane jaate hain

jise khuda kaha us hi ko tore jaa rahe hain
kya yeh insaan bhi bawafa maane jaate hain

jurm to koun nahin karta is jahaan mein
per ishq ke mujrim hi kyun qaid khane jaate hain

uski raza pe kam berukhi pe zyada dhiyan deta
ke uske roothte hi takht chor ke use manane jaate hain

unko khud se begumaan deikh lout aaya karte hain
warna hum rouz us janib use sataane jaate hain

woh pur lutf baatein woh bachon si shararatein
khuabon mein use sangati ke pal yaad dilane jaate hain

kambakhton ne sada ishq ko badnaam hi kiya
sabab e aadat bahana e ishq rakh ke meikhane jaate hain

buraiy uske liye nahin khud hi ke liye kiye jaate hain woh
ke maa ko daant kar naam dozakh me likhwane jaate hain

dil se chaahne walon ne itna hi kaam liya mujh se ChiragH
ke humein jala ker woh auron ko bachaane jaate hain

***S_ChiragH*** ​

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Beautiful , Nice sharing

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Beautiful , Nice sharing

Thankyou very much big.b

 

[waqas naseer]

bohot khoob MashAllah Aap bohot acha likhte hein keep it up.

 

[Dawn]

Walaikum assalam saif.
bahot khoob likha saif aapne waqayi aapni bahetreen ghazlaon me ek aur izafa kia aapne.mashaAllah aise mahsoos hi nahi hota k aapne likha hai laikin ye hqeeqat hai aur mujhe kahna par raha hai k aapki ghazlen future me parhi jaayengi inshaAllah.aise hi likhte rahen

 

[Zee Leo]

umdah sharing bhai jaan

 

[Asma24]

waliekum assalam
waaah mashaallah very beautifull poetry no word i have just speachlesss
aap ne theek kaha tha bhai that im ur bigest fan of ur poetry
bas dua hy aap yunhi likhte rahen ..

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bohot khoob MashAllah Aap bohot acha likhte hein keep it up.

bohot bohot shukria Waqas bhai aapki du'aen saath raheen tp insha'ALLAH likhte hi rahengein

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Walaikum assalam saif.
bahot khoob likha saif aapne waqayi aapni bahetreen ghazlaon me ek aur izafa kia aapne.mashaAllah aise mahsoos hi nahi hota k aapne likha hai laikin ye hqeeqat hai aur mujhe kahna par raha hai k aapki ghazlen future me parhi jaayengi inshaAllah.aise hi likhte rahen

Bohot bohot shukria Aara'af bhai jaise mere paas shukria ke bhi alfaaz na bache hon
kya andaaz hai housla afzaiy ka masha'a'ALLAH once again thanks

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

umdah sharing bhai jaan

Shukria bhai jan

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

waliekum assalam
waaah mashaallah very beautifull poetry no word i have just speachlesss
aap ne theek kaha tha bhai that im ur bigest fan of ur poetry
bas dua hy aap yunhi likhte rahen ..

Bohot bohot shukria speechless to me ko kar deti hain aap baji apne umdah repliez se
leikin aap meri sub se badi fan hain yeh mene kab kaha tha

 

[Jiya.]

wow beautiful sharing chiragh
keep it up

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thankyou very much Jiya sis

 

[Hoorain]

waalaikum assalam

HAr har shaer bohat zabardast hay MASHAALLAH

unko khud se begumaan deikh lout aaya karte hain
warna hum rouz us janib use sataane jaate hain......

Begumaan nhi hay badguman hay yahan

Bohat zabardast ishaar hain sab KEEP it up

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria Hoor sis, thanks for the correcton

 

[Wasif Safi]

Bhai laate kaha se ho itne ache ashaar aap, waqai me bohot zabardast likha hai aapne...

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bas bhai aap doston ki du'ayen hain jo ALLAH ke fazal se rang laatin hain

aur zehen mein aise ishaar aa jaate hain Bohot bohot shukria pasand karne ka

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

ahan good
but mujhe adhi samjh main aye hai or adhi nahi
aap log poetry ko kese samjh lete ho?
or phir khud se likh bhi lete ho?
how intelligent u r

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thanks sis

aur aapko kuch samajhna ho to poochh lein
aur bohot bohot shukria waise ishaar samajhne ke liye
intelligent hona zaroori nahin i think

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

Wow simply amazing chiragh.... Tum itni choooti umer me itne talented ho yaqeenan bohat zaberdast shayer bano ge Inshallah..??
aur my favourite

unko khud se begumaan deikh lout aaya karte hain
warna hum rouz us janib use sataane jaate hain
woh pur lutf baatein woh bachon sishararatein
khuabon mein use sangati ke pal yaad dilane jaate hain

Kya baat hai aap ki.... Bohat umdaa mashallah