Har saans teri amanat ki hai

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Har saans teri amaanat ki hai

Mene bhi har saans apni teri amaanat ki hai
har khuaab mein tujhe dekhne ki aadat ki hai

mashghool jahan me koun nahin hota hai per
suna hai tujh ko jab bhi tu ne shikayat ki hai

tum jab bhi aate ho apni suna ke chale jaate ho
kabhi kehne do hum ne bhi tumse kitni mohabbat ki hai

yehi qirdar rahe hain humare prem nagar mein ke
mene aksar lagawat tum ne aksar adaawat ki hai

jis shaqhs ke honton pe naam tumhara be adabi se aaya
hum ne har us shaqhs se taa umer ke liye baghawat ki hai

kabhi yeh bhi to soch lete chain se beth ke jaane jaana
hum ne kya kiya hai yahan per agar sirf tum ne mohabbat ki hai

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[*Sonu*]

ahan
bht acha likha hai app na

keep sharing n keep writing
​

 

[Hoorain]

ahan nice one

bohat khoob

jis shaqhs ke honton pe naam tumhara be adabi se aaya
hum ne har us shaqhs se taa umer ke liye baghawat ki hai


ye shaer acha hay

par agar doosra misra aise ho to ziada acha shaer laggey ga

"hum ne har us shakhs se ta umr baghawat ki hay"

"ta umar k liye" ziada wazahat ho jaati hay jaise nasr may hoti hay baqi jaise aapko behtar laggey
bohat acha likha aap ne

 

[Zee Leo]

wow zabardast buhat khoob brother .. keep it up .. keep sharing nice janab

 

[Jahil]

Umdaa

 

[yoursks]

marvelous sharing...

thanks for sharing and keep it up.....

 

[Atif-adi]

bht khoob

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria doston housla afzaiy ka

@ hoor sis ur correct hum ne bhi is adition ka
socha per kiya nahin pata nahin kyun

per aap ne mashwara de kar bohot achha kiya

thanks once again

 

[Amreen]

bohat khoob...Masha Allah bohat achi shayri ker lete hain aap to ...

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria Amreen ji

 

[Sabah]

buhut khub and nice poetry...

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thanks and shukria sabah ji

 

[Qawareer]

wahhhhhhhhh..boht aala..
parh k boht acha lga..
likhte rahen..

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Shukraan ji shukraan

insha'allah likhte rahengein

 

[Ocean-of-love]

Har saans teri amaanat ki hai

Mene bhi har saans apni teri amaanat ki hai
har khuaab mein tujhe dekhne ki aadat ki hai

mashghool jahan me koun nahin hota hai per
suna hai tujh ko jab bhi tu ne shikayat ki hai

tum jab bhi aate ho apni suna ke chale jaate ho
kabhi kehne do hum ne bhi tumse kitni mohabbat ki hai

yehi qirdar rahe hain humare prem nagar mein ke
mene aksar lagawat tum ne aksar adaawat ki hai

jis shaqhs ke honton pe naam tumhara be adabi se aaya
hum ne har us shaqhs se taa umer ke liye baghawat ki hai

kabhi yeh bhi to soch lete chain se beth ke jaane jaana
hum ne kya kiya hai yahan per agar sirf tum ne mohabbat ki hai

***S_ChiragH***​