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Asslam o alykum

dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

ye surkhi-e-shafq, ye rang-e-gulsitaan
ye charsoo phely huy sabzay ki daastan
ye rang bahaar k ye bala ki grmiyaan
ye khizaan ka zrd rang oar ye srdiyaan

lafzoon mae jo kbhi b na ho sky bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

barish ka saaf paani barsaata aasmaan
qos o qizah k saat rang bdlty haen samaan
charoon trf jo phelti hy ik kaali ghataa
to lagta hy ye sara manzar dilruba

phir b na kr sakoon mae is baat ko bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan


hr phool mae hy khushboo hr rang mae shokhiyaan
seedhay sy rastay phr b paray haen veraan
najany q ghaflat mae hy aaj ka inssan
hr shay isi k wasty RAB ny hy ki bayaan

jo krna chahoon to b na kr skoon bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

hr qadam per haen dekho bhatakty huy insaan
phir b us ki rehmat hy dekho bepanah
wo cheen skta hy hm sy hmarai jaan
lekin wo ly rha hy hmara imtehaan

in rehmatun k sayye talay hun mery do jaahaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan
 

Hoorain

*In search of Oyster Pearls*
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A n3st!
Asslam o alykum

dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

ye surkhi-e-shafq, ye rang-e-gulsitaan
ye charsoo phely huy sabzay ki daastan
ye rang bahaar k ye bala ki grmiyaan
ye khizaan ka zrd rang oar ye srdiyaan

lafzoon mae jo kbhi b na ho sky bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

barish ka saaf paani barsaata aasmaan
qos o qizah k saat rang bdlty haen samaan
charoon trf jo phelti hy ik kaali ghataa
to lagta hy ye sara manzar dilruba

phir b na kr sakoon mae is baat ko bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan


hr phool mae hy khushboo hr rang mae shokhiyaan
seedhay sy rastay phr b paray haen veraan
najany q ghaflat mae hy aaj ka inssan
hr shay isi k wasty RAB ny hy ki bayaan

jo krna chahoon to b na kr skoon bayaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan

hr qadam per haen dekho bhatakty huy insaan
phir b us ki rehmat hy dekho bepanah
wo cheen skta hy hm sy hmarai jaan
lekin wo ly rha hy hmara imtehaan

in rehmatun k sayye talay hun mery do jaahaan
dekho ye mera RAB hy kitna mehrubaan
waalaikum assalam

MASHAALLAH shwetttt impressive sharing

BOhat acha likha aap ne

MAY ALLAH BLESS U AAMEEN,,aur hum sab ko samajhne ki taufeeq ata farmayain AAMEEN

KEep sharing :-bd
 

kingnomi

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Owsum , Superb , Very Nice :P
ASSALAM O ALAIKUM
Main TM pe aik aur NEw rising talent ko introduce karwana chahungi...ye BHeegi Palkain siso ki UNI Friend hain....
MULAQAT ka sharf to kuch roz pehle hua hamain par in k is talent balkey anmol talent ka pta aaj chla inki poetry parh k "SHOOO SHWEET" siso MASHAALALH bohat acha likhti hain,ye bohat hi zinda dil, respectful aur khush mizaaj bhi hain MSHAALLAH
WELCOMEEEEE SHOOO SHEET SISO :)
Hope u'll enjoy here INSHAALLAH{(popcorn)}
Inki Poetry share karti hun jo parh k bohat bohat khushi hui :)
kaha us ny btao mujh ko ye taqdeer kesi hy
k jis pe munhasir hy sb muqadar chez kesi hy
suna hy aah aansu is ka kch b kr nhi paaty
jo is pe asar krti hy bta wo chez kesi hy
kaha mae ny ye sun lo tm k insan haar jata hy
ye wo shay hy k jis pe aa k sb kch thehr jata hy
chakor oar chaand k bary mae to tm ny suna ho ga
ye mil paty nhi dekho muqadar chez aesi hy
kbhi pholoon k rangoon ko bikhair deti hy titli per
kbhi parwana jalta hy suno taqdeer aesi hy
ye sach hy aah aansu iska kuch b kr nhi paaty
jo is pe asar krti hy DUA hi chez aesi hy
KEEP writing and sharing SHweet siso :)


MashaAllah Boht hi zabardast likha hai and 100% sach dil se likha gaya hai ... Ayinda bhi likhti rahain aisii achi achi poetry .
 
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