Ghazal Competition {august 2013}

[m0hiD]

per mejy nai.......

ok mai koe aor dhoond kai kar lunga ...

 

[Azeyy]

ok mai koe aor dhoond kai kar lunga ...

ok thkzzzz bro0o0

 

[Masoom_girl]

u ko muhabbat hu b gai ha.......

tobha mujhe kise se mohabbat nahn he pagal

 

[Asma_tufail]

Aslamu Alikum TM........​

i hope sary Memberz kariyat or mazey me hogey or jo nai ha wo ab hu jaye theek....​

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so0o0 me ap logo k leye aik competion ley kr aya hu titell ce tu andaza hu raha ha k kisi​

cheez ka compeition Strt honey wala hey....​

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Starting Gazal Competition Thiz Month​

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ic thread me ap ney apni choice ki gazal post krni ha....​

Topic Is​

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MOHABBAT​

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Rules...​

1. aik member aik hi gazal post kr sakta ha....
2. dosra ye k jo gazal phely post ki gai hu koi dosra member wo gazal post ni kary ga
3. topic ce haat kr kisi ney gazal post ki tu us post ko mana nai jaye ga.... THe last date of Gazal competion iz 30/8/2013......

nicee contest Azeyy
inshALLAH me b ic ka part banoo gi

 

[N00R]

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Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi,​

Jab chand sitare chamak rahe hon,
Jab yadon k phool mehek rahe hon,
Jab deed ko nain taras rahe hon,
jab ankhon se ansu baras rahe hon,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Jab tanhai se dil ghabrae ga,
Jub tumhein akela pan sataye ga,
Jab koi khuab he na aye ga,
Jab phool kitab mein he reh jayenge,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

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@Azeyy @Asma_tufail @Mahiya @Pari @Hoorain @RedRose64 @Don​

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[Asma_tufail]

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Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi,​

Jab chand sitare chamak rahe hon,​

Jab yadon k phool mehek rahe hon,​

Jab deed ko nain taras rahe hon,​

jab ankhon se ansu baras rahe hon,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Jab tanhai se dil ghabrae ga,​

Jub tumhein akela pan sataye ga,​

Jab koi khuab he na aye ga,​

Jab phool kitab mein he reh jayenge,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

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@Azeyy @Asma_tufail @Mahiya @Pari @Hoorain @RedRose64 @Don​

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nicee best oof luck

 

[whiteros]

aap ne tareef ki hi nhi ab tak @whiteros

hahahah wo tareef he to hai dusry lafzon main....

 

[Asma_tufail]

hahahah wo tareef he to hai dusry lafzon main....

hahahhaha me b jab gazal sahre karo gi ap meri tafreef kr dena plzz

 

[whiteros]

hahahhaha me b jab gazal sahre karo gi ap meri tafreef kr dena plzz

jesi hoor ki ki hai

 

[Asma_tufail]

jesi hoor ki ki hai

hahaha @Hoorain jasi hmmmm qabool hey per diffrent style me

 

[whiteros]

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tare har ada mohabat c lagti hai​

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ik pal ki judai muddat c lagti hai​

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pehly nahin socha ab sochty hain​

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zindagi k har lamhy main​

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tare zarurat c lagti hai​

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JALDI MAIN YEHE CHHOTI C MILLI HAI ​

@Azeyy,@Hoorain,@​

chalo tareeeeeef kro​

@Asma_tufail,

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[whiteros]

hahaha @Hoorain jasi hmmmm qabool hey per diffrent style me

hahahah phir is k lie jese @Hoorain, ne dffrnt share ki u ko bhi krne pady ge janab

 

[Asma_tufail]

hahahah phir is k lie jese @Hoorain, ne dffrnt share ki u ko bhi krne pady ge janab

rules per amal krna ha diffrent hi karo gi sahring

 

[whiteros]

rules per amal krna ha diffrent hi karo gi sahring

OKKKK den hum tareeef kren gy but ap to kro na main ne jo ki us ki tareef

 

[Asma_tufail]

OKKKK den hum tareeef kren gy but ap to kro na main ne jo ki us ki tareef

ap bas tareef ke dena aschi ce meri gazal ki bas[DOUBLEPOST=1377492970][/DOUBLEPOST]

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tare har ada mohabat c lagti hai​

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ik pal ki judai muddat c lagti hai​

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pehly nahin socha ab sochty hain​

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zindagi k har lamhy main​

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tare zarurat c lagti hai​

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JALDI MAIN YEHE CHHOTI C MILLI HAI ​

@Azeyy,@Hoorain,@​

chalo tareeeeeef kro​

@Asma_tufail,

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wha wha zabardast choti ha per achi ha
itni kafi ha k or karo

 

[whiteros]

ap bas tareef ke dena aschi ce meri gazal ki bas[DOUBLEPOST=1377492970][/DOUBLEPOST]
wha wha zabardast choti ha per achi ha
itni kafi ha k or karo

krrrrrr dun ge tareef ...........wah jitn poetry hai us se bhi chhoti ki hai kunjoooson jesi .....but thanks

 

[Asma_tufail]

krrrrrr dun ge tareef ...........wah jitn poetry hai us se bhi chhoti ki hai kunjoooson jesi .....but thanks

hahahahhahaahaha yaha b kanjoosi ku????

 

[vamp545]

thanks for liking it so far guys ....[DOUBLEPOST=1377507113][/DOUBLEPOST]Tu bhi kisi ka pyar na paye khuda kare
tujh ko tera nasib rulaye khuda kare

raton mein tujh ko neend na aaye khuda kare
tu dar-ba-dar ke thokaren khaye khuda kare

aaye bahar tere gulistan mein bar bar
tujh par kabhi nikhar na aaye khuda kare

meri tarah tujhe bhi javani mein gham mile
tera na koi sath nibhaye khuda kare

manzil kabhi bhi pyar ke tujh ko na mil sake
tu bhi dua ko hath uthaye khuda kare

tujh par shab-e-visal ke raten haram hon
shammen jala jala ke bujhaye khuda kare

ho jaaye har bad dua mere yaar pe galat
aur un par kabhi aanch na aaye khudaa kare

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[Azeyy]

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tare har ada mohabat c lagti hai​

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ik pal ki judai muddat c lagti hai​

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pehly nahin socha ab sochty hain​

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zindagi k har lamhy main​

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tare zarurat c lagti hai​

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JALDI MAIN YEHE CHHOTI C MILLI HAI ​

@Azeyy,@Hoorain,@​

chalo tareeeeeef kro​

@Asma_tufail,

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good sahring

 

[Azeyy]

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Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi,​

Jab chand sitare chamak rahe hon,​

Jab yadon k phool mehek rahe hon,​

Jab deed ko nain taras rahe hon,​

jab ankhon se ansu baras rahe hon,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

Jab tanhai se dil ghabrae ga,​

Jub tumhein akela pan sataye ga,​

Jab koi khuab he na aye ga,​

Jab phool kitab mein he reh jayenge,​

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi​

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@Azeyy @Asma_tufail @Mahiya @Pari @Hoorain @RedRose64 @Don​

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good shring best o0o0o0o0o0fff luck............