afwan bhaya
haan ghaliban misra mere likhne me ghalti hogayi tasheeh karne ka shukriya.janaba waise aapke popcorn kahan gaye?
popcorn idhar hi hain
aap bhi lain gaye?
afwan bhaya
haan ghaliban misra mere likhne me ghalti hogayi tasheeh karne ka shukriya.janaba waise aapke popcorn kahan gaye?
huh huh huh huh aise karne se bhi kuch nahi milta
warna ham bhi zaroor karte
nahi mujhe mota nahi hona hai
afwan bhaya
popcorn idhar hi hain
aap bhi lain gaye?
nahi mujhe mota nahi hona hai
ahan nice reply
ye debate thread nhi warna debate hoti
maine kaha k kuch shayer aise hain jo shayri jaise azeem hunar se koi azeem kaam nhi karte maslan jaisa azeem kaam alama iqbal ne kiya
maira matlab ye k bohat se logon k paas ye azeem hunar hay par wo isse ache maqsad k liye istamal nhi kartey
ghalat tarz pe le jaatey hain
anywayz nice reply
aap se kis ne kaha k aap shayer nhi
agar shayer na hote to is thread may thori hotey
agla sawal
aaj k nojawan shayron k naam koi eham paigham ??
aap k khayal may aaj k shayron ki soch may kisi cheez ki kami hay agar hay to kia?
assalam o alaikum uncle.
main firse haazir hon chund ek sawalat k saath
1 . sher ki khaasiat bayan kijiye?
2 . ksi sher ka pahla bundh qaafia aur doosra bundh kia kahlata hai ?
3 . nazm ka maana kia hai ?
4 . ghazal kise kahte hain?
5 . urdu zuban ka pahla naam kia tha ?
is baat pe hume ek shair yaad aa gya..
jee jee apka hi asar hai inpar
2 . ksi sher ka pahla bundh qaafia aur doosra bundh kia kahlata hai ?
janab agar ghazal likh rahe hain to phir har qaafia ki last line Radeef hogi
is sawal ki muje smjh nhi aayi..
mere khayal me sawal ye hona chaheye tha k ghazal ka pehla shair to matla hota hai last kon sa hota hai? jise maqta kehte hain..hai na..
shair k to dono misre hi hote hain na...wese ye qafia to ghazal me aane wale hum'awaz or hum'wazn alfaz hote hain jo shair k radeef se pehle aate hain or radeef qafia k bad bar bar aane wala lazf hota hai..kya khayal hai ap ka?
haan ghaliban misra mere likhne me ghalti hogayi tasheeh karne ka shukriya.janaba waise aapke popcorn kahan gaye?
ye ham kya sun rahe hain hoorain aur kisi aur ko popcorn zaroor kuch gadhbar hai
afwan bhaya
popcorn idhar hi hain
aap bhi lain gaye?
hamne kya kiya
hahaha
jab kuch milta nhi to kiya q
nahi mujhe mota nahi hona hai
oooooopsh jo dara wo gya
jaise aapki marzi
main ek ghante k liye gaib kya huvi yahan se...yahan to halat hi badle pare hain...