!! ~~ Bait Bazi ~~ !!

[KhursheedAlam]

Ab Ye Aalam Hai Ke Tanhai Se Hum Tang Aa Kar
Khud Hi Darwaze Ki Zanjeer Hila Detay Hain…
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n

 

[vamp545]

Aapse kya rishta hai kabse hai ye maalum nahi

Bas is husn par marr mitne ko ji chahta hai

 

[vamp545]

Next line is I

 

[DesiGirl]

Next line is I

bait bazi urdu mein hy tu yeh guide kar dain ky yahan HAI ka "YEY" ho ga ya "I"???

 

[KhursheedAlam]

Hum Ko Aata Hi Nahi Zakhmo'n Ki Numayish Karna.
Khud Hi Rote Hain,Tadapte Hain Aur Sambhal Jate Hain..

.

N

 

[DesiGirl]

نامہ گیا کوئی نہ کوئی نامہ بر گیا
تیری خبر نہ آئی زمانہ گزر گیا​

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[vamp545]

Aasani se jo koi mil jaaye to woh kismat ki baat hai


Aye dost


Sooli par chhadh kar bhi jo na mile use mohabbat kahete hain

Noon

 

[KhursheedAlam]

Na Dena Khat Mera Qaasid Bas Itna Kah Dena,
Jise Tum Bhool Baithe Ho Wo Aksar Yaad Karta Hai.
.
Use H (Urdu "Hai")

 

[DesiGirl]

Na Dena Khat Mera Qaasid Bas Itna Kah Dena,
Jise Tum Bhool Baithe Ho Wo Aksar Yaad Karta Hai.
.
Use H (Urdu "Hai")

as per rules of Bait-Bazi it should b "yey"

 

[vamp545]

Hum kisi tarah tere dar pe thikana kar lein,

Hum faqiron ko ye aadaab kahan aate hain,

Noon

 

[Manxil]

na kr nahi nahi ye waqt nahi nahi ka
teri is nahi nahi ny, mujhe chora nahi kehin ka

a

 

[KhursheedAlam]

Aaj Ki Raat Bhi Mumkin Hai Ke Main So Na Sakun,
Yaad Fir Aaye Hain Neendo'n Ko Udaane Waale...
.
E

 

[vamp545]

Ek woh jin ke liye tufaan kinarey ban gaye,

Ek hum jin ki kismat mein kahin saahil na tha .

NEXT LINE IS 'ALIF''

 

[DesiGirl]

اس نگر میں قیام ایسا ہے
جیسے بے انت پانیوں میں سفر​

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[vamp545]

Rakh le kal ke liye ye doosri paazeb bhi,
Kal is bazm mein phir aane ko jee chahta hai.

Bekhabar soye hain vo lootke neenden hamari,
Jazba-e-dil pe taras khane ko jee chahta hai.

Next is I

 

[DesiGirl]

@vamp545 kyun ky shairi urdu ki ho rai hy is liye i think urdu alphabets shud be used for reference is liye "yey" use kerna behtar hy "I" sy...

 

[KhursheedAlam]

Ya to un ka tazkira karay har koi,
Ya koi hum se guftagu na karae..

.

E

 

[vamp545]

@vamp545 kyun ky shairi urdu ki ho rai hy is liye i think urdu alphabets shud be used for reference is liye "yey" use kerna behtar hy "I" sy...

Agree ab khus last lafz hain Urdu mein samjh lo ya eng mein likh lo

 

[vamp545]

E bole to "aein" naa

 

[vamp545]

Ek nazar dekh meri inteha-e-mohabbat ki taraf


Aye jaan


Maine dil de kharidaa hai guma-e-tanhayi ko

Next is o ya و