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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Auron se jung mein apne hi armaan kha gaye

Auron se jung mein apne hi armaan kha gaye
khatir e shouq bech kar jeene ke saman kha gaye

faqat eik riyasat ki khaatir aye shaqhs e bad bakht
ke gin bhi na sako tum itne insaan kha gaye

tum ho jo shehr e rounaq ko hi tareek kar gaye
aise bhi loug the jo aate hi aalam e sunsan kha gaye

darandagi ne teri ab is qadar tujhe hai dhaanpa
mehlon tak tha theek tum to shehr ke qabristan kha gaye

sabab e be dardi be namazi o jahalat ke hum watnon
ke jaise tum achhe sarbaraah aane ke amkaan kha gaye

apne jaison ke liye kaiin mehelein janameen chiragH
hum saade logon ke bane huwe makaan kha gaye

***S_ChiragH***
 

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Auron se jung mein apne hi armaan kha gaye

Auron se jung mein apne hi armaan kha gaye
khatir e shouq bech kar jeene ke saman kha gaye

faqat eik riyasat ki khaatir aye shaqhs e bad bakht
ke gin bhi na sako tum itne insaan kha gaye

tum ho jo shehr e rounaq ko hi tareek kar gaye
aise bhi loug the jo aate hi aalam e sunsan kha gaye

darandagi ne teri ab is qadar tujhe hai dhaanpa
mehlon tak tha theek tum to shehr ke qabristan kha gaye

sabab e be dardi be namazi o jahalat ke hum watnon
ke jaise tum achhe sarbaraah aane ke amkaan kha gaye

apne jaison ke liye kaiin mehelein janameen chiragH
hum saade logon ke bane huwe makaan kha gaye

***S_ChiragH***
Bhout Khoob :)
 

Zee Leo

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buhat he umdah poetry likhi hai janab . buhat he heart touching hai . Allah hum sub ki hifazat karey Aameen :)
 
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Ahan ....acha likha hai janab ne....
Sur aur Taal ka khyal rakha karen....:p

Har waqt aankh rakhti hai tanqeedi apni Bahaar
Warna to is forum p akar log kya kya kha gaye....

Bahtreen tanbheehi islaahi kalaam apka Chiragh..likhte rahe aur humse daad hasil karte rahen..
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Ahan ....acha likha hai janab ne....
Sur aur Taal ka khyal rakha karen....:p

Har waqt aankh rakhti hai tanqeedi apni Bahaar
Warna to is forum p akar log kya kya kha gaye....

Bahtreen tanbheehi islaahi kalaam apka Chiragh..likhte rahe aur humse daad hasil karte rahen..

Shukria shukria tanqeed aur daad ka waise bukhar mein likha tha yeh
us waqt apne bhi haal o chaal ka khayal na tha LoLz to sur taal kya cheezein hain
{)^})
 
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