ae chand

[Asma24]

me her shab dhoondta hoon

wo khuwab jesa chehera

tujhse bht milta julta hy

wo khuwab jesa chehra

kuch to tha uski gumsum nigahon k peche

mehfil me b tha tanha

wo khuwab jesa chehra

begana magr kuch kuch apna sa laga wo

sach b tha magr sapna sa laga wo

hogya jske naam ye mera dil

bht khoobsurat tha

wo khuwab jesa chehra

usko likhta hoon me ab subho sham kitabon me

kahin na kahin hy chupa aks mere alfzon me

meri her shayeri ka unwan bangya

wo khuwab jesa chehra

wo khuwab jesa chehra


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[NamaL]

nice sharing asma sisoooooooooooo

 

[TM~NuJiN~TM]

nice sharing asma sis
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[Asma24]

thanxxx bp sisooooooooooooooo

 

[Asma24]

thanxx junaid

 

[faari]

wo masoom sa chehra nice sharing

 

[*khushi*]

very nice poetry

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

GreaT sharing Aaso baji

 

[Hoorain]

ahaaaan beautifulll bohat paali nazam

i really liked it

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Oohhoo Aaso baji abhi dekha aap ki apni
poetry hai mene socha aise hi sharing hai

waah baji waah behadd umdah likha hai aap ne

likhte rahiye

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Well Done , bohat khoob

Kiya Umdaha likha hy patar patar

May Allah Bless You (Ameen)

 

[*Sonu*]

wow beautifully written asma bajoo
keep it up

 

[saviou]

waah ji kya baat hai
wo khwab jaisa chera
umeed karte hain ye khwab jaise chehra haqeeqat ka bhi kabhi samna karle

 

[Asma24]

wo masoom sa chehra nice sharing

thankuuuuuuuuuuuu sisooooo

 

[Asma24]

very nice poetry

thanxxxx dear khushi

 

[Asma24]

ahaaaan beautifulll bohat paali nazam

i really liked it

aweee thanxxxxxxxx alot sisoo hoorian

 

[Asma24]

Oohhoo Aaso baji abhi dekha aap ki apni
poetry hai mene socha aise hi sharing hai

waah baji waah behadd umdah likha hai aap ne

likhte rahiye

hian?pehle comments kch aur the ab kuch aur hian..hhe chalo koi bat nahi chigoo bhaiya ..mujhe pata hy ap meri poetry k fan ho thanxxxxxxxxx alot dear

 

[Asma24]

Well Done , bohat khoob

Kiya Umdaha likha hy patar patar

May Allah Bless You (Ameen)

aweeee paaaaaa jeee thanxxxxxxxxx alot bhaiiiiiiiiiiii so nice of u {(dancing)}

 

[Asma24]

wow beautifully written asma bajoo
keep it up

aweee thankuu soooooooo much sona

 

[Asma24]

waah ji kya baat hai
wo khwab jaisa chera
umeed karte hain ye khwab jaise chehra haqeeqat ka bhi kabhi samna karle

aah wo to kab ka agya reality me
thanxx alot janab