~*Aaye kaash koi Ussey Bataye*~

[~Bahaar~]

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Aaye kaash koi ussey bataye

Ik pagal LArki raat raat bhar

Ankhoon mein intezaar ke deep jalaye

Karti rehta hai Us Ka intezaar

Uskey laut aney ka..

Jo gya hai to saath apney

Saari khushiyan bhi le gya hai

Saari khwahishein bhi ley gya hai

Saari tammanaein bhi ley gya hai

Aur mujhey thama gya hai

Ik na khatam honey wala intezaar

Ik waada jo sadiyan guzarney ke baad bhi

Pora honey ke intezaar mei hai

Ik umeed ke jo toot-ti bhi nhi

Ik udaas zindgi

Jo rooth-ti bhi nhi....!

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[mashraki.larka]

...naish

 

[Hans_Mukh]

aub app k in jaazbaat ki aik he bunda akasi ker sakta hy per pata nahi wo kub aye ga

any way bohat he umda sharing hy

 

[Asma24]

aweee very touching and sweeet poetry ...

 

[Wasif Safi]

inni emotional poetry Baharu, kyu kya baat hai..?

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Saade alfaz mein pyari sharing bohot hi khoobsurat

 

[~Bahaar~]

Bahut bahut shukrya pasand karne ka saathyio

 

[~Bahaar~]

aub app k in jaazbaat ki aik he bunda akasi ker sakta hy per pata nahi wo kub aye ga

any way bohat he umda sharing hy

lollz bhayi...kon hai wo?

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Bata do sub ku Dr. Saheba ({kopping)}

 

[NamaL]

nice sharing heart touching

 

[~Bahaar~]

Bata do sub ku Dr. Saheba ({kopping)}

Pata nahi aap kya kahrahe ho...apun ki kuch samjh nahi aiyng...

 

[~Bahaar~]

nice sharing heart touching

Thankooo siss

 

[Dawn]

aub app k in jaazbaat ki aik he bunda akasi ker sakta hy per pata nahi wo kub aye ga

any way bohat he umda sharing hy

sajid bhai aapne shayed parha nahi wo banda aake bhi chala gaya baharo yaadein thama k

shayed aapne likhi hai bahaar ye tabhi to isme jazbaon ka ehsaas nazar aata hai.bahot khoob likha
bus yahan thodi si likhne me ghalti ki aapne isse kuch is tarha likhna chahiye tha.

Karti rehta hai Us Ka intezaar
karti rahti hai us ka intezaar.

 

[~Bahaar~]

Haaiy o Rabbaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ye kya hoing?
Thz iz not my shayeri logooo

 

[Pari]

nice sharing

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

ahan!
nice
khud likhi ha?

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

nice

 

[Zee Leo]

good one

 

[Asma Shah]

nice hai....bas aik jaga choti si mistake hai,try kren k wo b na hua kren,taaky poetry ko aik tasalsul k sath parhne mn maza ay...mind mat krna k mne mistake mention ki...ok...

 

[~Bahaar~]

Thanxxx All of you but ye meri likhi hui nahi hai...