Aao Tumhari Yaad Aati Hai Mujhe

[فہد]

nhi nhi shaklan bewaqof ho sakta hn per aqlan bewaqof nhi hon jo shairy b sunaon or shayer ka name apna na btaon

 

[faari]

buhat achi likhi hai dear but esa kuch hai is me jo ap ko baad me pm kru gi great

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nhi nhi shaklan bewaqof ho sakta hn per aqlan bewaqof nhi hon jo shairy b sunaon or shayer ka name apna na btaon

Chalo agar isme aqalmandi aap samajhte ho to kar lo per aisa hai nahin

buhat achi likhi hai dear but esa kuch hai is me jo ap ko baad me pm kru gi great

Bohot bohot shukria Sweety hummm ok aap ne bol diya hai I got that point

 

[AnadiL]

Bohat h pyaari gazal hai....
toooo gooood.
n too romantic bhi

 

[shailina]

ahan......
nice one

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohat h pyaari gazal hai....
toooo gooood.
n too romantic bhi

Bohot bohot shukria
thanksss
awwww sho shweet of you [DOUBLEPOST=1357897270][/DOUBLEPOST]

ahan......
nice one

Thankyou so much @lotr ........

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

maine to bas poocha hi hay bhateejey

oyee bhateeja hoga tumhara mirza ghalib mai nahi hon.... aur pooocho balkeh tafseel se poocho per ghaltian nikalney ka kaam ker ke to mirza ghalib ki phupho he ban gayi naa

 

[*Sonu*]

nish one !​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nish one !​

Thankyou sho much !!

 

[Rubi]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston aap subke khidmat me​

apne eik naye ghazal ke saath hazir hoon garche ye ghazal​

kuch waqt purani hai magar mujhe is waqt ise share​

karna doosre ghazalon ke nisbat se behetter laga​

so is thread ka maqsad us aashiq pe mabni hai​

jo ghum e sanam me choor hai​

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aur apne mehbooba ko shiddat se yaad karke​

use apne paas paana chahta hai​

INSHA'ALLAH umeedan aap subko ghazal pasand aayegi​

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Aao tumhari yaad aati hai mujhe​

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Aao ke tumhari yaad aati hai mujhe​

kami teri har pal sataati hai mujhe​

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shayad tum na hi maano per chaand​

har shab teri surat dikhati hai mujhe​

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subh ko tamam chirion ki chehek​

naam har baar tera sunati hai mujhe​

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aao ke tum bin jeena muhaal hai​

aao ke doori bohot tarpati hai mujhe​

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aao ke ye jeena hai sirf naam ka​

tum bin khushi kahan bhati hai mujhe​

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ghum e firaq se jab choor hota hoon​

aankh hisab e ashk bahati hai mujhe​

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sota hoon to tere khwab ke aasre se​

subh ko milan ki aas jagati hai mujhe​

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ab aa bhi jao jaan ke har shaam​

teri kami ik naiy aag jalait hai mujhe​

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***S_Chiragh***​

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Walaikumsalam​

hmmm achi hy​

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Keep sharing​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Walaikumsalam​

hmmm achi hy​

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Keep sharing​

Hummmm bohot bohot shukria​

INSHA'ALLAH I'll share more .​

 

[sabha_khan40]

bhoot nice..........................

 

[Armaghankhan]

NICE

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thanks to both for liking my poetry : )

 

[Ravia]

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston aap subke khidmat me​

apne eik naye ghazal ke saath hazir hoon garche ye ghazal​

kuch waqt purani hai magar mujhe is waqt ise share​

karna doosre ghazalon ke nisbat se behetter laga​

so is thread ka maqsad us aashiq pe mabni hai​

jo ghum e sanam me choor hai​

​

aur apne mehbooba ko shiddat se yaad karke​

use apne paas paana chahta hai​

INSHA'ALLAH umeedan aap subko ghazal pasand aayegi​

​

Aao tumhari yaad aati hai mujhe​

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Aao ke tumhari yaad aati hai mujhe​

kami teri har pal sataati hai mujhe​

​

shayad tum na hi maano per chaand​

har shab teri surat dikhati hai mujhe​

​

subh ko tamam chirion ki chehek​

naam har baar tera sunati hai mujhe​

​

aao ke tum bin jeena muhaal hai​

aao ke doori bohot tarpati hai mujhe​

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aao ke ye jeena hai sirf naam ka​

tum bin khushi kahan bhati hai mujhe​

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ghum e firaq se jab choor hota hoon​

aankh hisab e ashk bahati hai mujhe​

​

sota hoon to tere khwab ke aasre se​

subh ko milan ki aas jagati hai mujhe​

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ab aa bhi jao jaan ke har shaam​

teri kami ik naiy aag jalait hai mujhe​

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***S_Chiragh***​

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bahot khoob ​

Nicely written..!​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bahot khoob ​

Nicely written..!​

Bohot bohot shukria @Ravia

 

[sabha_khan40]

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

 

[Azeyy]

very niceeee... bahot khooob

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Shukria pasand karne ka @azeyy .