Zindagi ki manzil hai numaya mujh ko

[Wasif Safi]

Assalamualaikum Warehmatullahi Wabarkaatahu Doston...
Bohot dinon baad apni ek tooti phooti ghazal pesh kar raha hu, pasand na bhi aayi to comment zaroor karen

Zindagi ki manzil hai numaya mujh ko
safar nahi kat'ta jo dikhaya mujh ko


veeran hai safar-e-manzil bhi bohot
manzil ki chah ne chalaya mujh ko


Zarf hai mera chattan ke maanind,
sheher-e-khush-fehmiyon ne yun rukaya mujh ko


dunya to hai ek dikhawe ka marasim,
piche to sab hi ne yun dhaya hai mujh ko

Ibne-e-adam hu, badkaar hu, gunahgaar hu
teri rehmaton ne phir bhi sukoon dilaya mujh ko


nikal paro apni manzil ki taraf Safi tum,
Bharosa hi RAB ka yun aage barhaya hai mujh ko..​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam bhai jan
masha'ALLAH behadd zabardast ghazal hai
aapke aksar ashaar me eik gehraiy hoti hai
i like this thing in poetryz bro
mujhe pasand aaiy bohot bohot
aage bhi likhte aur share karte raiyega insha'ALLAH

mein bhi kuch ashaar shamil kar raha hoon
umeed hai insha'ALLAH aap ko pasand aayengeen bhai

kabhi baat dikhaawe tak rakhi mehdood
kabhi raaz chupa huwa samjhaya mujh ko

zarurat ne to KHUDA tak rakha tha qaayam
shoq e dunya ne kya kya dar dikhaya mujh ko

mein nadaan auron ko deta raha doush bohot
dar asal apne khwahishon ne tarpaaya mujh ko

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko

ab bana hoon laash to kahun kis liye kaash..?
buraiy ki tabhi shayateen ne apnaya mujh ko

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[Asma Shah]

wah wah MASHAA ALLAH...BHT UMDAA KOSHISH HAI..agay b aise hi jari rkho safi......INSHAA ALLAH zarur kamyab ho jao gy....

 

[Asma Shah]

Wa'alaikum assalam bhai jan
masha'ALLAH behadd zabardast ghazal hai
aapke aksar ashaar me eik gehraiy hoti hai
i like this thing in poetryz bro
mujhe pasand aaiy bohot bohot
aage bhi likhte aur share karte raiyega insha'ALLAH

mein bhi kuch ashaar shamil kar raha hoon
umeed hai insha'ALLAH aap ko pasand aayengeen bhai

kabhi baat dikhaawe tak rakhi mehdood
kabhi raaz chupa huwa samjhaya mujh ko

zarurat ne to KHUDA tak rakha tha qaayam
shoq e dunya ne kya kya dar dikhaya mujh ko

mein nadaan auron ko deta raha doush bohot
dar asal apne khwahishon ne tarpaaya mujh ko

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko

ab bana hoon laash to kahun kis liye kaash..?
buraiy ki tabhi shayateen ne apnaya mujh ko

***S_ChiragH***​

wah wah kiaa baat hai........

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah wah kiaa baat hai........

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko​

Shukria shukria

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

Gud waisf

 

[Zee Leo]

Ibne-e-adam hu, badkaar hu, gunahgaar hu
teri rehmaton ne phir bhi sukoon dilaya mujh ko

very well done . buhat he ala

 

[Qawareer]

wssalam u aliakum

Ibne-e-adam hu, badkaar hu, gunahgaar hu
teri rehmaton ne phir bhi sukoon dilaya mujh ko
boht khoob..!

 

[HuriYa]

Wah bOhat khOob..! Hamesha ki Terah bOhat Zaberdast Likha hay Bhiya..!

I really Like yOur pOetry Jis main hamesha aak acha Msg aur Depth hOte hay.

keep writin mOre.

 

[HuriYa]

Wa'alaikum assalam bhai jan
masha'ALLAH behadd zabardast ghazal hai
aapke aksar ashaar me eik gehraiy hoti hai
i like this thing in poetryz bro
mujhe pasand aaiy bohot bohot
aage bhi likhte aur share karte raiyega insha'ALLAH

mein bhi kuch ashaar shamil kar raha hoon
umeed hai insha'ALLAH aap ko pasand aayengeen bhai

kabhi baat dikhaawe tak rakhi mehdood
kabhi raaz chupa huwa samjhaya mujh ko

zarurat ne to KHUDA tak rakha tha qaayam
shoq e dunya ne kya kya dar dikhaya mujh ko

mein nadaan auron ko deta raha doush bohot
dar asal apne khwahishon ne tarpaaya mujh ko

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko

ab bana hoon laash to kahun kis liye kaash..?
buraiy ki tabhi shayateen ne apnaya mujh ko

***S_ChiragH***​

bOhat khOob..!

 

[jazzmish]

nyc...........

 

[*Sonu*]

walikum salam
beautifully written bro
keep it up

 

[Atif-adi]

zaberdast

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Bohat zabardast Safi Bhai

and saif bhai app ka izaafa be kabaly tareef hy

May Allah Bless both of u (Ameen)

 

[mirza37]

wah wah MASHAA ALLAH...BHT UMDAA KOSHISH HAI..agay b aise hi jari rkho safi......INSHAA ALLAH zarur kamyab ho jao gy...
tm main bery bery poet nazer aaing weldone kaka gii,

 

[Wasif Safi]

Wa'alaikum assalam bhai jan
masha'ALLAH behadd zabardast ghazal hai
aapke aksar ashaar me eik gehraiy hoti hai
i like this thing in poetryz bro
mujhe pasand aaiy bohot bohot
aage bhi likhte aur share karte raiyega insha'ALLAH

mein bhi kuch ashaar shamil kar raha hoon
umeed hai insha'ALLAH aap ko pasand aayengeen bhai

kabhi baat dikhaawe tak rakhi mehdood
kabhi raaz chupa huwa samjhaya mujh ko

zarurat ne to KHUDA tak rakha tha qaayam
shoq e dunya ne kya kya dar dikhaya mujh ko

mein nadaan auron ko deta raha doush bohot
dar asal apne khwahishon ne tarpaaya mujh ko

mere imaan ne eik se darne ka kaha tha
mere harkaton ne har eik se daraya mujh ko

ab bana hoon laash to kahun kis liye kaash..?
buraiy ki tabhi shayateen ne apnaya mujh ko

***S_ChiragH***​

Bohot bohot shukriya Saif lekin aapke jitni achi to nahi kar sakta shayari mai

 

[Wasif Safi]

wah wah MASHAA ALLAH...BHT UMDAA KOSHISH HAI..agay b aise hi jari rkho safi......INSHAA ALLAH zarur kamyab ho jao gy....

Insha'ALLAH koshish karta rahunga aage bhi kuch tuta phuta share karne ki

 

[Wasif Safi]

Gud waisf

Thankooo Cilli Milli

 

[Wasif Safi]

Ibne-e-adam hu, badkaar hu, gunahgaar hu
teri rehmaton ne phir bhi sukoon dilaya mujh ko

very well done . buhat he ala

JazakALLAH Khair Zee Bro, shukriya sarhane ke liye..

 

[Wasif Safi]

wssalam u aliakum

Ibne-e-adam hu, badkaar hu, gunahgaar hu
teri rehmaton ne phir bhi sukoon dilaya mujh ko
boht khoob..!

JazakALLAH Khair Behna...