ZiNDAGi EK PAHELi - by ADi

[Atif-adi]

ahem ahem naish

thanku

 

[Atif-adi]

ahan adi bht nice ha.....
keep it up........

thnx beli

 

[Atif-adi]

Nice one bro, asusual awsome designing wid great poetry..
Aapki designing per to koi naam bhi nahi raksakta bro Masha'ALLAh se... great efforts

aww thanku bro bas ap logo ki hi appreciation ki waja se hum or bhi agey poetry likhenge

 

[Zee Leo]

lols han

 

[Atif-adi]

kehte kyu hain sab is ko zindagi
jab is ne sabhi ki jan le li hai
nice poetry adi superb job

thanku faari

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

hmmm very nice ustaad jeee .... yeah wali kaala nahi sikhae naa aap ne mere ko

 

[whiteros]

kehty q hain sab is ko zindagi
kb is ne sab ki jaan le li hai
WOW BOHAT KHOOB
ZABARDAST

 

[Prince-Farry]

bohot hi acha likha hai BUDDY
aur sachi baat hai.....

 

[Atif-adi]

hmmm very nice ustaad jeee .... yeah wali kaala nahi sikhae naa aap ne mere ko

hihi shagird g sikh jaoge u bih

 

[Atif-adi]

kehty q hain sab is ko zindagi
kb is ne sab ki jaan le li hai
WOW BOHAT KHOOB
ZABARDAST

thanku

 

[Atif-adi]

bohot hi acha likha hai BUDDY
aur sachi baat hai.....

han buddy bas zindagi ko dhudne ki koshish me ye likh di

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

hihi shagird g sikh jaoge u bih

per kaise ilhaaaam hona mai ko koi....

 

[Atif-adi]

per kaise ilhaaaam hona mai ko koi....

ye to mujhe bhi nai pata buddy

 

[lavina]

Adi very nice and touching lines

 

[Umm-e-ahmad]

Zabardast.....

 

[mahrosh_kanwal]

its very nice bhaiya

 

[Rubi]

wow zbrdst
designing bhi achi hy n poetry bhi

 

[~Bahaar~]

waaah ji kya baat hai apki!!!
MashAllah....behtreen andaz e bayan simple words me..
By the Way konsi zindagi?

 

[Atif-adi]

waaah ji kya baat hai apki!!!
MashAllah....behtreen andaz e bayan simple words me..
By the Way konsi zindagi?

zindagi to zindagi hoti hai kunsi kya

 

[~Bahaar~]

hahahha lols....likhte rahen...acha likha hai