Yaad by db

[Dreamy Boy]

Asalam o Alaikum TM

Aj maine apne ek choti si koshish ki hai yai poem likh kar umeed hai ap sb ko pasand ayege


YAAD

Ati hai jb bhe un ki yaad
Kar kai apne ankhen band
Sub kuch bhula kai
Sirf unhe ko sochte hain hum
Unko maloom bhe nahe
Un ki yaad mai yai dil kitna roota hai
Tanha raatun main yai dil khon kai anso peeta hai
Apne dil ka haal unhe batayen kaise
Karta hai dil unhe yaad bohat batayen kaise
Dil tu dil hai is ko samjhana mushkil hai
Jb sai bane un ki yaad apne zindage
Tu bhala zindage kai bina reh pana kaise mumkin hai
Ek umeed hai un sai ek arzoo bhe hai
Karen wo bhe hame yaad kise bahane sai
Log aksar pochten hain hum sai udasi ki wajah
Hum muskuraten hain aur dil mai roten hain
Aao dosto suno ek raaz ki baat
Kise ko yaad karne sai koi apna nahe hota
Jo ho apna wo kbhe door nahe hota
Karega wo bhe hame dil sai yaad ek din
Jb yai deewana duniya sai chala jayega...


KUCH KAMI HO TU ZARROR BATAYEGA
​

 

[~Bahaar~]

wwoowoowww....
Zabardast=D>=D>
Bahut Umdaa....
aapke kalaam se dil k jazbaat ayan hote hain
is tarha kisi dil k dard bahut kam bayan hote hain
​

 

[Dreamy Boy]

wwoowoowww....
Zabardast=D>=D>
Bahut Umdaa....
aapke kalaam se dil k jazbaat ayan hote hain
is tarha kisi dil k dard bahut kam bayan hote hain
​

Shukriya Bahar
And specially Thanks 2 u

 

[~Bahaar~]

u r welcome DB always

 

[Nelly]

nice db

 

[Dreamy Boy]

nice db

Shukriya Nelli

 

[Tariq Saeed]

ahan........ nice one DB
keep it up

 

[Dreamy Boy]

sHUKRIYA tARIQ bhai

 

[Nelly]

Welcum

 

[cute bhoot]

bohat khoob

 

[mirza37]

yeh mujy sub say zayda acha laga db br,

Aao dosto suno ek raaz ki baat
Kise ko yaad karne sai koi apna nahe hota
Jo ho apna wo kbhe door nahe hota
Karega wo bhe hame dil sai yaad ek din
Jb yai deewana duniya sai chala jayega...

 

[mirza37]

thanks db for nice sharing keep it up br.,,

 

[Dreamy Boy]

bohat khoob

tHANKS BRO

 

[Dreamy Boy]

yeh mujy sub say zayda acha laga db br,

Aao dosto suno ek raaz ki baat
Kise ko yaad karne sai koi apna nahe hota
Thank u so Much bro
Jo ho apna wo kbhe door nahe hota
Karega wo bhe hame dil sai yaad ek din
Jb yai deewana duniya sai chala jayega...

 

[Dreamy Boy]

thanks db for nice sharing keep it up br.,,

Thank U so Much BRO

 

[saviou]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb

Masha Allah kya baat hai bro aap to bohot ache shayar hain

bohot achi koshish ki hai apne insha Allah likhte rahiye khud usme wazan ajayega

bohot hi umdah bro par ye kiski yaad hai ye to batayen ?

 

[Amreen]

nice poetry DB bohat hi achi koshish ki hai aapne...Keep it up...ummed hai aage bhi aap yun hi likhte rahenge or humein parhne or tareefen kerne ka moqa denge...=D>

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb

Masha Allah kya baat hai bro aap to bohot ache shayar hain


bohot achi koshish ki hai apne insha Allah likhte rahiye khud usme wazan ajayega

bohot hi umdah bro par ye kiski yaad hai ye to batayen ?

Shukriya bro pasand karne ka Aj HAME apne dost ki bohat yaad a rahe the tu unhe ko zehan mai rakhte hue yai likha aur hum nai apne dost ko bhe dikhaye yai unhe bohat pasand aye

 

[cute bhoot]

tHANKS BRO

u welcome

 

[Dreamy Boy]

nice poetry DB bohat hi achi koshish ki hai aapne...Keep it up...ummed hai aage bhi aap yun hi likhte rahenge or humein parhne or tareefen kerne ka moqa denge...=D>

Bohat bohat shukriya Amreen InshAllah