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wowww... that was much much better sharing than the previous one..

SUPERBBBB!!! zabardast.. is main sher o shairi ky aksar adaab ka poora poora khiyal rakha gia hy ;-)

khas ker.. waqfa boht zabardast use karty ho aap like in "chorh dunya ky jhamailon ko... amal karty hein" jesy last three words ko last misra ki bajaay first misra sy connect kia.. mazydaar!!!

way to go :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd

sachi baat hy aap ny jo pehl ghazal likhi thi mujhy afsos hoa tha ky KION likhi thi :D

mager yeh ghazal dekh ker ehsaas hoa ky banda ghaltion sy he tu seekhta hy hehehe
 
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DesiGirl said:
wowww... that was much much better sharing than the previous one..

SUPERBBBB!!! zabardast.. is main sher o shairi ky aksar adaab ka poora poora khiyal rakha gia hy ;-)

khas ker.. waqfa boht zabardast use karty ho aap like in "chorh dunya ky jhamailon ko... amal karty hein" jesy last three words ko last misra ki bajaay first misra sy connect kia.. mazydaar!!!

way to go :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd :-bd

sachi baat hy aap ny jo pehl ghazal likhi thi mujhy afsos hoa tha ky KION likhi thi :D

mager yeh ghazal dekh ker ehsaas hoa ky banda ghaltion sy he tu seekhta hy hehehe
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is par to mera sharmana banta hi hey :)



bahut shukriyaa.. kasam se aur kisi se kuch b sun lo.. aap ke anylisis ka shiddat se intezar rehta he ..
muje khushi hui ke .. aap ka afsos Kuch to kam huaa.. :D magar jese me ne kaha.. rawani nahi rahi.. aur.. agar kuch likhney baitho to .. alfaaz sath nahi detty.. yeh wali.. lolzz.. ab kya kahon.. khud ke aas paas se hi alfaaz aur.. jazbat chun liyee :) ..
jo technicalities aap ne point out kin.. us ke liye mashkoor hon :)
jee aur .. inshAlalh. ghaltion se seekhney ki bharpoor koshish rahy gi.. par .. janey kab tak :)

phir se shukriyaa :)
 
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DesiGirl said:
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm acha ji :D

thanx for liking comments and keep poetic :p
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aap jaisey log to sarmaya hoty hen.. wo khazana nahi jo banks me ya lockers me chupaa ke rakha jata he .. balkey wo sarmaya jo abhi ooper aap ne muj par nichawar kiya he.. :D to na like karney ka to sawal hi nahi :D

bas aisey hi himmat badhati rehiye :D
 
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Prince-Farry said:
ap kehte hein to theek hai :p
btw very well written....{(dance)}
...socha apko pher se kuch dedicate kardoon..par abhi neend mei hon to pher kabhi :p
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bahut shukriyaa for kind words..

koi bata nahi.. my doors r always open :) feel free to step in anytime u want :)
 
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