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hahahahah awesomeeeeeee maine puri story unki voices mai parhi lol
and i liked the idea jiski dialogues hai unke pics saath mai bhi lagaye hai that was a smart move ;)
bhtttttttt zabardast likha hai @Ayat and @Rubi :-bd
ALL THE BEST {(giveheart)}[DOUBLEPOST=1362072658][/DOUBLEPOST]

hahahah that was my fav line :p
and thanksssssssss :x

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read the story plz
@eXcalibuR @DuFFer @Nelly @ChoCo @hoorain @masoom_se_chahat @Redvirus @ADVENTURER242 @saviou

thank you soooo much faith sis :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362121312][/DOUBLEPOST]
wowww boht hi zabardast gud luck[DOUBLEPOST=1362073224][/DOUBLEPOST]

wowwwwwwwwwww faithuuu yaqin nhi arha u ne itna sara likh lya
by the way boht acha likha u ne best of luck
thank you so much ![DOUBLEPOST=1362121404][/DOUBLEPOST]
hahah thanks Mate :D ... faith tareef ki ziyada haqdar hai ;) {(popcorn)}[DOUBLEPOST=1362081626][/DOUBLEPOST]

hahaha
Thanksh twin :D ..
lol :D :D acp :mad: se badi chid hai is liye bas {()|dddd[DOUBLEPOST=1362084786][/DOUBLEPOST]

hahaha nice boht achaay @Rubi and @Aayat :D ...
bht bht shukriyaaa apka :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362121465][/DOUBLEPOST]
lol Wow zabardast :-bd all the best {}{43r5

lol too good :p zabardast maza aa gya :D koi bat nhi iss ki epi. bhi tou 1 hour ki hoti hai na :p baki tou half hour k hoty hai :D so dont worry

all the best @kool~nomi & @Fa!th {}{43r5[DOUBLEPOST=1362094494][/DOUBLEPOST]
hahahah mujy pata chl gya hai ye creativity kis ki hai :D
thank youuuuu sisi:)[DOUBLEPOST=1362122070][/DOUBLEPOST]

And The Next Morning



Daya :- Sirrrrrrrrrrr Aapko Yeh Awaz Sunayi Di

Acp :- *Gets Suspicious* Kaisi Awaz Daya/:)

Daya :- Sir Mujhay Lagta Hai aapke pait mai Jerry Doud Rahay hain Us Ki Awaz Hai yeh

Acp :-:s... Is Ka Matlab Samjhay Daya:|

Daya :- Sir Matlab Simple Hai Kay Ab Aap Bhookay Nangon Ki tarah Khana Khana Chahtay hain:D...

Nashta Karnay kay Baad

Acp :- Daya Mere Khayal Me Ab Hum Jis Maqsad Kay Liye Ayein Hain Us Kay Liye Kaam Start Karain

Daya :- Haan Sir Hume Investigation Jaari Rakhna Chahiye Sabse Pehle Hume Yaha K Manager Se Milna Hoga

Acp :- Daya Likin Yeh Manager Hume Milega Kaha:-?

Daya :- Grocery Shop Mai:|

Acp :- Daya Yeh Manager Hotel Ka Hai Ya Grocery shop ka:| UDHAR kiya kar raha hai woh bhangi :))

Daya :- Sir is Ka Matlab Samjhay aap

Acp :- Is Ka Matlab Yeh Hai Kay Woh Manager Honay Kay Sath Sath Bhangi Bhi Hai Aur Part Time Me Safayi Bhi Karta Hai Shops Ki

Daya :- Indeeeeeed Sir:|, Aur Woh Safayi Kay Doran Jasoosi Bhi Karta Hai

Acp :- Achaa yeh toh kaam ka banda lagta hai:D

Daya :- Toh Sir Chalain Us Say Miltay Hain

Dono Hotel Se Bahir Niklay

Acp :- Yar Kisi Se Pucho Tou Sahi Yeh Grocery Shop Kahan Hai

Daya :- *Asks A Riksha Wala* Oh Bhai Sahab Grocery Shop Kahan Hai Idher

Bhai Sahab :- Oh Yara Hum Bhi Wohi Ja Raha Hai Chalo Mere Sath


Acp :- Bhai Sahab Aap Free Me Lejao Apni Raksha Me Ya Kiraya Logay :D



Bhai sahab :- Oye Khana Kharab Tumharay BAap ka Raksha Hai Jo Free Me Lejayega slap1)}




Daya :- Acp Sir Aap Nay Bataya Nhn Kay Peshawar Me Aap Kay Baap Kay Raksha Hain :))




Acp :- Hainnnn Mere Baap Ka Rakshaaaaaaaaaa Daya Mere Baap Ka rakshaaaaaaaaaaaaa {(cray)} Please Mujhay Chutki Kaato Mjhay Yakeen Ho Kay Me Khuwaab Nhn Dekh Raha :D



Daya :- Abay Budhay Sathyaa Gaya Hai Kiya Tanz Kiya Tha Mene :|



Acp :- Achaa :oops:



Bhai sahab :- Oh Chalo Utro Dono mere Raksha Say Tum Dono Gop Agaya hai




Acp :- Yeh Kaisa Shop Hai Daya




Daya :- Sir Secret Grocey Shop Lagta hai Mujhay Yeh Jaise Harry Porter Me Hota Hai Na Deewar Me Takar Marienge Toh Andar Chalay jayeinge :D



Acp :- Iska Matlab Samjhay Daya :(



Daya :- Kiya Sirrrrr




Acp :- Me Bhi Nhn Samjha heheheheh



Daya :- Sir Aise Na hansay Makhi Chali Jayegi Mu Me:p



Acp :- Chali Jaaye Yar Waise bhi boht bhoook lagi hai :(



Daya :- eeeeeeeee Sir Aap ko bhook Lagi Hai Toh Is Driver Ko Kaatay Na Aap Ki Bhoook Mar Jayegi:))



Acp :- eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeslap1)}



Bhai Sahab :- Oye khana kharab Tum Dono Toh Chup Karo Tee tee tee teee Karta Hamara Dimaag Khaa Gaya Hai Tum Loug:mad:Aur Uper Se Mujhay Kaatnay Ka Planning Bana Raha Hai Utro Mera Raksha Say {(angry)}



Acp :- Acha Acha Bye Bye Khan SAhab:D


Mera Baap Ka Raksha Hai aap nay bola tha na:pIs Liye kiraya nhn dunga:))



Bhai sahab :- Niklo Idher Say Nhn Toh Hum Apna Pishawari Chapal Maarega Rajni Kanth Ki Tarah Itna Bada Karkay



Yeh Sun Kar Acp And Daya 100 Ki Speed Se Dor Laga Dete Hain Dortay Dortay Dono Hotel Kay Pass Pohnch Jatay Hain And Manager Un Ko Udhar Hi Mil Jaata Hai



Daya :- Sir yeh Toh Hum Hotel Per Wapis Agaye:|



Acp :- Is Ka Matlab Samjhay Daya



Daya :- Han Sir Is ka Matlab Hai Hum Gadhay Hain Dekhe Grocery Shop Hotel Kay Barabr Me Hi Hai {(doh)} ..



Dono Grocery Shop Ki Taraf Jatay Hain Kay Manager Gate Per Hi Mil Jata Hai



Acp :- Manager Sahab Kiya Haal Hain Aap Kay Humien Sameer Nay Behja Hai Aap Say Milnay Ke Liye ApKa Naam farhan Hai na:D



Manager :- Hum farhan Hai Lekin Yeh Sameer KOun hai{}{78iu



Acp And Daya :- *Aik Sath* Aray Wohi Sameer Jo Bachpan Me Aap Nay Dekha Tha Choti Chadi Pehnta Tha Lollipop Khata Tha Badi Shararatien Karta Tha:))


MAnager :- OH Yara Sameer Toh Hamari Jigri Dost Hai Bolo Kiya Kaam Hai u Logo Ki


Acp :- Farhan Hum India Se Aye Hain Aik Case Solve Karnay Kay Peshawar Me Her Event Pooooray Pakistan Se Aik Din Phele Hota Hai Kyun Hota Hai Kaise Hota Hai


Manager :- Oh Pagal Ka Bacha Hai Tum Log India Se Aya Hai Yeh Malooom Karnay, Hum Agar Yeh Baat Aapna Pathan Bhai Ko Batayega Toh Tum Loug Us Ka Hansi Dekh Kay Khud Kashi Karday Ga hahaha :))


Acp :- Per Wajah Toh Batado Aisa KiuN Kartay Hain Log Idher :s


Manager :- Tum Sudhrega Nhn Acp Tum Daramay Me Bhi Ajeeb Ajeeb Sawal Aur Harkatien Karta Hai Hum Ko Bada Hansi Ata Jab Tum Kehta Hai "Daya Darwaza Toud Do" Saala India Me Sab Darwaza Tumhara Baap Ka Hai ..Aur Saala Yeh Daya Tum Bhi Is Ki Baat Manti Hai Ab Hum Nay Pehchana Kay Lambaaa Aadmi Ka Aqal Ghutnay Me Hota Hai Wayiii Wayiiiiiiiiiiiiii :)) :)) ...


Aur Bhi Boht Saari Besti Karnay Kay Baad Manager Choco Ko Batata Hai Sab Baatien Aur Dono Boht Hanstay Hain Daya Aur Acp Per Aur Phr Dono Batatay Hain Kay ''Peshawar Walay Log Her Event Dusre Cities Se Is Liye Phele Kartay Hain Kay Jab Bhi Koi Event Hota Hai Toh Idher Kay Kuch Shararti Log Gaana Gaana Shiru Kardete Hain Kay Chand Chupa Badal Me Chand Chupa Badal Me Sharmaya Saa" Toh Yeh Idher Ki Joo Comitee Hai Woh Is Ko Serious Leleti Hai Aur Bas Ailaan Kardeta Hai ...... Ab Yeh Baat Jan Nay Ke Liye Tum Khana Kharab India Se Aaya Sharam Karo Tum LoG.


Daya & Acp :- *Mu Latka Kay Sharma Kay Apnay Hotel Room Me Chalay Jatay Hai*{}{r54




Manager And Choco :- Bada Khush Hotay Hain Kay Pheli Dafa CID Dramay Me Case Solve Nhn Huwa Lol :))


Acp :- Daya Aaj Pheli Dafa Mera Case Solve Nhn Huwa {}{r54


Daya :- Sir Solve Toh Phele Bhi Nhi Hota Aap Zabrdasti Solve Karwa Dete Hain Hamesha :|


Acp :- Daya Me Marna Chahta Hun Mujhay Mar janay Do Choro Mujhay :mad:


Daya :- Sir Mene Pakda Kab Hai Marain Jaakay Mujhay Kiya Hai Lekin Mardo Ki Tarah Maryega please :D


Acp :- Ok Daya *And Acp Apni 4 manzil Hotel Se Chalang Laga Deta hai*


Daya :- Yes Yes Acha Huwa Jaan Choooti Budhay Say ... %-(


Acp Chalang Lagata Hai Toh Us Ki Sab Cheezien Toot Jaati Hain Per Woh Phr Bhi Bach Jata Hai , Dono Tangien , Dono Baazu , Naak Ki Hadi , 20 Ungliyan Sab Tooot Jaati Hain And Tind phat Jaati Hai. Jaldi Se Log Ajatay Hain Aur Ambulance Ko miss call Maartay Hain Lekin Ambulance Wala Bhi Dheet Hota Hai. Phir tcs Walon Ko Bulaya Jata Hai Aur tcs Walay Acp Ko Itnay Baday Lifafay Me Daal Ke India Parsal Kardete Hain, Acp Apni Harkat Per Pachtata Hai Kay Saari Zindagi Yeh Case Solve Kiye Aur Khud Aisii Harkat Kardi ... Daya Jaldi se Samaan Pack Karta Hai Aur India Kay Liye ud Jata hai ...


India Pohnchnay Kay Baad


Acp :- *hospital me* Is Ka Matlab Samjhay Daya


Daya :- Kiya Sir


Acp :- Kay Hum Dono Boht Baday Ullu Kay Pathay Hain , Aur Meri Touba Jo Ayienda Faith Aur Nomi Se Script Likhwaya Pata Nhn Kounsay Badlay Liye Hain Dono Nay Mujh Say :( :( :(


Daya :- Sir Is Kay Pichay Bhi Koi Saazish Thi :|

Acp :- {(wallbash)}Nhnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


Daya :- Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan {}{456


Aur Is Tarah Acp and Daya Ki Kachi Ho Gayi Aur Yeh Case Bhi End Ko Pohncha:D{(lai67)}


Thanks for reading friends :D aur jisne read nhi ki hai jaldi se karlain nhi tou /:)

And Sorry Boht Bari Episode Ban Gayi :s
hahaha wao bht acha likha ap ne bht maza aua prh k

best of luck :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362122452][/DOUBLEPOST]
woww well done @Aayat @Rubi @Fa!th @kool~nomi @S_ChiragH @faari realy interesting enjoyed reading it :-bd
result INSHAALLAH jaldi announce ho jaayega :)
@Nelly
thankushhhh aapa @hoorain[DOUBLEPOST=1362124134][/DOUBLEPOST]
@Rubi & @Aayat : Bht bhtttt achey dialogues likhey hain, bht maza aya parh k, but mjhe abhi bhi shak ho raha hai, rubi ka mind inna creative nahin ho skta :p
@Fa!th & @kool~nomi : hehehe awesome dialogues :p, and faith a.k.a Jack sparrow ki bongian {(laugh)}, I loved that part ;)
haha thanx alot
 

Fa!th

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lol Wow zabardast :-bd all the best {}{43r5

lol too good :p zabardast maza aa gya :D koi bat nhi iss ki epi. bhi tou 1 hour ki hoti hai na :p baki tou half hour k hoty hai :D so dont worry

all the best @kool~nomi & @Fa!th {}{43r5[DOUBLEPOST=1362094494][/DOUBLEPOST]
hahahah mujy pata chl gya hai ye creativity kis ki hai :D
thanksss maheeen

Niceeeee ..bahot maza aya perh k :D great job! :-bd
shy ki bachi tume link di thi story check nhi ki tumne slap1)}
wah wah zaberdast maza a gya,,,{()|dddd{()|dddd{()|dddd{()|dddd @Fa!th @kool~nomi
thanks for liking rooh afza {(giveheart)}

woww well done @Aayat @Rubi @Fa!th @kool~nomi @S_ChiragH @faari realy interesting enjoyed reading it :-bd
result INSHAALLAH jaldi announce ho jaayega :)
@Nelly
thank you aunty xD

hum ney banalia tha bt arrange nahi kia :( @ChoCo bhai b bz hein.
chalein best of luck... @Aayat @Rubi @Fa!th @kool~nomi @S_ChiragH @faari
thanks waise aur aap abhi bhi share kar sakty hai hoorain awain last date rakh deti hai ignore karo :D


thank you soooo much faith sis :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362121312][/DOUBLEPOST]
thank you so much ![DOUBLEPOST=1362121404][/DOUBLEPOST]
bht bht shukriyaaa apka :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362121465][/DOUBLEPOST]
thank youuuuu sisi:)[DOUBLEPOST=1362122070][/DOUBLEPOST]
hahaha wao bht acha likha ap ne bht maza aua prh k

best of luck :p[DOUBLEPOST=1362122452][/DOUBLEPOST]
thankushhhh aapa @hoorain[DOUBLEPOST=1362124134][/DOUBLEPOST]
haha thanx alot
thankssss ayat and best of luck to you too :D
 

Hoorain

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thanksss maheeen



shy ki bachi tume link di thi story check nhi ki tumne slap1)}


thanks for liking rooh afza {(giveheart)}



thank you aunty xD



thanks waise aur aap abhi bhi share kar sakty hai hoorain awain last date rakh deti hai ignore karo :D



thankssss ayat and best of luck to you too :D
hahah oyee faithu /:) :p
 

faari

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hahahah nice n short story unlike ours :s starting bht achi thi but end mai bachri faari mareeza hogayi {}{r54
and goooooooooooooood job faari (qki chiragh bhai ne kaha sara kaam tumhara tha so unhain credit nhi dungi :p )
thank you @Fa!th lkn ab mareez chala jaye tu phir sae ho jaon gi :D
 

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston kese hain aap sub ?? khair agar koi bimaar hai to doctor saahiba
Faari haazir hain ilaaj ke liye contact kar le ;)) aur is mareez se duaaen bhi le le free :p
hummm ab tak subhi ke dialogues parhe subhi ne MASHA'ALLAH be shak bohot bohot achha kaam kiya
aur ab thore side pe ho jaao yaaron :p saadi vaari ae :D
so subse pehle bol dun ye jo dialogues hain inme 95% mehnat meri dear friend @faari ki hai ;;)
so all credit goes to my best friend here is the peish kash :D
Characters
Doctor (Faari)
patient(Chiragh)
patient: Assalaamu alaikum doctor sahiba
doc:wa'alaikumussalaam ...ji kesy aye
pa:rikshy par
doc:mera matlab hai kis masly k lye aye
pa:kon sa masla sunaoon ab bas masly hi masly hein kabhi amma handi me
namak ziyada dal deti hai tu kabhi abba soty hoye chilane lagta hai
doc:mera matlab hai jnab k ap ko kya taklif hai jis k lye ap tashrif laye
pa: ohhh acha ...meri tang me dard hai buhat dinoo se
doc:ap ne koi bhari ,wazni cheez uthai hai
pat:yaad krty hoye ......ji kuch din pehly zameen par giri hoi moli uthai thi
doc:wo wazni cheez hai
pa:wo bhi bari mushkil se uthai thi
doc:ap ki sehat se dikh rha hai
doc:main ap ko kuch medicine deti hoon ye le lena INSHA'ALLAH aram aa jaye ga
After 2 days
pat:doctor sahiba bilkul aram nae aya
doc:ap ne dawai li thi
pa:ji haan ap k samne tu li thi
doc:mere samne kb li thi
pa:ap ne mujhy pakrai thi na tu main ne ly li thi
doc:ap ne usay khaya
pa:ap ne usay khane ko kab bola bas lene ko kaha wo main ne ly li thi
doc:ap ki puri famliy esi hai samjhdar
pa : pura muhalla kehta hai tumhary ghar se tera beta hi ziyada samjhdar hai
doc;tu phir wo kesy hoon gy (sochty hoye)
doc:ap ye dawai ly lein aur sone se pehly paani se kha lena agr mumkin ho tu usay
ubaal kar thanda kr k us se khana
pa:ji ,ji bilkul lkn aram tu a jaye ga na
doc:agr achy se lein gy tu zaroor aye ga insha Allah
2 days baad
pa:doctor sahiba mujhy dard ziyada hota hai ab aur daane bhi nikal aye hein
doc:dawai khai ap ne
pa:haan ji
doc:kitne din li
pa:eik din
doc :wo kiyu
pa: ap ne tu bola tha soone se pehly ubaal kr khana main ne
dawai ubali soone laga tu kha li lkn buhat time ho gya nend
hi nae ai phir jab nend ane agli tu soone laga tu dwai ly li phir mere
uthne aur dawai ubalne tak nend chali gai is lye usi raat dawai hatam ho gai
doc:ap ko tang k elaj ki nae dimag k elaj ki zaroorat hai ap eik kaam krein
kl ap ki tang ka operation kr dete hein xray me ap ki bones me zakham aye hein
tu kal kaam khatam ho jayega
next day
operation room
doc;ap yahaan leit jaein tang meri side pr rakhein esy (samjhaty hoye )
nurs;doctor sahiba achank eik mareez ki tabiyaat harab hoi hai
doctor mareez se ;ap yahaan se rahein main abhi ati hoon
(in ka dehaan rakhna )junior doc se bolty hoye ..........
us bed pr mareez ko kuch sakoon nae a rha tha tu wo dosry
bed pr chala gya (hona tu operation hi hai bed se kya farq parta hai )
doc ne aty hi mareez ko behosh kr dya aur opetaion start kr dya
hosh me ane k baad mareez doctor se kehta hai
pa.;doctor mujhy pehly se ziyada dard ho rha hai aur dosri tang me bhi shoro ho gya hai
doc;lkn main ne tu is tang ka opetion kya hai jo meri taraf se hai
pa;par opetion wali tang tu ye thi dosri thi
doc;par main tu is taraf rakh kr gya tha
pa;bed change kya na tu tang bhi change ho gai muskraty hote
doc sar pakarti hui ..........tum operation wali tang ko
sahi karo aur chalty bano tumhari waja se tu main dimagi mareez ho chuki hoon


...@faari @zoonia @Miss_Khan @neevrap @kool~nomi @Mahen @hoorain @Nelly @Dawn @saviou[/DOUBLEPOST]...@Khwahish @Fa!th @Shailina @SHAZIE @masoom_se_chahat @azeyy @DuFFer @Tariq Saeed @yoursks @Don...@LuViSh @marzish @ShyPrincess @FallenAngeL @Mahen @GeniousAsma @parri @*Muslim* @rahath @ADVENTURER242...@sabha_khan40 @Iceage-TM @ChoCo @whiteros @Rubi @Strangr @Bela @~Bella~ @sweet_c_kuri @sherry2112...@Vasim @love_islove @parri @Pari @Prince_Farry @pacific_person @Ally @reality @diya @H0neyd0ll
Niceee....:)
bht achaw likha hai..:)
 
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faari

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hahaha Boht hi zbrdst and achay likhay hain dialouges @faari Awien hi free me doctor ban gayi lol :p
free me kidar bani hoon doc banne se pehly main ne 4 jamaty parhi thi {}{456[DOUBLEPOST=1362137808][/DOUBLEPOST]
Niceee....:)
bht achaw likha hai..:)
thank you ;;)[DOUBLEPOST=1362137842][/DOUBLEPOST]
Assalam o Alaikum ..... Gr8 job done :-bd
Aayat-Rubi, Fa!th-Kool Nomi & S.Chiragh-Faari ... Aap sabhi ne bahot zabardast likha kafi maza aaya padh kar ... now best of luck {}{43r5
thank you so muchi;;)[DOUBLEPOST=1362137894][/DOUBLEPOST]
Niceeeee ..bahot maza aya perh k :D great job! :-bd
thank you sis;)[DOUBLEPOST=1362137951][/DOUBLEPOST]
hum ney banalia tha bt arrange nahi kia :( @ChoCo bhai b bz hein.
chalein best of luck... @Aayat @Rubi @Fa!th @kool~nomi @S_ChiragH @faari
thanko :D
 

Binte_Hawwa

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Assalaamu alaikum TM doston kese hain aap sub ?? khair agar koi bimaar hai to doctor saahiba
Faari haazir hain ilaaj ke liye contact kar le ;)) aur is mareez se duaaen bhi le le free :p
hummm ab tak subhi ke dialogues parhe subhi ne MASHA'ALLAH be shak bohot bohot achha kaam kiya
aur ab thore side pe ho jaao yaaron :p saadi vaari ae :D
so subse pehle bol dun ye jo dialogues hain inme 95% mehnat meri dear friend @faari ki hai ;;)
so all credit goes to my best friend here is the peish kash :D
Characters
Doctor (Faari)
patient(Chiragh)
patient: Assalaamu alaikum doctor sahiba
doc:wa'alaikumussalaam ...ji kesy aye
pa:rikshy par
doc:mera matlab hai kis masly k lye aye
pa:kon sa masla sunaoon ab bas masly hi masly hein kabhi amma handi me
namak ziyada dal deti hai tu kabhi abba soty hoye chilane lagta hai
doc:mera matlab hai jnab k ap ko kya taklif hai jis k lye ap tashrif laye
pa: ohhh acha ...meri tang me dard hai buhat dinoo se
doc:ap ne koi bhari ,wazni cheez uthai hai
pat:yaad krty hoye ......ji kuch din pehly zameen par giri hoi moli uthai thi
doc:wo wazni cheez hai
pa:wo bhi bari mushkil se uthai thi
doc:ap ki sehat se dikh rha hai
doc:main ap ko kuch medicine deti hoon ye le lena INSHA'ALLAH aram aa jaye ga
After 2 days
pat:doctor sahiba bilkul aram nae aya
doc:ap ne dawai li thi
pa:ji haan ap k samne tu li thi
doc:mere samne kb li thi
pa:ap ne mujhy pakrai thi na tu main ne ly li thi
doc:ap ne usay khaya
pa:ap ne usay khane ko kab bola bas lene ko kaha wo main ne ly li thi
doc:ap ki puri famliy esi hai samjhdar
pa : pura muhalla kehta hai tumhary ghar se tera beta hi ziyada samjhdar hai
doc;tu phir wo kesy hoon gy (sochty hoye)
doc:ap ye dawai ly lein aur sone se pehly paani se kha lena agr mumkin ho tu usay
ubaal kar thanda kr k us se khana
pa:ji ,ji bilkul lkn aram tu a jaye ga na
doc:agr achy se lein gy tu zaroor aye ga insha Allah
2 days baad
pa:doctor sahiba mujhy dard ziyada hota hai ab aur daane bhi nikal aye hein
doc:dawai khai ap ne
pa:haan ji
doc:kitne din li
pa:eik din
doc :wo kiyu
pa: ap ne tu bola tha soone se pehly ubaal kr khana main ne
dawai ubali soone laga tu kha li lkn buhat time ho gya nend
hi nae ai phir jab nend ane agli tu soone laga tu dwai ly li phir mere
uthne aur dawai ubalne tak nend chali gai is lye usi raat dawai hatam ho gai
doc:ap ko tang k elaj ki nae dimag k elaj ki zaroorat hai ap eik kaam krein
kl ap ki tang ka operation kr dete hein xray me ap ki bones me zakham aye hein
tu kal kaam khatam ho jayega
next day
operation room
doc;ap yahaan leit jaein tang meri side pr rakhein esy (samjhaty hoye )
nurs;doctor sahiba achank eik mareez ki tabiyaat harab hoi hai
doctor mareez se ;ap yahaan se rahein main abhi ati hoon
(in ka dehaan rakhna )junior doc se bolty hoye ..........
us bed pr mareez ko kuch sakoon nae a rha tha tu wo dosry
bed pr chala gya (hona tu operation hi hai bed se kya farq parta hai )
doc ne aty hi mareez ko behosh kr dya aur opetaion start kr dya
hosh me ane k baad mareez doctor se kehta hai
pa.;doctor mujhy pehly se ziyada dard ho rha hai aur dosri tang me bhi shoro ho gya hai
doc;lkn main ne tu is tang ka opetion kya hai jo meri taraf se hai
pa;par opetion wali tang tu ye thi dosri thi
doc;par main tu is taraf rakh kr gya tha
pa;bed change kya na tu tang bhi change ho gai muskraty hote
doc sar pakarti hui ..........tum operation wali tang ko
sahi karo aur chalty bano tumhari waja se tu main dimagi mareez ho chuki hoon


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Asalam O Alaikum!
Dear Brothers!
Me apni Team (jis me mein @Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 thay) ki taaraf se compiling and editing ka incharge tha! per due to some problems (light, TM down etc) me apnay dialogue ko compile nahi kr ska! So iss k liay me Apnay team members se bht sharminda hoon! (@Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 )!

Baki Sb k dialogues bht achay thay! MASHALLAH! @Rubi and @Aayat did a fantabulous job! Besta luck to you too :-bd

And @kool~nomi and @Fa!th ap ka dialogue bht acha arranged and bht mazahiya tha :-bd best of luck to you too! :))

@faari and @S_ChiragH bro bht awesome dialogue tha! Bht well balanced and excellent! :-bd best of luck to you too :D

Baki Sb logon ko bhi best of luck! :-bd

Sherry and Iceage bro Mein ap ka mujrim hoon :(
 

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Asalam O Alaikum!
Dear Brothers!
Me apni Team (jis me mein @Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 thay) ki taaraf se compiling and editing ka incharge tha! per due to some problems (light, TM down etc) me apnay dialogue ko compile nahi kr ska! So iss k liay me Apnay team members se bht sharminda hoon! (@Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 )!

Baki Sb k dialogues bht achay thay! MASHALLAH! @Rubi and @Aayat did a fantabulous job! Besta luck to you too :-bd

And @kool~nomi and @Fa!th ap ka dialogue bht acha arranged and bht mazahiya tha :-bd best of luck to you too! :))

@faari and @S_ChiragH bro bht awesome dialogue tha! Bht well balanced and excellent! :-bd best of luck to you too :D

Baki Sb logon ko bhi best of luck! :-bd

Sherry and Iceage bro Mein ap ka mujrim hoon :(
Walaikum Asslaaam

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thank you so much choco bhaya 4 liking :)
 
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Asalam O Alaikum!
Dear Brothers!
Me apni Team (jis me mein @Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 thay) ki taaraf se compiling and editing ka incharge tha! per due to some problems (light, TM down etc) me apnay dialogue ko compile nahi kr ska! So iss k liay me Apnay team members se bht sharminda hoon! (@Iceage-TM and @sherry2112 )!

Baki Sb k dialogues bht achay thay! MASHALLAH! @Rubi and @Aayat did a fantabulous job! Besta luck to you too :-bd

And @kool~nomi and @Fa!th ap ka dialogue bht acha arranged and bht mazahiya tha :-bd best of luck to you too! :))

@faari and @S_ChiragH bro bht awesome dialogue tha! Bht well balanced and excellent! :-bd best of luck to you too :D

Baki Sb logon ko bhi best of luck! :-bd

Sherry and Iceage bro Mein ap ka mujrim hoon :(
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