TM Biggest Pakistani Fan Contest 2011

[Sara Cilli Milli]

And Here is my poetry..

Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai

Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai

Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai

Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai

Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai

Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai

Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
​

vry nyc PF
agr deep mai dekha jay to ya aj kal k halat par mubi hy
bohat umda likhi hy

 

[RedRose64]

wow farry yummy cake.. but again baat wahi ati ha.. ye kaisay believe kia jay k cake ne banaya ha? atleast paper pay side pay apna user name likh k pic lay lo takay koi doubt na rahay

 

[Prince-Farry]

wow farry yummy cake.. but again baat wahi ati ha.. ye kaisay believe kia jay k cake ne banaya ha? atleast paper pay side pay apna user name likh k pic lay lo takay koi doubt na rahay

ab woh to ap par hai ke ap yaqeen karo ya nai...ramadan ke maheene mei sharing ki hai....barhal.pasand karne ke lie thanks...ab cake to khatam hogia hai..paper par likhne se to raha..

 

[Prince-Farry]

vry nyc PF
agr deep mai dekha jay to ya aj kal k halat par mubi hy
bohat umda likhi hy

thanks...
cake bhi banaya hai..woh bhi dekh lo...

 

[saviou]

Assalamoalaikum wrwb TM
mai abhi apni 50% sharing share kar raha hoo apke saath...abhi maine poetry ko final touch bhi dena hai..woh mai inshaAllah sehri mei donga...filhal jo maine cake banaya hai PAKISTAN ke lie..woh yeh raha..umeed hai apko pasand aega..mai inshaAllah poetry 6 hrs baad share karonga...intezar karyega...sorry for being delay

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot khoob bro

And Here is my poetry..

Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai

Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai

Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai

Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai

Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai

Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai

Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
​

subhan Allah
zabardast sharing bro
haqeeqat ko apne bayan kiya hai aur aaj ke halat ka naqsha kheenchne ki koshish ki hai apne
jazakallah khair

 

[Prince-Farry]

shukriya nasir bhai pasand karne ke lie

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Zabar10st, beautiful and marvelous sharing

and dilkusk poetry , ju k haqeeqat k kareeb ter hay

May Allah Bless our Pakistan and increase ur power of wirting & knowledge (Ameen)

​

 

[Prince-Farry]

ameen sume ameen sajid bhai..thanks

 

[Qawareer]

wssalm u aliakum
cake to boht maze ka lg raha hai...
main kha lon..{(hungry)}

poetry b boht achi hai..umdah khayalat...
best of luck..

 

[Habeel]

ok bhai ji

 

[Jiya.]

araaaaaay waaaaaaaaah
ahaaaaaaaaaan
cake is soooooo delicious,yummy,tasty,lazeeeeeeeeez
bohat khoooooooob PF bro
and poery bhi MASHALLAH bohat achi hay

BEST OF LUCK 4 UR COMPITITION

​

 

[Toobi]

very nice waqas...good job...

or baqiyo ka mujy pata nae,but waqas jhoot nae bolta,ye bat may jante ho..
bht acha cake hay waqs..or poetry b...best of luck dear

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Doston meri dili guzarish saare staff doston se ke is thread ko raat 12 baje se pehle cloze na kiya jaye
meri taiyyari jaari hai kuch bana raha hoon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanks........​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

And Here is my poetry..

Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai

Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai

Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai

Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai

Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai

Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai

Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
​

Nice poetry bro very nice

naa toota hai naa tootega kabhi
qeher ban ke dushmano pe phootega kabhi

hum keh keh ke thak gaye na chhedo humein
phir sar na chupa sakoge pak dil jo roothega kabhi

hum ot hain Hussain r.a ke deewane hum saabir thehre
per jo badle ka waqt hoga najane tum se sabr chhotega kabhi

***S_ChiragH***

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NOTE: This is not for the contest

 

[Amreen]

Assalamoalaikum wrwb TM
mai abhi apni 50% sharing share kar raha hoo apke saath...abhi maine poetry ko final touch bhi dena hai..woh mai inshaAllah sehri mei donga...filhal jo maine cake banaya hai PAKISTAN ke lie..woh yeh raha..umeed hai apko pasand aega..mai inshaAllah poetry 6 hrs baad share karonga...intezar karyega...sorry for being delay

cake to bohat zabardust hai PF...very nice dedication to your country...best of luck...

 

[Nelly]

walaikum assalam
wow, nice efforts farry{(gimmefive)} all da best

And Here is my poetry..

Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai

Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai

Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai

Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai

Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai

Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai

Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
​

Assalamoalaikum wrwb TM
mai abhi apni 50% sharing share kar raha hoo apke saath...abhi maine poetry ko final touch bhi dena hai..woh mai inshaAllah sehri mei donga...filhal jo maine cake banaya hai PAKISTAN ke lie..woh yeh raha..umeed hai apko pasand aega..mai inshaAllah poetry 6 hrs baad share karonga...intezar karyega...sorry for being delay

 

[Amreen]

poetry bhi bohat hi umdah hai...kya baat hai farry...

 

[Qawareer]

annu yeh to bht sara likh diya....raat tak read karke bataoga....mehnat to bht dikh rahi hai......
best of luck

oh ok..main roman urdu me share kr don..?

 

[MSC]

Assalamoalaikum wrwb TM
mai abhi apni 50% sharing share kar raha hoo apke saath...abhi maine poetry ko final touch bhi dena hai..woh mai inshaAllah sehri mei donga...filhal jo maine cake banaya hai PAKISTAN ke lie..woh yeh raha..umeed hai apko pasand aega..mai inshaAllah poetry 6 hrs baad share karonga...intezar karyega...sorry for being delay

walaikum salam wrwb
kia baat hai PF...
bht acha cake banaya hai...
agar Corner mei apna naam (PF@TM) likhte toh perfect lagta....
anyways
Gud luck

 

[MSC]

And Here is my poetry..

Koi to ho jo thame taqdeerein omam
ke yeh pardes mei khuwar hai

Koi nahi jo himmat barhaye
ab khoshish hi bekaar hai

Jawaanon ke hosle zameen se hai parst
kuch nahi hosakta ab inki vichar hai

Is bar jo khiza ae is desh mei
koi nahi janta ke kesi thi aur kia bahaar hai

Taleem kia thi, kia hai aur kyon hai
ab naye nasal ko isse kia saroqaar hai

Sab kehte hein ke badle ge halaat hamare
par kisi ko bhi nahi inka intezar hai

Reare ki haddi jo tooti is mulk ki
bechara ab chalne se bhi lachaar hai
​

Zabardast....
bht acha likha hai....