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walaikumusslaam.. ye rhy ans... :)
name to ap sb ko pata e ho ga fr v tell deti hu :p

1- Sundas
2- Han g :) kbhi kbhar likh leti hun
3- kaafi haen , Allam iqbal k ilawa parveen shaikr, john elia agera :p
4- ummm school level sy he urdu bht pasadn thi ... oar shayiri zayada :p
5- "Usy kehna ye duniya hy ... " ye meri heart fav poetry hy :p
6- uff touba hy :p
7- nhi urdu ka namul badal nahi :) jo bat urdu mae hy wo kisi oar zuban mae to nhi ho skti :p her kisi ki apni apni value hy

8- punjabi .... hurrrrryyyyyyyyy X_X
9- wesy to bht haen.. jakla fav ye hy

mill jayen gy buhat sy tujhy mas'lihat pasand
mujh sy na sir khapa k bht sir phira hun mae

10- mery khyal mae zindagi khuli kitab nahi hy ... :) bilkul b mutmain nhi hun iss bat sy

ae lo ... @Rubi @Shizuka @Mahen @Hoorain @Muskaaan @Manxil
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wa wa umdaaa :-bd

first of all toWelcomeeee aapko diakh k khusi hoingg,,,aapko to pta hi oa TM pe apaki poetry ki bohat fan hun main ;)
aapne jo shaer abhi bola bohat zabardast hay lemme put it in my status :p
 
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Hoorain said:
wa wa umdaaa :-bd

first of all toWelcomeeee aapko diakh k khusi hoingg,,,aapko to pta hi oa TM pe apaki poetry ki bohat fan hun main ;)
aapne jo shaer abhi bola bohat zabardast hay lemme put it in my status :p
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nawazish nawazush :p
 
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1- umm sensitive hona zaroori hy :p jab tk kisi cheez ko feel nhi kro gy to likho gy kesy ... ?

2- 8th 9th class sy he :p

3- oar b cheezen bht c lut chuki haen dill k sath
ye btaya dostun ny ishaq frmany k baad

is liye kamry ki ik ik chezz check krta hun mae
ik tery aany sy pehly ik tery ik tery jany k baad :p

4- umm 2005 mae jab earth quack aya tha tab uspe likhi thi ... (per ab wo gum chuki hy X_X )

5- persian.... bht dill krta hy seekhny ko n prhny ko b :p

6- apni frnds ko ... n sb ko he bht psnd i thi

7- wafa ki laaj me usko mna lety to acha tha
ana ki jung mae akser judai jeet jati hy

8- mae khud ye chahta hun k haalaat hun khrab
mery khilaf zeher ugalta phiry koi ..

(smjh aai ya detail btaun?? :p ) ;))

9- kal btaya to tha :s

mil jayen g buhat sy tujhy mas'lihat pasand
mujh sy na sir khapa k bht sir phira hun mae

10- mae jab guzry dinu ki talkkhiyun ko bhool jata hun
mujhy phir sy koi beety zmany bhejh deta hy :doctor

@Hoorain @Shizuka @Mahen @Rubi @Manxil
 
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Dua_E_Sehar said:
1- umm sensitive hona zaroori hy :p jab tk kisi cheez ko feel nhi kro gy to likho gy kesy ... ?

2- 8th 9th class sy he :p

3- oar b cheezen bht c lut chuki haen dill k sath
ye btaya dostun ny ishaq frmany k baad

is liye kamry ki ik ik chezz check krta hun mae
ik tery aany sy pehly ik tery ik tery jany k baad :p

4- umm 2005 mae jab earth quack aya tha tab uspe likhi thi ... (per ab wo gum chuki hy X_X )

5- persian.... bht dill krta hy seekhny ko n prhny ko b :p

6- apni frnds ko ... n sb ko he bht psnd i thi

7- wafa ki laaj me usko mna lety to acha tha
ana ki jung mae akser judai jeet jati hy

8- mae khud ye chahta hun k haalaat hun khrab
mery khilaf zeher ugalta phiry koi ..

(smjh aai ya detail btaun?? :p ) ;))

9- kal btaya to tha :s

mil jayen g buhat sy tujhy mas'lihat pasand
mujh sy na sir khapa k bht sir phira hun mae

10- mae jab guzry dinu ki talkkhiyun ko bhool jata hun
mujhy phir sy koi beety zmany bhejh deta hy :doctor

@Hoorain @Shizuka @Mahen @Rubi @Manxil
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Nice Repliess Apo..:D
Lastt One Justt Touchs my Heartt..lovely!!
 
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Dua_E_Sehar said:
:) thnkooo ;;)
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Belcome..:D

Mere Kuch sawal :Mwrite

  1. TM pe kinhi 4 logon ko sher dedicate karen with reason ;))
  2. Apko jab gussa ata tab konsa sher Zehen me aata hai??
  3. Kya khwab me Kabhi Nazme parhin hain apne..:p
  4. KOi Mazahiya sher sunane taki hansi aaye :D
  5. Fav. Iqtebas konsa hai?? Share with Us too ;))
  6. Kabhi Kisi ko Dant te hue Sher kaha hai..??if yes to which one?? ;))

 
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Dua_E_Sehar said:
1- umm sensitive hona zaroori hy :p jab tk kisi cheez ko feel nhi kro gy to likho gy kesy ... ?

2- 8th 9th class sy he :p

3- oar b cheezen bht c lut chuki haen dill k sath
ye btaya dostun ny ishaq frmany k baad

is liye kamry ki ik ik chezz check krta hun mae
ik tery aany sy pehly ik tery ik tery jany k baad :p

4- umm 2005 mae jab earth quack aya tha tab uspe likhi thi ... (per ab wo gum chuki hy X_X )

5- persian.... bht dill krta hy seekhny ko n prhny ko b :p

6- apni frnds ko ... n sb ko he bht psnd i thi

7- wafa ki laaj me usko mna lety to acha tha
ana ki jung mae akser judai jeet jati hy

8- mae khud ye chahta hun k haalaat hun khrab
mery khilaf zeher ugalta phiry koi ..

(smjh aai ya detail btaun?? :p ) ;))

9- kal btaya to tha :s

mil jayen g buhat sy tujhy mas'lihat pasand
mujh sy na sir khapa k bht sir phira hun mae

10- mae jab guzry dinu ki talkkhiyun ko bhool jata hun
mujhy phir sy koi beety zmany bhejh deta hy :doctor

@Hoorain @Shizuka @Mahen @Rubi @Manxil
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bohat umda shayra sahiba kia andaz-e-bayan hay :-bd
 
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Shizuka said:
Belcome..:D

Mere Kuch sawal :Mwrite

  1. TM pe kinhi 4 logon ko sher dedicate karen with reason ;))
  2. Apko jab gussa ata tab konsa sher Zehen me aata hai??
  3. Kya khwab me Kabhi Nazme parhin hain apne..:p
  4. KOi Mazahiya sher sunane taki hansi aaye :D
  5. Fav. Iqtebas konsa hai?? Share with Us too ;))
  6. Kabhi Kisi ko Dant te hue Sher kaha hai..??if yes to which one?? ;))
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@Hoorain.... its for u hooorii ;;)

tum ko ye kamal haasil hy
waqt be waqt achy lagty ho
=))
q k hoor aapi kbhi ghussa nahi hui mery pe :p na he naraz hoti haen :p

@Rubi k liye

kaheen chiragh muqabal mae datt gaya ho ga
hawa ka jhonka bra bad hawas lagta hy

q k jab bmw start ho jaye to sb ko e bad hawas kr deti ;))

@Mahen k liye

dibbay mae dibba dibbay mae khajoor
maano moti mera k qasoor :Mmaid

q k mano ko mota bol k tang krny ka mujhy bht maza aata hy =))

@STAR24 k liye

loag ehsaas ki rondi hui galiyun mae
phenk dety haen ta'aluq ko purana ker k

bht dash hy taara ... still naraz ... hunh :Minion Sad

2- ghussy mae ye shair

nhi duniya ko jab parwah hmari
to phir duniya ki parwah q kren hun :p

3- lolx nah.. khwab he nhi aaty :Mamazed

4- JKP sy hy...

achi larkiyan ALLAH TAALA ki baat manti haen ,
wo her jagah nhi chli jati, wo her kisi sy nhi mil leti, wo her baat nhi ker leti

to kya mae bur lrki hun?

nhi koi b lrki buri nhi hoti lekin us sy kuch esa ho jata hy k ALLAH naraz ho jata hy .. oar pata hy jab wo naraz hota hy to kya hota hy?? madad mango to madad nahi aati .. rasta talaash kro to rasta nahi milta...

5- umm nhi dant'ty wy nhi kaha kbhi kisi ko... cz meri aapi n namal k ilawa kisi ko nhi pta k mujhy poetry bhhht psnd hy or me poetry krti hun X_X kbhi nhi bola shair :)
 
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Dua_E_Sehar said:
@Hoorain.... its for u hooorii ;;)

tum ko ye kamal haasil hy
waqt be waqt achy lagty ho
=))
q k hoor aapi kbhi ghussa nahi hui mery pe :p na he naraz hoti haen :p

@Rubi k liye

kaheen chiragh muqabal mae datt gaya ho ga
hawa ka jhonka bra bad hawas lagta hy

q k jab bmw start ho jaye to sb ko e bad hawas kr deti ;))

@Mahen k liye
dibbay mae dibba dibbay mae khajoor
maano moti mera k qasoor :Mmaid

q k mano ko mota bol k tang krny ka mujhy bht maza aata hy =))

@STAR24 k liye

loag ehsaas ki rondi hui galiyun mae
phenk dety haen ta'aluq ko purana ker k

bht dash hy taara ... still naraz ... hunh :Minion Sad

2- ghussy mae ye shair

nhi duniya ko jab parwah hmari
to phir duniya ki parwah q kren hun :p

3- lolx nah.. khwab he nhi aaty :Mamazed

4- JKP sy hy...

achi larkiyan ALLAH TAALA ki baat manti haen ,
wo her jagah nhi chli jati, wo her kisi sy nhi mil leti, wo her baat nhi ker leti

to kya mae bur lrki hun?

nhi koi b lrki buri nhi hoti lekin us sy kuch esa ho jata hy k ALLAH naraz ho jata hy .. oar pata hy jab wo naraz hota hy to kya hota hy?? madad mango to madad nahi aati .. rasta talaash kro to rasta nahi milta...

5- umm nhi dant'ty wy nhi kaha kbhi kisi ko... cz meri aapi n namal k ilawa kisi ko nhi pta k mujhy poetry bhhht psnd hy or me poetry krti hun X_X kbhi nhi bola shair :)
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Acha laga aapke bare main jaan k :p
 
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