rone beith phir rota jaa

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nice one

ye shaer ki samajh nhi ayi


rone beith to umaron ko
na ghari ro ke raatein sota jaa

Thanks

hmmm abhi samjhane ki koshish karte hain Hoor sis

yahan shayar kehna chaah raha hai ke ro to arson ke liye
bohot saara eik sath yun nahin ke thori deir ro ke phir raat
bhar chain se sote rahein

i hope abhi aapko samajh mein aa gaya hoga behna

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nice one

ye shaer ki samajh nhi ayi


rone beith to umaron ko
na ghari ro ke raatein sota jaa

thanks
hmmm abhi samjhane ki koshish karte hain Hoor sis

yahan shayar kehna chaah raha hai ke ro to arson ke liye
bohot saara eik sath yun nahin ke thori deir ro ke phir raat
bhar chain se sote rahein

i hope abhi aapko samajh mein aa gaya hoga behna

 

[Hoorain]

ahan yup samajh aa gai
nice hay keep it up

koshish karain optimism ki taraf ziada aane ki aap bohat acha likh sakte hain us may MASHAALLAH aur ussi ki zarurat hay aaj k dor may
i remeber ur 1st one about muhabbat that was awesome

/KEep it up MAY ALLAH BLESS U AAMEEN

 

[Asma24]

asusuall excelent poerty bhai chigoo great job..sach me rona agya

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

asusuall excelent poerty bhai chigoo great job..sach me rona agya

thankyou very much aare rona to mujhe bhi aaya apna naam
chigoo parh ke saif ko chheir lo baji no mazaq with
taqhallus plz

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

ahan yup samajh aa gai
nice hay keep it up

koshish karain optimism ki taraf ziada aane ki aap bohat acha likh sakte hain us may MASHAALLAH aur ussi ki zarurat hay aaj k dor may
i remeber ur 1st one about muhabbat that was awesome

/KEep it up MAY ALLAH BLESS U AAMEEN

thankyou very much insha'ALLAH uspe bhi likhne ki abse more koshish karengein
behna aur mere khayal se aap woh ghazal mohabbat ka pata do uski baat kar rahi hain
hai naa.?? anyways thanks once again

 

[Hoorain]

yup wohi

 

[Khwahish]

bohot khub
and beautiful sharing
keep it up
me ko ye wale bohot achi lage{(upset)}

gaya itni door ke lout na sake woh
sada e dil ke yaadon mein khota jaa

raah e mout bhi yehi rahi ChiragH
nehr e ashk mein khudko dubota jaa

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Bohot bohot shukria behna

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

yup wohi

okzzzzzzzzzzz

 

[Ocean-of-love]

Nyc.