Naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi....

[Hoorain]

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Gum sum si udaas khari hay kahi​

kabhi shokh_o_chanchal, shrarat hay zindagi​

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bachon ki muskurahaton se masoomiat liye​

kabhi kahi tanha si khafa hay zindagi​

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kabhi rim jhim, kabhi jhilmilaati hui dhoop​

kahi pipal k pairon si chaaon hay zindagi​

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kia kahun main k kiya hay ye zindagi​

dhanak k sab rangon se bhari hay zindagi​

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khul k jee lo k ik baar hi milti hay​

naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi​

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[saviou]

masha Allah
bohot khoob

 

[Qawareer]

Gum sum si udaas khari hay kahi
kabhi shokh_o_chanchal, shrarat hay zindagi

bachon ki muskurahaton se masoomiat liye
kabhi kahi tanha si khafa hay zindagi

kabhi rim jhim, kabhi jhilmilaati hui dhoop
kahi pipal k pairon si chaaon hay zindagi

kia kahun main k kiya hay ye zindagi
dhanak k sab rangon se bhari hay zindagi

khul k jee lo k ik baar hi milti hay
naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi​

mashAllah
boht umdah kawish hai apki siso..
ap ne zindgi k sare rang k nazm me samo diye..
likhti rahen orkhush rahen

 

[Hoorain]

masha Allah
bohot khoob

thanx bhaya

 

[Hoorain]

mashAllah
boht umdah kawish hai apki siso..
ap ne zindgi k sare rang k nazm me samo diye..
likhti rahen orkhush rahen

thanx annu

 

[Prince-Farry]

nicee..
bht acha likha hai......
thx for sharing

 

[Hoorain]

thanx bro

 

[Prince-Farry]

no problem

 

[saviou]

thanx bhaya

waqai me bohot zabardast likhi hai apne masha Allah
apke hath kahan hain

 

[Hoorain]

shukran

hathon ko kia hua

 

[NamaL]

kabhi rim jhim, kabhi jhilmilaati hui dhoop
kahi pipal k pairon si chaaon hay zindagi

kia kahun main k kiya hay ye zindagi
dhanak k sab rangon se bhari hay zindagi

khul k jee lo k ik baar hi milti hay
naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi


very nice sharing sisooooooooooo

 

[Hoorain]

thanx Maroash siso

 

[Wasif Safi]

Bohot khoob siso, Bohot hi umda likha hai aapne, yaha shayaron ki kami nahi hai, ek se barkar ek hai, koi kisi se kam nahi hai, soch raha hu ke ek shayari ka competiton rakh du phir se mai, wat say....????

Lekin Awsome hai siso ye to mere collection me jaegi poetry...

 

[Hoorain]

Bohot khoob siso, Bohot hi umda likha hai aapne, yaha shayaron ki kami nahi hai, ek se barkar ek hai, koi kisi se kam nahi hai, soch raha hu ke ek shayari ka competiton rakh du phir se mai, wat say....????

Lekin Awsome hai siso ye to mere collection me jaegi poetry...

awww inni ziada tareef

THank u so much

g zarur rakh lain

 

[Fantasy]

Gum sum si udaas khari hay kahi
kabhi shokh_o_chanchal, shrarat hay zindagi

bachon ki muskurahaton se masoomiat liye
kabhi kahi tanha si khafa hay zindagi

kabhi rim jhim, kabhi jhilmilaati hui dhoop
kahi pipal k pairon si chaaon hay zindagi

kia kahun main k kiya hay ye zindagi
dhanak k sab rangon se bhari hay zindagi

khul k jee lo k ik baar hi milti hay
naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi​

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ahaan zaberdast

 

[Hoorain]

ahaan zaberdast

shanku

 

[Fantasy]

shanku

u cm cm itna acha to likhti haen fir q nahi likhti??

 

[Hoorain]

u cm cm itna acha to likhti haen fir q nahi likhti??

main nasar likhti hun ziada,,poetry 2,4 hi likhi hain

 

[Fantasy]

main nasar likhti hun ziada,,poetry 2,4 hi likhi hain

ahaan gud ...

 

[Rubi]

nicee
ab nhi likhtin?

Gum sum si udaas khari hay kahi
kabhi shokh_o_chanchal, shrarat hay zindagi

bachon ki muskurahaton se masoomiat liye
kabhi kahi tanha si khafa hay zindagi

kabhi rim jhim, kabhi jhilmilaati hui dhoop
kahi pipal k pairon si chaaon hay zindagi

kia kahun main k kiya hay ye zindagi
dhanak k sab rangon se bhari hay zindagi

khul k jee lo k ik baar hi milti hay
naimat_e_khudawandi hay zindagi​

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