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Zee Leo

Zee Leo

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Hmmm ye maine recently he likhi hai mean abhi 30min pehle maine ko nook jhonk nahi ki is main mean main har poetry likh ke 10 dafa us main changing karta hon magar ye waisi ki waisi he post kar raha hoon

Nazren Mila kar Jab Mujhse Tum Nazren Churati Hoo
Kya Hota Hai Haal Mere Dil Ka Jab Tum Muskurati Hoo,

Kabhi Keh Jati Hoo Mujhse Buhat Kuch Bina Rukey
Aur Kabhi Apne Dil Ka Haal Mujhse Tum Chupati Hoo,

Tumhari Wafa Tumhari Mohabbat Par Hai Pora Yaqee'n Mujhe
Phr Kyon Mere Khafa Ho Janey Par Tum Ghabrati Hoo,

Dil Chahta Hai Bhar Loon Bahoo'n Main Tujhey Jaan'an
Jab Kabhi Tum Mujhse Rooth Jati hoo aur Itrati Hoo,

Din Bhar Bus Tera He Khayal Mujhpe Chaya Rehta Hai,
Aur Raaton ko Sapnoo Main Akey Bhi Tum Tarpati Hoo,

Hai Meri Zindagi Namukal aur Tanha Tere Bina Zeeshan
Hota Hai Ehsaas Shidat Se Jab Kucjh Pal Ko Daur Jati Hoo.
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saviou

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zee_leo said:
bhai zeeshan mera takhalus hai hahaha warna mujhe itrana kab ata hai:D
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haha nahi janab zeeshan apka takhalus hai samajh gaye

lekin aap puri poetry me ek ladki k liye keh rahe hain jaise

Dil Chahta Hai Bhar Loon Bahoo'n Main Tujhey Jaan'an
Jab Kabhi Tum Mujhse Rooth Jati hoo aur Itrati Hoo,

to yahan maqta is tarah hona chahiye tha

Hai Meri Zindagi Namukal aur Tanha Tere Bina
Hota Hai Ehsaas Shidat Se Jab Kucjh Pal Ko Daur Jati Hoo.

shayad yahan takhalus k liye jaga nahi banri baki mazirat khwaa hain

lekin bohot hi umdah likha hai apne :)
 
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Atif-adi

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beautiful poet buddy :)

let me add my lines ;)

mita ta hun ab bhi naam tera likh ker apni hatheli per,
kya mujeh yaad ker k ab bhi tum anso bahati ho?
guzer gae din apne,taraste hue bina tere,
bina mere ,meri jaan,tum kese reh pati ho?

;;) ;;) ;;)

kesa??​
 
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nice one..:)
keep it up....
 
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Zee Leo

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saviou said:


haha nahi janab zeeshan apka takhalus hai samajh gaye

lekin aap puri poetry me ek ladki k liye keh rahe hain jaise

Dil Chahta Hai Bhar Loon Bahoo'n Main Tujhey Jaan'an
Jab Kabhi Tum Mujhse Rooth Jati hoo aur Itrati Hoo,

to yahan maqta is tarah hona chahiye tha

Hai Meri Zindagi Namukal aur Tanha Tere Bina
Hota Hai Ehsaas Shidat Se Jab Kucjh Pal Ko Daur Jati Hoo.

shayad yahan takhalus k liye jaga nahi banri baki mazirat khwaa hain

lekin bohot hi umdah likha hai apne :)
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Thanks for ur advice .. Inshallah ainda nook jhook ke baad he pesh karoon ga:D
 
Zee Leo

Zee Leo

~Leo ! The K!ng~
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Atif-adi said:
beautiful poet buddy :)

let me add my lines ;)

mita ta hun ab bhi naam tera likh ker apni hatheli per,
kya mujeh yaad ker k ab bhi tum anso bahati ho?
guzer gae din apne,taraste hue bina tere,
bina mere ,meri jaan,tum kese reh pati ho?

;;) ;;) ;;)

kesa??​
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oho adi bhai tusi great ho nice sharing:)
 
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