my poetry 4

[Toobi]

my godnes...
apnay tm say to poet obal obal k nikal rahay hay.......

beautiful sharing db ..bht piayara likka hay...

 

[Nelly]

nice try DB keep it up

 

[mashraki.larka]

...bht khoob likha hai DB

keep writing Bro

Stay Blessed ..

 

[faari]

ary wahhhh buhat acha likha

 

[Entertainer]

Bahaar Nami ek khatoon hein . . . .
woh acha judge karti hein, . . . .
aur shayer aur shayeri k saath insaaf karti hein . . . .

unkey comments hona bohat lazmi hein yahan . . . yan honey chahiye they . . . .

meri zaati raii he k . . . bohat acha likha he DB ne . . .
Allah Tallah Enkey qalam ko aur ziada acha lekhney ki toufeeq atta farmey . . .

Ameen . ..

 

[*Sonu*]

HMMM THANKS ya 2 aur hain leken wo phr kabhi share karunga and btw thanks sb ko vm karnae kai liye

no need of thnx at all
{(nea)}

 

[Pari]

itna sara

bt bht acha

 

[Wasif Safi]

SubhanALLAH bohot khhob DB

aap bhi chupe rustam ho, kaafi achi hai aapki poetry...

Mazeed share kariyega..

 

[Dreamy Boy]

my godnes...
apnay tm say to poet obal obal k nikal rahay hay.......

beautiful sharing db ..bht piayara likka hay...

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

nice try DB keep it up

thanks nelli

 

[Dreamy Boy]

...bht khoob likha hai DB

keep writing Bro

Stay Blessed ..

pasand karnae ka shukriya bro

 

[Dreamy Boy]

ary wahhhh buhat acha likha

shukriya

 

[Dreamy Boy]

Bahaar Nami ek khatoon hein . . . .
woh acha judge karti hein, . . . .
aur shayer aur shayeri k saath insaaf karti hein . . . .

unkey comments hona bohat lazmi hein yahan . . . yan honey chahiye they . . . .

meri zaati raii he k . . . bohat acha likha he DB ne . . .
Allah Tallah Enkey qalam ko aur ziada acha lekhney ki toufeeq atta farmey . . .
Ameen . ..

ameen thanks bro

 

[Dreamy Boy]

itna sara

bt bht acha

yai bhe kam hai
btw thanks

 

[Dreamy Boy]

SubhanALLAH bohot khhob DB

aap bhi chupe rustam ho, kaafi achi hai aapki poetry...

Mazeed share kariyega..

chupa rustam kahan bhai phele bhe likha hua hai tb ap nae join bhe nahe kiya tha tm
pasand karnaw ka shukriya bhai

 

[Wasif Safi]

Bhai maine to Tm aapke saath hi join kiya lekin shayad meri nazar nahi pari aapki shayari per, agar link denge to behtar hoga..

 

[Dreamy Boy]

ohh sorry bhai phr mujhe nahe pata tha
pk phr kabhi likhe tu ap ko link zaroor dunga

 

[NamaL]

walaikum salam
Aahan very nice sharing janab...............

 

[Atif-adi]

hmmm kabhi kabhi likhta hun tu sad hi hoti hai bhai

hmm per mere chotu bhai u apne jesi koi cute cute karo u ya phir kuch roamtic shyeri ya phir patriotic ya religious tab maza aega na

 

[Atif-adi]

wese shayeri best thi hope k agey bhi likhoge u