My ghazal for my aapi

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S_ChiragH said:
Assalamo alaikum doston.!

here i am with my latest poetry aur shayad pehli dafa itni jaldi likhte hi share kar raha hoon
aur jaise ke titile se pata chal raha hai ke yeh ghazal mene sirf aur sirf apni Aapi tooba ke liye
likha hai aur is ghazal ki wajah yeh hai ke

Chalega gar na likhe woh sharabi pe
chal sakta hai gar na likhe paapi pe
per koi tab tak shayar nahin ban sakta
jab tak ke ghazal na likhe meri aapi pe

to doston aap lougon ke aage peish hai woh ghazal jo mene Tooba aapi ke liye likha hai

Its for one and only Tooba aapi

Saath ho ker meri muskan ban jaati hain
door hone pe aksar bohot rulati hain

apnon ke liye apne sapne nazarandaz karti
ke rouz taaza umeedon ko naiy aag jalati hain

yeh ghussa bhi karti hai bade pyar se
aur jab laad karti hai to bohot satati hain

Rab ke aage sajda reiz ho ker subh o shaam
bazariya e dua doston ko badh se bachati hain

ho jaaye khilaf bhale hi saari dunya per
meri aapi haq ka saath nibha ker dikhati hain

agar koi tang kare in ke doston ko to
yeh use aksar bohot achhe sabaq sikhati hain

sach bohot dekhe hans ke rulane wale magar
Tooba khud ro ker auron ko hansaati hain

kabhi to saadgi se bhi saadi lagti hain yeh
kabhi ustaado ke bhi ustaad ban jaati hain

Ehl e dunya inhein is sabab ghafil samajhta hai
ke yeh aksar har rishta mukammal nibhaati hain

pur noor inke soorat o seerat kyun na hon
ke yeh din raat ibadaton se sawab kamati hain

***S_ChiragH***
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walikum asalam,

kuch bato or rishto ki wazahat k lie alfaz nae miltay....insan bht kuch kehna chata hay,but mnasib alfaz nae miltay usay...

aj mujy b asa he feel horaha hay saif...
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so much saif...

itne piyare dedication k lie...

sacche aj ka din yadgar bana diya u nay maray lie....

sach bht bht ache poem likke hay...even har word say u ka piyar nazar araha hay...

jeetay raho dear...

kuda tumay hamesha khush or abad rakkay...

love u bro...

today i m sooo happy...{(cray)}​
 
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than u soo much my all frndz jinho nay ye poem pasand ki,or maray lie best wishes beji....

kuda ap sabko hamehsa khush rakkay ameen
 
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Zee Leo said:
very nice poetry bro . buhat acha likha hai aap ne . keep it up

and tooba toe tik ke beth nahi rahi jab se suna hai us ne ye ke aap ne us pe poetry likhi hai {(haha)} she will come soon InshaAllah {(thx)}
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kindly apnay ye dant ander karo

he knw k may dhoper ko jesay he i 10 mint k lie,to light chali gaye te mosebat....
 
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hmmm laghta hay kafe samjdar hogaye ho me k sat rehtay rehtay....{(baby})
 
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Miss Khan said:



walikum asalam,

kuch bato or rishto ki wazahat k lie alfaz nae miltay....insan bht kuch kehna chata hay,but mnasib alfaz nae miltay usay...

aj mujy b asa he feel horaha hay saif...



so much saif...

itne piyare dedication k lie...

sacche aj ka din yadgar bana diya u nay maray lie....

sach bht bht ache poem likke hay...even har word say u ka piyar nazar araha hay...

jeetay raho dear...

kuda tumay hamesha khush or abad rakkay...

love u bro...

today i m sooo happy...{(cray)}​
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Bohot bohot bohot bohot shukria aapi ji such mein aap ne ghazal ko sahi se
pehchaana aur sahi alfaaz mein iske baare mein comments diye and your
most welcome sada khush hi rahiye ​
 
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