Maut ka bahana - ADi

[Atif-adi]

my own poetry jo aj hi subah likhi hai
dont know achi hai k nai
bas mood kuch esa ho raha tha to me ne socha kuch likhun

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[Hans_Mukh]

itni dardnaak poetry

ado pagal ho jao ga aik din ager aisa likhtay rahay

seedhay say gher walo ku q nahi bata detay k ma jawan ho gaya hoo meris shadi ker do

 

[Atif-adi]

itni dardnaak poetry

ado pagal ho jao ga aik din ager aisa likhtay rahay

seedhay say gher walo ku q nahi bata detay k ma jawan ho gaya hoo meris shadi ker do

ye poetry mene apne dost k lie likhi hai, jis ki kal death hogai.

 

[*Sonu*]

heart touching poetry & well designed 2
keep sharing​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalamo alaikum Atif bhai

heart touching and painfull poetry with osum design
keep writing desinging and sharing bhai

 

[~Bahaar~]

mei ek hi baat kahungi apse Adi
Maana k apke dost ki judayi janleva aur ye time apke liye mushkil hai
But apko ye yakeen karna hoga k wo abb is duniya me nahi..Hum sabko jana hai ek din..
Ghamgeen hone k bajaye unki maghferat k liye dua karen...
Aur jahan tak is shayeri ka talluq hai apke jazbat apke gham ki akkasi karahe hain...
Allah unki maghferat farmaye aur apko is achanak sadmay se nikale..Ameen

 

[DevilJin]

Adi bro i dunno too exactly .. but hope its so good...

 

[Hoorain]

hmmmmm,,,,

 

[Atif-adi]

mei ek hi baat kahungi apse Adi
Maana k apke dost ki judayi janleva aur ye time apke liye mushkil hai
But apko ye yakeen karna hoga k wo abb is duniya me nahi..Hum sabko jana hai ek din..
Ghamgeen hone k bajaye unki maghferat k liye dua karen...
Aur jahan tak is shayeri ka talluq hai apke jazbat apke gham ki akkasi karahe hain...
Allah unki maghferat farmaye aur apko is achanak sadmay se nikale..Ameen

han manna to parega, per waqt lagega. ghamgeen rehna kaun chahta hai, per kuch bate esi hojati hai jin ka bilkul tasawur nai hota, log chale jate hain per batein yaad reh jati hain, mene in se zada saf dil ka or mehnat wala insan nai dekha tha, kabhi unhu ne kisi ka bura nai chaha.mujhse to bare they per they dost jese hi, bachpan se dekhta aya tha unhe.


kher Allah unki maghfirat farmae, ameen

 

[yoursks]

yes Adi Maut to eik atal haqeeqat hai... or yeah to dunya ka usool hai ko jo iss dunya maen aya hai uss ne eik din jana hai...,

peeche rehne walon ka yeah haq hai keh woh jane walon ke liye (jis ke keh woh ab asal maen haqdaar haen) sadqa-e-jariya jaari karen...

Allah ta'laa aapko sabr-e-jameel ataa farmaye, ameen

 

[faari]

hmmmm such a nice poetry good work

 

[mashraki.larka]

haaaaaaaaaaaah bas Yad baki reh jati hai

naish work boy ..!!

Keep rocking

 

[H@!der]

very nicely presented...

though last shair is a bit..... ahmm ahmm

nicely done mate..

keep coming

 

[HuriYa]

Really Painful poetry..! Laken Dard aur Ghum ki Kafiat ko words main bOhat acha biyan kia hay.

Designing as usuall Zaberdast hay..!

keep it up.

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

boaht deep poetry ki hy Adi
nice designing

 

[RedAngel]

datx really nice adi.............

 

[Wasif Safi]

my own poetry jo aj hi subah likhi hai
dont know achi hai k nai
bas mood kuch esa ho raha tha to me ne socha kuch likhun

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Bohot zabardast likha hai Adi bro aapne to, lekin sach me itni dard naak kyu.....

Aur aap bhi participate kar sakte ho na bro poetry competition me, as every body knows ke aapki designing bohot hi achi hoti hai to kyu nai karte????

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Aare haan sahi idea hai Wasif bhai durust farmaya

Adi bro aapka to andaz e bayan bhi aala hai

So do participate

 

[*khushi*]

wowwwwww zbrdasst

poetry b or designing b bohat achi hai

keep it up

 

[Asma Shah]

awwwwwwwwwwwww...............adi itni sad poetry.hai tu achi..par,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,