*************************khushi****************

[Asma24]

ASSALAM WALIEKUM
DOSTO AAJ BHT TIME K BAD APNI AIK NEW POETRY K SATH HAZIR HOON
AAJ APNI DAIRY UTHAYI AUR PEN PAKR PE KUCH LIKHNA CHAHA TO
YE ALFAZ NIKLYE
I HOPE YE CHOTI SI KOSHISH AA SB KO PASSAND AAYEGI


Rahation me doob ker ubhar aaye jo rahat
to milti hy khushi



muskurahaton ke samander se gehri jo ban jaye muskurahat

to milti hy khushi



socho to her soch se hojaye moatar
jiyo to zindagi ban jaye behtar
to milti hy khushi



hy agar dukh ke kaanton ka safar
dekar khushbo bnajye gulshan
to milti hy khushi



naya pal nayi umang naya hosla le chal
aansouon ko peeche chor ker ummed ki ungli thaam
phr naye mor pe le jaye zindagi
to milti hy khushi



her ik ehsas jo tujh me zinda hy
aaj andhera kal nayi subha le aaye
to milti hy khushi



kabhi haar hy kabhi jeet hy duniya me
jazbey ka daman thaam ker
manzilon ke raston pe le jaye
to milti hy khushi



wo masoom aankhein jo khuwab bunti hain
haqeeqat ka sehra sajye
to milti hy khushi
​

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Bohat Khoob

Bohayt umdah tareeky say app nay khushi ku describe kiya hay

Allah App ku mazeed acah likhnay ki taqt day (Ameen)

 

[Zee Leo]

wow buhaaaaaaat zabardast but thora sa lines ko short kar ke likhti toe aur bhi achi hoti . super sharing

 

[Dreamy Boy]

wah bohat khoob asma bohat acha likha hai
keep it up

 

[mashraki.larka]

Bht khubsurat asmi ..

bht strong word hai U k ..

keep writing ...

 

[Asma24]

Bohat Khoob

Bohayt umdah tareeky say app nay khushi ku describe kiya hay

Allah App ku mazeed acah likhnay ki taqt day (Ameen)

thankuuuuuuuuuuu so much HM bhai
bas ge aapki nazar aik taza poetry pesh hy

 

[Asma24]

wow buhaaaaaaat zabardast but thora sa lines ko short kar ke likhti toe aur bhi achi hoti . super sharing

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu dear and stuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupid zeeeeeeeeeeok master jee next time khyal rahkhngi

 

[MSC]

ahaaaaaan
very well said.....
bht acha likha hai
keep it up Asma sis

 

[Asma24]

wah bohat khoob asma bohat acha likha hai
keep it up

thankuuuu db

 

[Asma24]

Bht khubsurat asmi ..

bht strong word hai U k ..

keep writing ...

THANKUUU ML ..MILI LITTER..HEHEHE THANXX ALOT

 

[Asma24]

ahaaaaaan
very well said.....
bht acha likha hai
keep it up Asma sis

AAWE THANKUU SO MUCH DEAR SISOOO MSC...{(dancing)}

 

[MSC]

Welcome ASMA

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Waah ji umdah bohot hi khoob
aap story type likhti hain gehraiy ke sath
GreaT Poetry aaso baji keep writing and sharing

 

[yoursks]

wah wah...!! bohat umdaah sharing ki hai aap ne...

thanks for wonderful sharing....

 

[Nelly]

beautiful
keep it up....

ASSALAM WALIEKUM
DOSTO AAJ BHT TIME K BAD APNI AIK NEW POETRY K SATH HAZIR HOON
AAJ APNI DAIRY UTHAYI AUR PEN PAKR PE KUCH LIKHNA CHAHA TO
YE ALFAZ NIKLYE
I HOPE YE CHOTI SI KOSHISH AA SB KO PASSAND AAYEGI


Rahation me doob ker ubhar aaye jo rahat
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44539


muskurahaton ke samander se gehri jo ban jaye muskurahat

to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44540


socho to her soch se hojaye moatar
jiyo to zindagi ban jaye behtar
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44541


hy agar dukh ke kaanton ka safar
dekar khushbo bnajye gulshan
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44542


naya pal nayi umang naya hosla le chal
aansouon ko peeche chor ker ummed ki ungli thaam
phr naye mor pe le jaye zindagi
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44546


her ik ehsas jo tujh me zinda hy
aaj andhera kal nayi subha le aaye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44544


kabhi haar hy kabhi jeet hy duniya me
jazbey ka daman thaam ker
manzilon ke raston pe le jaye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44545


wo masoom aankhein jo khuwab bunti hain
haqeeqat ka sehra sajye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44543​

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

very nice *khushi* miss twenty four....

 

[HuriYa]

bOhat khOob sis..!

Bohat acha likha aur sath main PrEsentatiOn bhi bOhat ZabErdast hay..!

MotivatiOnal wOrds n Pix..!

Thx 4 sharin n keep writin mOre..!

 

[Hoorain]

ASSALAM WALIEKUM
DOSTO AAJ BHT TIME K BAD APNI AIK NEW POETRY K SATH HAZIR HOON
AAJ APNI DAIRY UTHAYI AUR PEN PAKR PE KUCH LIKHNA CHAHA TO
YE ALFAZ NIKLYE
I HOPE YE CHOTI SI KOSHISH AA SB KO PASSAND AAYEGI


Rahation me doob ker ubhar aaye jo rahat
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44539


muskurahaton ke samander se gehri jo ban jaye muskurahat

to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44540


socho to her soch se hojaye moatar
jiyo to zindagi ban jaye behtar
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44541


hy agar dukh ke kaanton ka safar
dekar khushbo bnajye gulshan
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44542


naya pal nayi umang naya hosla le chal
aansouon ko peeche chor ker ummed ki ungli thaam
phr naye mor pe le jaye zindagi
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44546


her ik ehsas jo tujh me zinda hy
aaj andhera kal nayi subha le aaye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44544


kabhi haar hy kabhi jeet hy duniya me
jazbey ka daman thaam ker
manzilon ke raston pe le jaye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44545


wo masoom aankhein jo khuwab bunti hain
haqeeqat ka sehra sajye
to milti hy khushi
View attachment 44543​

i just love the way you present ur feelings
really beautiful words waqe hi har mor pe "khushi" hay zindagi bas samajhne ki baat hay
thanx for this sweet sharing keep it up

 

[*khushi*]

waalikumaslam

wow very well done

u ny to me pr poetry likh daali

keep it up

 

[*khushi*]

very nice *khushi* miss twenty four....

kia mtbl? ({kopping)}