kabi...

[Qawareer]

kisi maqtab mein parhaye nhi jate ye nasab kabi..
smjhaye smjh nhi aate ishq k aadab kabi....

lga kar qafal dil ko kahan dhondta hai khud ko..
nhi aate yon zindgiyon mein inqalab kabi..

shehar-e-dil mein har so uthta teri yaadon ka dhoyan
nhi murjhate muhabbaton k ye gulab kbi..

shab-e-hijran me yahi soch ke mondi hain ankhain main ne
meri needon mein b shamil hon tere khawab kabi..

ab k badalte mosamon me laot aao tum b..
Dil k Qirtas pe bhar jao chahaton k rang-o-aab kabi

faqat tera sath hi hasal-e-zeesat hai wagarna..
rah badal lete hain ye dost ehbaab kabi..​

 

[Prince-Farry]

wowwwwwwwwwwww...mujhe to samjh hi nai lagi poetry ki..itni hard urdu...
but i think..its superb...but not better than mine..or elsei would have understood

 

[Toobi]

anno very nice siso,bht he khoob intekhab hay....

 

[Jiya.]

wow....i like this..interesting...nice siso ..lovely thread

 

[Hoorain]

wowww its beautiful MASHAALLAH

realy bohat zabardast alfaaz istamal kiye u ne annu

awesome

ab k badalte mosamon me laot aao tum b..
Dil k Qirtas pe bhar jao chahaton k rang-o-aab kabi


​

 

[Dawn]

wow mashaAllah aapki urdu adab se ye dilchaspi qabil e fakhr hai.urdu waqayi ek shereen zuban hai.aapne aur ek bahetreen kalaam likha hai.ise mahfooz rakhiye taake aapko ek kitab ki shakl dene me aasani ho.bahot acchi koshish sister.

 

[Zee Leo]

hmmm buhat khoob

 

[Amreen]

bohat hi umda sharing Annu....bohat hi khushi huwi janke ke tum itni umda shayri bhi ker sakti ho...keep it up dear...

 

[javedhakim2000]

Nice Sharing...

 

[Qawareer]

meri kawish pasnd krne k lye shukaria..

 

[Qawareer]

siso ye main ne likhi hai.....

anno very nice siso,bht he khoob intekhab hay....

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

nice siso .

gud thanx for sharing

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

nice siso .

gud thanx for sharing

 

[Qawareer]

wow mashaAllah aapki urdu adab se ye dilchaspi qabil e fakhr hai.urdu waqayi ek shereen zuban hai.aapne aur ek bahetreen kalaam likha hai.ise mahfooz rakhiye taake aapko ek kitab ki shakl dene me aasani ho.bahot acchi koshish sister.

shukaria...
lekin kitab..... ye to boht bari bat keh di ap ne
khair mazeed kuch zehan me aaya to zarur likhon gi

 

[NamaL]

very nice sharing...........

 

[mashraki.larka]

bohat khoob annu .. ..

 

[mirza37]

bohit khoooooooooooooooooooooooooooob annu siso

 

[Nelly]

kisi maqtab mein parhaye nhi jate ye nasab kabi..
smjhaye smjh nhi aate ishq k aadab kabi....

lga kar qafal dil ko kahan dhondta hai khud ko..
nhi aate yon zindgiyon mein inqalab kabi..

shehar-e-dil mein har so uthta teri yaadon ka dhoyan
nhi murjhate muhabbaton k ye gulab kbi..

shab-e-hijran me yahi soch ke mondi hain ankhain main ne
meri needon mein b shamil hon tere khawab kabi..

ab k badalte mosamon me laot aao tum b..
Dil k Qirtas pe bhar jao chahaton k rang-o-aab kabi

faqat tera sath hi hasal-e-zeesat hai wagarna..
rah badal lete hain ye dost ehbaab kabi..​

outstanding poetry sisso bless x

 

[New Wolf]

shab-e-hijran me yahi soch ke mondi hain ankhain main ne
meri needon mein b shamil hon tere khawab kabi..


hmmmmmmmmmmmmm wonder full but iska matlab mjhe nhi pta...(QIRTAS)?

 

[Qawareer]

shab-e-hijran me yahi soch ke mondi hain ankhain main ne
meri needon mein b shamil hon tere khawab kabi..


hmmmmmmmmmmmmm wonder full but iska matlab mjhe nhi pta...(qirtas)?

qirtas ka matlb safah hai..
Jis pe likhte hain