Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya
aise mein mazeed yaad aata gaya

ghum e judaiy jab use kam lagi to
waqt e milan berukhi se satata gaya

wafa ke badle kabhi wafa nahin milti
yeh naya sabaq mujhe sikhata gaya

thi ishq mein qurbani dene ki aadat
chout lete gaye woh pohnchata gaya

hum ne usse sada wafa maangi
woh ta akhir bewafaiy nibhata gaya

pachtata jo woh murh ke dekh leta
ke woh jaate ik ChiragH bujhata gaya

***S_ChiragH***
 

mashraki.larka

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KHUDA KI BASTI
Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya
aise mein mazeed yaad aata gaya

ghum e judaiy jab use kam lagi to
waqt e milan berukhi se satata gaya

wafa ke badle kabhi wafa nahin milti
yeh naya sabaq mujhe sikhata gaya

thi ishq mein qurbani dene ki aadat
chout lete gaye woh pohnchata gaya

hum ne usse sada wafa maangi
woh ta akhir bewafaiy nibhata gaya

pachtata jo woh murh ke dekh leta
ke woh jaate ik ChiragH bujhata gaya

***S_ChiragH***
:-bd Masha Allah beautiful chiragh

improving Day by Day

Stay Blessed ..;)
 
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Nelly

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wah bhai, bohat acchi poem likhi hai:)
mazeed likhte rahiye...
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Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya
aise mein mazeed yaad aata gaya

ghum e judaiy jab use kam lagi to
waqt e milan berukhi se satata gaya

wafa ke badle kabhi wafa nahin milti
yeh naya sabaq mujhe sikhata gaya

thi ishq mein qurbani dene ki aadat
chout lete gaye woh pohnchata gaya

hum ne usse sada wafa maangi
woh ta akhir bewafaiy nibhata gaya

pachtata jo woh murh ke dekh leta
ke woh jaate ik ChiragH bujhata gaya

***S_ChiragH***
 
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Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya
aise mein mazeed yaad aata gaya

ghum e judaiy jab use kam lagi to
waqt e milan berukhi se satata gaya

wafa ke badle kabhi wafa nahin milti
yeh naya sabaq mujhe sikhata gaya

thi ishq mein qurbani dene ki aadat
chout lete gaye woh pohnchata gaya

hum ne usse sada wafa maangi
woh ta akhir bewafaiy nibhata gaya

pachtata jo woh murh ke dekh leta
ke woh jaate ik ChiragH bujhata gaya

***S_ChiragH***

bht he khoob............khobsorat ghazal again....keep writing poet ji...........
 

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Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya

Jab woh yaar mujhe bhulata gaya
aise mein mazeed yaad aata gaya

ghum e judaiy jab use kam lagi to
waqt e milan berukhi se satata gaya

wafa ke badle kabhi wafa nahin milti
yeh naya sabaq mujhe sikhata gaya

thi ishq mein qurbani dene ki aadat
chout lete gaye woh pohnchata gaya

hum ne usse sada wafa maangi
woh ta akhir bewafaiy nibhata gaya


pachtata jo woh murh ke dekh leta
ke woh jaate ik ChiragH bujhata gaya

***S_ChiragH***
Assalam alaikum saif bhai
mashaAllah se aapne bahot umda ghazal likhi hai saif.bus ek do jagah mujhe is bundh me kuch ghaami nazar aayi.wo ye k wafa keliye nibhaana likha jasakta hai laikin bewafayi keliye nibhata gaya sahih nahi lagta aur dosre ye k chout lete gaye wo pahunchata gaya ye kuch samajh nahi aaya.
 

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Assalam alaikum saif bhai
mashaAllah se aapne bahot umda ghazal likhi hai saif.bus ek do jagah mujhe is bundh me kuch ghaami nazar aayi.wo ye k wafa keliye nibhaana likha jasakta hai laikin bewafayi keliye nibhata gaya sahih nahi lagta aur dosre ye k chout lete gaye wo pahunchata gaya ye kuch samajh nahi aaya.
hmmmmmm
yeh khamiyan mujhe bhi dikhi theen
per kam alfaz aur doosre ashaar se milane
ke liye karna para:(

anywayz thanks for liking the ghazal
 
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