Ghazal Competition {august 2013}

[sabeha]

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Mujhe meri kasam de do

Agar mujhse mohabbat hai

Tumhaare gam ko apanaa gam banaa lo
To karaar aaye
... Tumhaaraa dard seene mein chhoopaa lo
To karaar aaye
Woh har shay jo
Tumhe dukh de
Mujhe mere sanam de do

Agar mujhse mohabbat hai

Shareek-e-zindagi ko kyon
Shareek-e-ghum nahi karate
dukhon ko baatakar kyon
In dukhon ko kaam nahi karate
Tadap is dil ki thodee see
Mujhe mere sanam de do

Agar mujhse mohabbat hai

In aakhon mein naa ab mujh ko kabhi aasoo nazar aaye
Sadaa hasatee rahe aankhe
Sadaa ye honthh musakaye
Mujhe apani sabhi aahein
Sabhi dard-o-alam de do

Agar mujhse mohabbat hai
Mujhe sab apane gam de do
In aankhon kaa har ek aansoo
Mujhe meri kasam de do ...

v nyse....

 

[Azeyy]

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Mohabbat hai ek khwaab yaa ek junoon hai?​

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai tto kyun hai​

Mohabbat mein to sirf betabiyan hai​

Toh phir kyun mohabbat mein​

Dil ko sukoon hai... sukoon hai​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat... ​

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Mohabbat hai dariya, mohabbat kinara​

Mohabbat sitam hai, mohabbat sahara​

Mohabbat idhar bhi, mohabbat udhar bhi​

Mohabbat nazar hai, mohabbat nazaara​

Koi ye bata de.. bata de.. bata de..​

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Mohabbat mein sab kuch haseen lagta hai kyun​

Sitam jo kare dil nasheen lagta hai kyun​

Mohabbat hai jiss se, woh dil tode bhi to​

Bura phir bhi dil ko nahi lagta hai kyun?​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat...​

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Naa samjha koi wo adaa hai mohabbat​

Ki inaam hai ya sazaa hai mohabbat​

Kisi ne kaha hai tto kyun ye kaha hai​

Mohabbat khuda hai, khuda hai mohabbat.​

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Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat?​

Mahabbat...​

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@fareena_01 @hafaz @sizs @Hoorain @armaghankhan @illusionist @Azeyy @whiteros @Shizuka @Mahiya​

nicee gazal

 

[faari]

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Mohabbat hai ek khwaab yaa ek junoon hai?​

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai tto kyun hai​

Mohabbat mein to sirf betabiyan hai​

Toh phir kyun mohabbat mein​

Dil ko sukoon hai... sukoon hai​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat... ​

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Mohabbat hai dariya, mohabbat kinara​

Mohabbat sitam hai, mohabbat sahara​

Mohabbat idhar bhi, mohabbat udhar bhi​

Mohabbat nazar hai, mohabbat nazaara​

Koi ye bata de.. bata de.. bata de..​

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Mohabbat mein sab kuch haseen lagta hai kyun​

Sitam jo kare dil nasheen lagta hai kyun​

Mohabbat hai jiss se, woh dil tode bhi to​

Bura phir bhi dil ko nahi lagta hai kyun?​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat...​

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Naa samjha koi wo adaa hai mohabbat​

Ki inaam hai ya sazaa hai mohabbat​

Kisi ne kaha hai tto kyun ye kaha hai​

Mohabbat khuda hai, khuda hai mohabbat.​

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Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat?​

Mahabbat...​

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@fareena_01 @hafaz @sizs @Hoorain @armaghankhan @illusionist @Azeyy @whiteros @Shizuka @Mahiya​

beautiful @sabeha

 

[vamp545]

Ham un se aaj iZhaar e tamanna kar ke chhoReNge.
Ba dastoor e moHabbat dil ka sauda kar ke chhoReNge.
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Wafaa ke badle un ko apna dil dene ki Thaani hai,
Agar ulTa bhi hoga kuchh to seedha kar ke chhoReNge.
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BigaaReNge na ham apni Taraf se kaam koie bhi,
UnheN jaisa lagega Theek waisa kar ke chhoReNge.
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NahiN ye fikr apni jo bhi hoga dekha jaaye ga,
Hamari fikr ye hai jo bhi hoga kar ke chhoReNge.
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Na chhoReNge ham un ko dekhne ki koi bhi Soorat,
Ham apne dil ka har armaan poora kar ke chhoReNge.
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KaheN sab dekhne waale hameN ye un ka a’ashiq hai,
Gali meN un ki ek aisa tamasha kar ke chhoReNge.
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Na bakhsheNge unheN ham ye jahaN kya us jahaN tak bhi,
HaiN khud bhi be khabar ham aur kya kya kar ke chhoReNge.
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Ye maana ham ne yaaron faayeda kuchh bhi nahiN is meN,
Khasaara hi sahi apna, khasaara kar ke chhoReNge.​

 

[sabeha]

nicee gazal

thanx [DOUBLEPOST=1377863188][/DOUBLEPOST]

beautiful @sabeha

thanxs dear[DOUBLEPOST=1377864248][/DOUBLEPOST]

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Kya hai Mohabbat ​

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Mohabbat hai ek khwaab yaa ek junoon hai?​

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai tto kyun hai​

Mohabbat mein to sirf betabiyan hai​

Toh phir kyun mohabbat mein​

Dil ko sukoon hai... sukoon hai​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat... ​

​

Mohabbat hai dariya, mohabbat kinara​

Mohabbat sitam hai, mohabbat sahara​

Mohabbat idhar bhi, mohabbat udhar bhi​

Mohabbat nazar hai, mohabbat nazaara​

Koi ye bata de.. bata de.. bata de..​

​

Mohabbat mein sab kuch haseen lagta hai kyun​

Sitam jo kare dil nasheen lagta hai kyun​

Mohabbat hai jiss se, woh dil tode bhi to​

Bura phir bhi dil ko nahi lagta hai kyun?​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat...​

​

Naa samjha koi wo adaa hai mohabbat​

Ki inaam hai ya sazaa hai mohabbat​

Kisi ne kaha hai tto kyun ye kaha hai​

Mohabbat khuda hai, khuda hai mohabbat.​

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Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat?​

Mahabbat...​

very nice
thanks for sharing

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View attachment 68393 Kya hai Mohabbat View attachment 68361​

Mohabbat hai ek khwaab yaa ek junoon hai?​

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai tto kyun hai​

Mohabbat mein to sirf betabiyan hai​

Toh phir kyun mohabbat mein​

Dil ko sukoon hai... sukoon hai​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat... ​

Mohabbat hai dariya, mohabbat kinara​

Mohabbat sitam hai, mohabbat sahara​

Mohabbat idhar bhi, mohabbat udhar bhi​

Mohabbat nazar hai, mohabbat nazaara​

Koi ye bata de.. bata de.. bata de..​

Mohabbat mein sab kuch haseen lagta hai kyun​

Sitam jo kare dil nasheen lagta hai kyun​

Mohabbat hai jiss se, woh dil tode bhi to​

Bura phir bhi dil ko nahi lagta hai kyun?​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat...​

Naa samjha koi wo adaa hai mohabbat​

Ki inaam hai ya sazaa hai mohabbat​

Kisi ne kaha hai tto kyun ye kaha hai​

Mohabbat khuda hai, khuda hai mohabbat.​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat?​

Mahabbat...​

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@fareena_01 @hafaz @sizs @Hoorain @armaghankhan @illusionist @Azeyy @whiteros @Shizuka @Mahiya​

View attachment 68393 Kya hai Mohabbat View attachment 68361​

Mohabbat hai ek khwaab yaa ek junoon hai?​

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai tto kyun hai​

Mohabbat mein to sirf betabiyan hai​

Toh phir kyun mohabbat mein​

Dil ko sukoon hai... sukoon hai​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat... ​

Mohabbat hai dariya, mohabbat kinara​

Mohabbat sitam hai, mohabbat sahara​

Mohabbat idhar bhi, mohabbat udhar bhi​

Mohabbat nazar hai, mohabbat nazaara​

Koi ye bata de.. bata de.. bata de..​

Mohabbat mein sab kuch haseen lagta hai kyun​

Sitam jo kare dil nasheen lagta hai kyun​

Mohabbat hai jiss se, woh dil tode bhi to​

Bura phir bhi dil ko nahi lagta hai kyun?​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat? Mohabbat...​

Naa samjha koi wo adaa hai mohabbat​

Ki inaam hai ya sazaa hai mohabbat​

Kisi ne kaha hai tto kyun ye kaha hai​

Mohabbat khuda hai, khuda hai mohabbat.​

Koi ye bata de ki, kya hai mohabbat?​

Mahabbat...​

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@fareena_01 @hafaz @sizs @Hoorain @armaghankhan @illusionist @Azeyy @whiteros @Shizuka @Mahiya​

1. ,@Lightman @Abidi @Julie @sanandereas @Jungli @Ammara6237 @Nelly @Hoorain @Toobi

 

[kimone]

Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi,
Jab chand sitare chamak rahe hon,
Jab yadon k phool mehek rahe hon,
Jab deed ko nain taras rahe hon,
jab ankhon se ansu baras rahe hon,
Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi
Jab tanhai se dil ghabrae ga,
Jub tumhein akela pan sataye ga,
Jab koi khuab he na aye ga,
Jab phool kitab mein he reh jayenge,
Meri pagal mohabbat tumhein yaad aye gi

bht achi hai

 

[faari]

@Azeyy thread closed nae howa

 

[Azeyy]

@Azeyy thread closed nae howa

hu jaye gi dnt b wori

 

[Hindostani]

Ham un se aaj iZhaar e tamanna kar ke chhoReNge.​

Ba dastoor e moHabbat dil ka sauda kar ke chhoReNge.​

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Wafaa ke badle un ko apna dil dene ki Thaani hai,​

Agar ulTa bhi hoga kuchh to seedha kar ke chhoReNge.​

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BigaaReNge na ham apni Taraf se kaam koie bhi,​

UnheN jaisa lagega Theek waisa kar ke chhoReNge.​

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NahiN ye fikr apni jo bhi hoga dekha jaaye ga,​

Hamari fikr ye hai jo bhi hoga kar ke chhoReNge.​

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Na chhoReNge ham un ko dekhne ki koi bhi Soorat,​

Ham apne dil ka har armaan poora kar ke chhoReNge.​

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KaheN sab dekhne waale hameN ye un ka a’ashiq hai,​

Gali meN un ki ek aisa tamasha kar ke chhoReNge.​

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Na bakhsheNge unheN ham ye jahaN kya us jahaN tak bhi,​

HaiN khud bhi be khabar ham aur kya kya kar ke chhoReNge.​

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Ye maana ham ne yaaron faayeda kuchh bhi nahiN is meN,​

Khasaara hi sahi apna, khasaara kar ke chhoReNge.​

MaiN moHtaram "vamp545" ji se guzaarish karta hooN ke is ghazal meN ba ghair taSarruf kiye is ki aSli shakl meN post kareN. Kisi ko bhi ye Haq HaaSil nahiN hai ke wo kisi doosre ke kalaam meN apni Taraf se taSarruf kare. KhuSooSan shae'r ke maqTa' meN taSarruf, sab se baRi akhlaaqi ghalaTi hai aur insaani Huqooq meN jurm ki Haiciyyat rakhta hai. Mujhe ummeed hai ke aap kalaam ko usi TarH post kareNge jis TarH shae'r ne post kiya hai

 

[vamp545]

@Azeyy thread closed nae howa

MaiN moHtaram "vamp545" ji se guzaarish karta hooN ke is ghazal meN ba ghair taSarruf kiye is ki aSli shakl meN post kareN. Kisi ko bhi ye Haq HaaSil nahiN hai ke wo kisi doosre ke kalaam meN apni Taraf se taSarruf kare. KhuSooSan shae'r ke maqTa' meN taSarruf, sab se baRi akhlaaqi ghalaTi hai aur insaani Huqooq meN jurm ki Haiciyyat rakhta hai. Mujhe ummeed hai ke aap kalaam ko usi TarH post kareNge jis TarH shae'r ne post kiya hai

jaisa aap theek samjhe insha allah aesa hi hoga aage se bhai jaan