~*CHUp Kiun HOO?*~

[NamaL]

sisooooooooooooo really nice sharing n beautiful thread.................

 

[Asma Shah]

oohhhhh myy GOD....bht ala hai..............

 

[*khushi*]

jab uski chaap k peechay gai thi tu

Hawa tumne hi mera bheega pallo sukhaya tha

Hawa tum sun rahi thi na k jab usne kaha tha

"Muntazir rehna main aoo ga!"

Hawa...tum tu ghawaii hoo k tab se ab talaak

zbrdssst

 

[~Bahaar~]

ma nay kiya koe galt baat keh di bahaaraaaaaaaaa

Meri sharing ki tareef nahi horahi ...itna acha intekhab e sukhan hai..

 

[~Bahaar~]

wah jee wah bht achi poetry bahar sis and so beautifully designed...

Hausla afzayi k liye shukrya sisss

 

[~Bahaar~]

wonderful...

thnxx

 

[~Bahaar~]

U ki shayari ke saath saath designing bhi bohot achi hai Baharu..

Aur shayari bhi awsome hai...

thnkooo bhayi

 

[~Bahaar~]

Aap ki shairi or designing dono achi hain

thnxx sisss

 

[~Bahaar~]

Wa'alaikum assalam Bahaar sis

GreaT sharing aur kya hi ghumnaak peigham

diya hai hawa ke se mukhatib ho ker

hmmm...Shayeri ko to ek shayer hi samjh sakta hai

 

[~Bahaar~]

sisooooooooooooo really nice sharing n beautiful thread.................

shukrya siss

 

[~Bahaar~]

oohhhhh myy GOD....bht ala hai..............

Ji mamnoon

 

[~Bahaar~]

jab uski chaap k peechay gai thi tu

Hawa tumne hi mera bheega pallo sukhaya tha

Hawa tum sun rahi thi na k jab usne kaha tha

"Muntazir rehna main aoo ga!"

Hawa...tum tu ghawaii hoo k tab se ab talaak

zbrdssst

Thanxxx khushi

 

[Dawn]

mashaAllah bahaar.
bahot khoob likha aapne.
kaafi arse baad mujhe firse koi maazi ki taraf dhakel gaya.
ye kia kia tumne.
apne jazbaat ko lafzaon me dhaalne ka hunar bahot accha hai aapka.

 

[Pari]

nice...

 

[~Ambitiou$ Girl~]

koi chand ko apni story btata hai to koi suraj ko
koi sham ko to koi raat ko
but bahar to sab ko hi peeche chor gaye
hawa ko apni story suna dali
unique choice

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

kamal kar diya bahar wah
bohat acha hy or heart touching bhi

 

[Zee Leo]

very beautiful and decoration bhi zabardast hai

 

[~Bahaar~]

Thanxxx 4 ur appreciation guyss

 

[St0rm]

zabardastt... boht achi poetry likhi apne bahaar

 

[Rubi]

ahan..nysh..