chalo choro.....!

[Toobi]

 

[Hoorain]

wowwww awesome toobi suerbbbbbbb

 

[~Bahaar~]

waaah kya baat hai tooba....
bahut Umdaa..

Ghaira hay is tarah mujhe wehshat k jaal ne
Sab khwab mere doob gaye is malaal mein
Mujh se nazer chura k guzerne lagi hawa
Ane lagi ju hijer ki khushbo wisaal mein
Hon sa’at e azaab mein kyoun main abhi talak?
Ik umer se ghiri hon isi ik sawaal mein
Bechainiaan tamam hi main us ki oorh lon



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[Toobi]

thank u thank u...maray tread ko b kise nay pasand kia...

 

[~Bahaar~]

Kyun aapka THREAD kaccha hai kya??

U rock Toobi...go ahead.... =D>


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[Atif-adi]

nice toobi

 

[Toobi]

thank u sister,thx alottttttttt

 

[~Bahaar~]

U R Welcome Dear...

Dil udhaas hai bahut koyi paigaam hi likh do
Tum apna naam na likho, gum-naam hi likh do

Meri qismat mein gham-e-tanhayi hai lekin
Tamaam umr na likho magar ek shaam hi likh do


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[Toobi]

wow wow renger,zabardast...............
thx adi...........

 

[~Bahaar~]

Ab zid pe aa gaye ho to ye kaam bhi kero
Khud ko humaray naam say badnaam bhi kero
Ye kaya k in ruton mein bhi qaid_e_ana ki zid
Barpa bahaar mein koi kohraam bhi kero


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[St0rm]

nice shairing tooba....

 

[Toobi]

thx storm bhi...

 

[Zee Leo]

I Like poetry but not his voice dard nahi hai is bandey ki awaz main

 

[Toobi]

ok,kal may apni awaz may record kar k pesh karo ge...

 

[imran255]

very nice.

wow ranger nice lines.

 

[~Bahaar~]

ok,kal may apni awaz may record kar k pesh karo ge...

Waise tumhari awaaz kitni meethi hai Toobaa...
lataji sharma rahin thin tumko sunkar..
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[~Bahaar~]

very nice.

wow ranger nice lines.

Thanks a lot ..

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[Hannia]

mjy koye nhe achi lgti poetry..........

 

[Noor_Afridi]

niCe Sharing TOoba
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[Amreen]

Toobi dear...bohat bohat bohat khoob...kya kehne ...