Berukhi uski ajeeb si.....

[Asma Shah]

(asda)

paish ata hai wo iss qadar berukhi se hum se
k kanmp jati hai rooh tak meri...
sirf ik talkh e nazar se hi...
nikal hi na jae kahen jaan meri
nahi krty baat hum iss dar se
k phir na naseeb ho uski ye berukhi bhi.....

{(silly)}................................{(silly)}

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Nice poetry
kuch toota phoota hum bhi peish karte hain


ghum sehna aadat thi woh ise khushi samajh bethe
hum udaas the woh use be rukhi samajh bethe

qismat ke hum jiske yaadon mein ro rahe the chiragH
woh apne moujoodgi ke sabab dukhi samajh bethe

***S_ChiragH***
​

 

[Atif-adi]

wah kya khoob kaha hai
yaha to sab hi shayer nikle ADi,
ek kambakhat hum hi rickshaw k piche se sher churane wale reh gae ({kopping)}

 

[mashraki.larka]

naish Shah

 

[Rubi]

walaikumsalam sis...
nyc effort sis...

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Superb sharing

 

[faari]

(asda)

paish ata hai wo iss qadar berukhi se hum se
k kanmp jati hai rooh tak meri...
sirf ik talkh e nazar se hi...
nikal hi na jae kahen jaan meri
nahi krty baat hum iss dar se
k phir na naseeb ho uski ye berukhi bhi.....

{(silly)}................................{(silly)}

nice sis great keep it up

 

[faari]

Nice poetry
kuch toota phoota hum bhi peish karte hain


ghum sehna aadat thi woh ise khushi samajh bethe
hum udaas the woh use be rukhi samajh bethe

qismat ke hum jiske yaadon mein ro rahe the chiragH
woh apne moujoodgi ke sabab dukhi samajh bethe

***S_ChiragH***
​

well bro kuch main bi add kru is me tu parhye

gham sehna aadat thi woh ise khushi samajh bethe
hum udaas the woh use be rukhi samajh bethe

jb pucha us ne tu hum ne kaha kuch bi nahi
wo hmara inkaar besabaab yonhi samjh bethy

qismat ke hum jiske yaadon mein ro rahe the chiragH
woh apne moujoodgi ke sabab dukhi samajh bethe

 

[whiteros]

wah kya khoob kaha hai
yaha to sab hi shayer nikle ADi,
ek kambakhat hum hi rickshaw k piche se sher churane wale reh gae ({kopping)}

hahaha chalo to ap bhi try kr lo maybe

 

[faari]

wah kya khoob kaha hai
yaha to sab hi shayer nikle ADi,
ek kambakhat hum hi rickshaw k piche se sher churane wale reh gae ({kopping)}

{(haha)}{(haha)}

 

[Asma24]

waliekum assalam arey wah asma u b shayer nikli
wahhh bhai bht acha likh hy u n keep it up dear

 

[Asma24]

wah kya khoob kaha hai
yaha to sab hi shayer nikle ADi,
ek kambakhat hum hi rickshaw k piche se sher churane wale reh gae ({kopping)}

{(haha)}{(haha)}hahaha adi u are so funny

 

[Asma Shah]

Nice poetry
kuch toota phoota hum bhi peish karte hain


ghum sehna aadat thi woh ise khushi samajh bethe
hum udaas the woh use be rukhi samajh bethe

qismat ke hum jiske yaadon mein ro rahe the chiragH
woh apne moujoodgi ke sabab dukhi samajh bethe

***S_ChiragH***
​

​BHT ZABARDAST Ans krty ho ap..hahah...bht nice hai...

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

well bro kuch main bi add kru is me tu parhye

gham sehna aadat thi woh ise khushi samajh bethe
hum udaas the woh use be rukhi samajh bethe

jb pucha us ne tu hum ne kaha kuch bi nahi
wo hmara inkaar besabaab yonhi samjh bethy

qismat ke hum jiske yaadon mein ro rahe the chiragH
woh apne moujoodgi ke sabab dukhi samajh bethe

Waah ji waah eik aur shayara aur woh bhi umda wali
bohot khoob behna humari to balle balle hai
ke sub hi shayar shaayra aa rahe hain hum sub
ke liye kuch khaas hona chahiye TM pe
jisse hum sub mil ker kuch na kuch karein

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

​BHT ZABARDAST Ans krty ho ap..hahah...bht nice hai...

Bohot bohot shukria Asma sis aur achha hansti ho aap younhi sada hanste rahiye

well

Na mann mein buraiy na dil mein kharaabi
bas is sabab seekhe hum hazir jawaabi

***S_ChiragH***

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah kya khoob kaha hai
yaha to sab hi shayer nikle ADi,
ek kambakhat hum hi rickshaw k piche se sher churane wale reh gae ({kopping)}

Hahha bhai

sach kahun to rikshaw ke peechhe ki poetry parhne ke liye hum bhi uske
peechhe dour lagate the bhai aur jab tak sheir na parh lete thakte na the

per chori kabhi nahin ki kisi aur ki poetry

shayari parhne ka mujhe bachpan se bohot se zyada shouq hai

 

[Asma Shah]

hahaha....adii....bht galat baat hai...chori nai krty....han albata rikshw k peechy likhi poetry mn b parhti hn,na sirf rikshaw blky truck r har uss cheez ko jiss k peechy poetry ya kuch b likha ho.....hehehe..

 

[Atif-adi]

hahaha chalo to ap bhi try kr lo maybe

nai esi bat nai hai hum apne songs khud likhte hain

 

[Atif-adi]

{(haha)}{(haha)}

kabhi kabhi trucks k piche se bhi chura leta hun sher

 

[Atif-adi]

{(haha)}{(haha)}hahaha adi u are so funny

aray nai suchi u bhi kabhi ghor se perna bare maze maze k sher likhe hote hain

jese k,

musafir hun yaaro safar per ja raha hun,
pait ki khatir , rikshaw chala raha hun...

wah wah kitni gehrai hai is me dekho