Barsaat

[Deep Silence]

buhot ala janab

 

[d3siikurii]

Niice

 

[lavina]

Excellent work Zee keep it up ​

 

[Zee Leo]

wssalam u alaikum..
aala..khayalat umdah hain..lekin qafia nhi hai ghazal me..
best of luck..

shukrya mohtarma .. well zaroori nahi har ghazal ko qafiye ke qoze main band kar ke pesh kya jaye buhat si ghazlen baghair hum kafiye ke bhi hoti hain aur ye un main se aik hai

 

[Zee Leo]

bohat achi koshish
hai zee.

shukrya mohtarma

 

[Zee Leo]

Ye Kaisi Kismat Pai Maine Aur Ya Kaisa Roog Mujhe Laga Hai Zeeshan
Woh Jo Qadam Qadam Pe Sath Tha Ub Kahan Dhondo usey Barsat Main


umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
keep it uppp

shukar hai u ko pasand agai thankssss

 

[Zee Leo]

very nyc zee

is ko parh kar mjhy aik bachpan ki game yaad a gyi

Thankssssss saraaaa{(dancing)} aur kaun sa game

 

[Zee Leo]

walaikumsaalam...
nyc poetry zeee...

Thanksssssssssssss

 

[Zee Leo]

ahaan bohat alaaaaaaa hay janaaaaab​

u ko samajh agai Thankssss

 

[Zee Leo]

bohit hi umda sharing shani baba ,,
pic abhi baqi hay dost ,,,,
baqi bhi likhooooooo {(dancing)}

shukrya bhaya .. baqi ki baqi main na

 

[Zee Leo]

W/salam
bht khoobsurat sharing ki hai dear
GOOD LUCK

shukryaaaaaaa ji

 

[Zee Leo]

nice sharing zee leo
keep shraing*{(dancing)}

Thanks nawab bhai {(dancing)}

 

[Zee Leo]

buhot ala janab

shukrya mohtarma

 

[Zee Leo]

Niice

Thanksssssssss

 

[Zee Leo]

Excellent work Zee keep it up ​

Thankssss Lavinaa {(dancing)}

 

[Dawn]

mashaAllah bahot khoob likha aapne bhai aur sirf half hour me itni acchi ghazal
laikin ek cheez hai isme wo ye k aap jo bund likhte hain wo kuch ziada taweel hota hai.isse thoda sa shot karne ki koshish karen warna poetry ka maza qatam hojata hai.

 

[Nelly]

walaikum assalam
wese b aaj kal barsaat ka mausam hai so kya chun k poetry likhi hai zee
its really very nice

Assalam Walaikum here is My Sharing on Barsaat well abhi recently half hours pehle likhi Hai


Barsaat Main


Kuch Qisey Puraney Yaad Aye,Ye Ankhain Num Huwin Barsaat Main
Meri Hasrat Bhari Nazrein Aaj Usey Dhondti Rahien is Barsaat Main

Har Garaj Par Ye Mera Dil Tarpa, Har Karak Par ye Mera Dil Tarsa Hai
Jo Yaad Aya mujhe Uska Seham Kar Mujhse Lipat Jana In Barsaat Main

Ye Kaisi Aag Lagi Hai Mere Dil Main Ke Dhuwa Dhuwa Sa Hai Badan
Jab Se Totey Us Se Rishtey Natey Phr Na Mili Koi Khushi Barsaat Main

Har Shay Ko Nikhaar Agaya, Aur Bujhi Hai ub Pyas In Sehraon ki Bhi
Kab Khiley Gi Kali Mere Dil Main Ye Kis Se Pochon ub Barsaat Main

Ye Kaisi Kismat Pai Maine Aur Ya Kaisa Roog Mujhe Laga Hai Zeeshan
Woh Jo Qadam Qadam Pe Sath Tha Ub Kahan Dhondo usey Barsat Main

Chupa Hai Jo Soraj Badaloon Main Woh Bhi Youn He Ojhal Hai Mujhse
Shayad Dikh Jaye Phr Ik Jhalak ye Soch Ke Nikla Phr Aaj Barsaat Main

 

[Zee Leo]

mashaAllah bahot khoob likha aapne bhai aur sirf half hour me itni acchi ghazal
laikin ek cheez hai isme wo ye k aap jo bund likhte hain wo kuch ziada taweel hota hai.isse thoda sa shot karne ki koshish karen warna poetry ka maza qatam hojata hai.

shukrya janab

 

[Zee Leo]

walaikum assalam
wese b aaj kal barsaat ka mausam hai so kya chun k poetry likhi hai zee
its really very nice
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shukrya mohtarma haan contest ka topic tha ye na ​

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[Nelly]

oh haaaaaaaaaaaaaan main tou bhool hi gai well nice efforts
ese hi likhte raho