Aao Ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid Milen

[Qawareer]

Tum ghair iradi taur p koi kaam na kiya karo Annu...kuch ka kuch hojata hai...
Nazam ki ghazal.ghazal ka Dewan..Dewan ka poora maktab..Maktab Se tumhara charcha Chacha Ghalib ki galiyon tak ya darbar e khas me pahunch jayga...phir to mujhe hi diqaten pesh ayngi sabki ghalat fahmiyan door karne me..
Itne mushkilat me mujhe daalkar khud khwab e khargosh k maze mat lo larki...
Apna qalam ba hosh o hawas uthaya karo..Ye koi ahaeni talwar nahi jo josh me uthayi aur sar qalam kardiya..Khoon e nahaq apne sar p lene ki bejaa koshish mat karo..
Umeed k mausoofa ko meri ye faseeh guftagu Gosh kinaar k zarye bhejay e aqdas me paiwast hogayi hogi
Agar nasamjhi me samjhne se qasir ho to Bahaar se rabeta bila muezaa hasil karo...{(yahoo12)}

nhiiiiiiiiii
bahaar ji kyun apne sath hume b pagal karne k dar'pe hain..

 

[Qawareer]

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YA ALLAH hum par reham farma
Baharu ne pta nhi ghalib uncle k kon se deewan
aur ibn_e_insha k konse safar naamey
aur raavi uncle ki konsi daastan parh rakhi hay
k in k nazuk se dimagh ko sambhalana mushkil hoing
aur ab ye hum masoomon par sab undayling

Annu kahi pohanchey na pohanchey

baharu aisi urdu se ooper zaroor pohancha dey gi

ANNU bach k

bas dekh len hoor aapa..
inna zulam mujh masoom pe..

 

[Dawn]

mashaAllah bahot khoob anaaya bahot accha likha.

eid ka din hai galey aaj to mil le zaalim
rasm e dunya bhi hai dastoor bhi mauqa bhi hai.​

 

[*Sonu*]

wow masha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai Annu
:x :x :x
meri choti nanni poetess
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keep it up​

 

[Qawareer]

wow masha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai Annu
:x :x :x
meri choti nanni poetess
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keep it up​

thnx yara{}

 

[saviou]

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah behna bohot acha likha hai apne

 

[~Bahaar~]

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YA ALLAH hum par reham farma
Baharu ne pta nhi ghalib uncle k kon se deewan
aur ibn_e_insha k konse safar naamey
aur raavi uncle ki konsi daastan parh rakhi hay
k in k nazuk se dimagh ko sambhalana mushkil hoing
aur ab ye hum masoomon par sab undayling

Annu kahi pohanchey na pohanchey

baharu aisi urdu se ooper zaroor pohancha dey gi

ANNU bach k

Annu toh jaise taise bach hi jaygi apki zamanat kon lega Hoor siss?

 

[~Bahaar~]

bas dekh len hoor aapa..
inna zulam mujh masoom pe..

Bas karo Annu ye Masoom nama aur magarmach k ansuuu{(haha)}{(haha)}

 

[Wasif Safi]

Bohot khoob Annu, aur aapko bhi bohot bohot Mubarak.....Allah hum sab ke Duaon ko khubool kare Ameen...

 

[Qaiser-Aziz-Qais]

​buhat khubsuat kalam hai subhanalah daad qabool ho

 

[Qawareer]

Eiden Aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain

 

[NXXXS]

Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c ghazal likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen ​

jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen​

​

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain​

ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen​

​

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten​

Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen​

​

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab​

in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​

hmm... nice meher ki khushbu boley tu ???[DOUBLEPOST=1345722262][/DOUBLEPOST]

Eiden Aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain

tu ??? u want k koi dhamakey shamakey hon ??

 

[Qawareer]

hmm... nice meher ki khushbu boley tu ???

oh..it's mehar..muhabbat

 

[NXXXS]

hmmm.....................mehar bukhari wali mehar ???? okey

 

[mirza37]

meeri terf say sub ko beri eid adv main mubarkh ho,,

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c ghazal likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​

Wa'alaikum assalaam Annu sis Masha'ALLAH bohot hi
pyaari ghazal tehreer ki aap ne eik saal puraani hai
magar iske zouq me ab bhi taseer e taazgi lag rahi hai

 

[mirza37]

Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c ghazal likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen ​

jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen​

​

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain​

ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen​

​

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten​

Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen​

​

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab​

in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​

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hamesha ki terh bohit hi achi or umdah gazal,, annu,,,

[DOUBLEPOST=1345800382][/DOUBLEPOST]hamesha ki terh bohit hi achi or umdah gazal,, annu,,

 

[NXXXS]

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