Aao Ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid Milen

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Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c ghazal likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik:)

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c nazm likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik:)

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dees chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangain lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​
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Bhout Khoob and Aap ko or aap k GAHER walon ko bhi BHOUT BHOUT EID MUBARAK :)
 
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khair mubarik...:)
 
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ماشاء اللہ بہت اعلیٰ
نکل جاوں میں دل کے تنگ ویرانے سے
مل جائیں اک صحرا میں جہاں رونق عید ہے
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Anaaya Ali said:
Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c nazm likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik:)

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​
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walikum asalam..
wow anno tum to chuppi rustam nikli...{(confuse)}
bht acha likka hay siso...khair mobarik...
amezing yar u may mashallah bht talent hay...{(popcorn)}
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c nazm likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik:)

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​
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MashAllah buhut khubsurat Nazam Likha aapne Dear
I really Apreciate it :)
keep it up...
 
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acha lika he . . .. .keep it up .. . . .. nazm ko to kuch es tarhan selikhtey hein . . . yeh to ghazal ki tarhan se aapney likhdia he . . .
 
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hmm g is me radeef nhi hai na..is liye nazm hai...
awein hi yahan beth k gheer'iradi tor pe likhi..
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
hmm g is me radeef nhi hai na..is liye nazm hai...
awein hi yahan beth k gheer'iradi tor pe likhi..
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Tum ghair iradi taur p koi kaam na kiya karo Annu...kuch ka kuch hojata hai...
Nazam ki ghazal.ghazal ka Dewan..Dewan ka poora maktab..Maktab Se tumhara charcha Chacha Ghalib ki galiyon tak ya darbar e khas me pahunch jayga...phir to mujhe hi diqaten pesh ayngi sabki ghalat fahmiyan door karne me..
Itne mushkilat me mujhe daalkar khud khwab e khargosh k maze mat lo larki...{(angry)}
Apna qalam ba hosh o hawas uthaya karo..Ye koi ahaeni talwar nahi jo josh me uthayi aur sar qalam kardiya..Khoon e nahaq apne sar p lene ki bejaa koshish mat karo..{(confuse)}{(silly2)}{(silly2)}
Umeed k mausoofa ko meri ye faseeh guftagu Gosh kinaar k zarye bhejay e aqdas me paiwast hogayi hogi;));))
Agar nasamjhi me samjhne se qasir ho to Bahaar se rabeta bila muezaa hasil karo...{(haha}){(haha}){(yahoo12)}
 
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Anaaya Ali said:
Assalam u alaikum
abi ek choti c nazm likhi hai main ne..ap k sath share kar rhi hon.
aur meri tarf se ap sb ko Eid ki khushiyan boht mubarik:)

Ay mere Hum'Dum aao hum phir us dais chalen
jahan Mehar ki khushbu me nahaye ulfat k Phool khilen

Eiden aati hain aur chup chap guzr jati hain
ab k humrah Tum b aao to Hum Eid karen

in rangeen lamhon ko pheka na kar den ye aadawaten
Aao ab bhool k sb shikwe Hum b Eid milen

kisi ki ankh me na udasiyon k jugnu jhilmilayen ab
in weran lamhon me khushiyon k rang bharen​
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sweet one :)
 
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~Bahaar~ said:


Tum ghair iradi taur p koi kaam na kiya karo Annu...kuch ka kuch hojata hai...
Nazam ki ghazal.ghazal ka Dewan..Dewan ka poora maktab..Maktab Se tumhara charcha Chacha Ghalib ki galiyon tak ya darbar e khas me pahunch jayga...phir to mujhe hi diqaten pesh ayngi sabki ghalat fahmiyan door karne me..
Itne mushkilat me mujhe daalkar khud khwab e khargosh k maze mat lo larki...{(angry)}
Apna qalam ba hosh o hawas uthaya karo..Ye koi ahaeni talwar nahi jo josh me uthayi aur sar qalam kardiya..Khoon e nahaq apne sar p lene ki bejaa koshish mat karo..{(confuse)}{(silly2)}{(silly2)}
Umeed k mausoofa ko meri ye faseeh guftagu Gosh kinaar k zarye bhejay e aqdas me paiwast hogayi hogi;));))
Agar nasamjhi me samjhne se qasir ho to Bahaar se rabeta bila muezaa hasil karo...{(haha}){(haha}){(yahoo12)}
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YA ALLAH hum par reham farma
Baharu ne pta nhi ghalib uncle k kon se deewan
aur ibn_e_insha k konse safar naamey
aur raavi uncle ki konsi daastan parh rakhi hay
k in k nazuk se dimagh ko sambhalana mushkil hoing
aur ab ye hum masoomon par sab undayling ;)

Annu kahi pohanchey na pohanchey

baharu aisi urdu se ooper zaroor pohancha dey gi ;))

ANNU bach k :p
 
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