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[Zee Leo]

hmmmmmm

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

vry nice sis

 

[Dawn]

nice poetry anaaya.khaabil e taareef.
aapne kaha k islah keliye waise aapne ye kaafi bahetreen likhi isme bahot kum hi gumjaayesh hai islah keliye laikinchund ek jo mujhe nazar aayi qaamiyan usey main yahan note kardeta hon.plz dont mind.

main doondhon tera akas chandni me larazte paani me
to anaya paani larazta nahi balke aap yahan chandni k jhilmilate likhte to bahot mauzu rahta
milte hain mujhe zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
yahan mujhe lagta hai k mujhe k agar is band ko is tarha likhtin to baheter hota
milte hain zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
is tarha band me wazan paida hoga

jaisa k allama iqbal (r) k is sher me hai k
haram e paak bhi اك ايك aik k bajaye ek hi likha taake band ka wazan badhe.khair once again nice sharing anaaya.
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[Qawareer]

boht shukaria ap ne itni tawaju se parhi or meri islah ki..
ap ki bat bilkul thek hai ye pehle wale par to mera zehan hi nhi gya ye thek nhi hai ma is ki jaga koi or misra sochti hon,or ap ne jo dosra btaya wo b thek hai..
ma ab 1 naya misra soch kr phir edit kron gi..to thek ho jye ga..
boht shukaria

nice poetry anaaya.khaabil e taareef.
aapne kaha k islah keliye waise aapne ye kaafi bahetreen likhi isme bahot kum hi gumjaayesh hai islah keliye laikinchund ek jo mujhe nazar aayi qaamiyan usey main yahan note kardeta hon.plz dont mind.

main doondhon tera akas chandni me larazte paani me
to anaya paani larazta nahi balke aap yahan chandni k jhilmilate likhte to bahot mauzu rahta
milte hain mujhe zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
yahan mujhe lagta hai k mujhe k agar is band ko is tarha likhtin to baheter hota
milte hain zindagi k asar teri har nishani me
is tarha band me wazan paida hoga

jaisa k allama iqbal (r) k is sher me hai k
haram e paak bhi اك ايك aik k bajaye ek hi likha taake band ka wazan badhe.khair once again nice sharing anaaya.
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[mirza37]

bohit hi achi poetry annu siso ki.. next or achi ho gi ,,,,

 

[Hoorain]

ahan very very nice annu siso

Zehan-o-dil me har lamha jhilmilate teri yaad k jugnu..
Mian dhondon tera akas chandni me larazte pani mein..

keep it up

 

[786humera]

khub........................

 

[Asma24]

waht a beautiful poetry..good ,keep it up

 

[saviou]

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM
ma ne 1 or choti c ghazal likhi hai..
socha ap sb se share kr lon..
ap baten kese hai..meri islah b zarur kijiye ga..

Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah kya baat hai behna bohot hi khubsurti k sath apne alfaz ko piroya hai
bohot hi umdah

 

[Qawareer]

Shukaria nasir bhai

 

[rko]

jitni tarif ki jay kam hai really great quality hai


milthai thai jab hum kahtai thai, dil ka sukoon tum hi toh ho, rasta kathin hai manzil nahi, phir bhi mai rukta kio nahi :.

 

[Qawareer]

boht khoob..

jitni tarif ki jay kam hai really great quality hai


milthai thai jab hum kahtai thai, dil ka sukoon tum hi toh ho, rasta kathin hai manzil nahi, phir bhi mai rukta kio nahi :.

 

[rko]

hosla afzay kai liyai shukria aap nai yeh kahdia acha laga kuch cheezai banai nahi jati banjati hai kuch kisi ko daikhkker kuch sochtai sochtai sochtai waisai ap ka isath acha lagraha suchchi

 

[Khamoush_Naina]

mashallah buhat koob

 

[Entertainer]

Teri rafaqton k silsale or woh ashna sa rasta...
Main ne bune hain kayi khawab yon hi be-dehani mein..

nice one . . .. keep it up . . . .

 

[Butterfly]

Nice sharing