_ghazal_

[Qawareer]

hain sb la'hasil musafatain is dunya-e-fani me...
Pa le us ko jo shamil hai teri dharkano ki rawani me..!

Sb kuch sonp kr apna sile mein koi khawaish nhi kabi..
Muhabbbat to ik anaayat hai zindgani mein.....

Zehan-o-dil me har lamha jhilmilate teri yaad k jugnu..
Mian dhondon tera akas chandni me larazte pani mein..

Teri rafaqton k silsale or woh ashna sa rasta...
Main ne bune hain kayi khawab yon hi be-dehani mein..

Muhabbat mein mehkate teri yaadon k gulab..
Milte hain muje zindgi k aasar teri har nishani mein..

Woh gurya or khawab ab sb sula diye main ne..
Muje sb joth sa lgta hai pariyon ki kahani mein....! ​

 

[Qawareer]

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM
ma ne 1 or choti c ghazal likhi hai..
socha ap sb se share kr lon..
ap baten kese hai..meri islah b zarur kijiye ga..

 

[Nelly]

walaikum asslam
MASHALLAH annu, bot khoob likha hai...........specially wording bot acchi hai tumhari, aur rhyme b theek hai.........in shorten har angel se perfect poem likhi hai
bless ya

 

[Prince-Farry]

wowowowowowowo annu pannu...chah gae.....
akhir har shayri mei khayali polao kyon hota hai?

 

[~Bahaar~]

Muhabbat mein mehkate teri yaadon k gulab..
Milte hain muje zindgi k aasar teri har nishani mein..

wwoowowo.......Annu kya baat hai...
loot li tumne to mahfil yaraa..
kalam tor diyaa...wah wah wah...
gr8 job...
Allah kare zor e bayan aur zyadaa...

 

[Qawareer]

shukaria siso..
ma or acha likhne ki koshish kron gi

walaikum asslam
MASHALLAH annu, bot khoob likha hai...........specially wording bot acchi hai tumhari, aur rhyme b theek hai.........in shorten har angel se perfect poem likhi hai
bless ya

 

[Nelly]

hylaaa baharu, qalam toota? to likha kese us ne

 

[Qawareer]

kuch b khayali nhi hota sb haqeeqat hai...

wowowowowowowo annu pannu...chah gae.....
akhir har shayri mei khayali polao kyon hota hai?

 

[~Bahaar~]

wowowowowowowo annu pannu...chah gae.....
akhir har shayri mei khayali polao kyon hota hai?

Kyun k sada pulaao koi nahi khata...
Iss bacchi ne itni acchi koshish ki to sarhane k bajaye pulaao yad karahe ho aap..

 

[Qawareer]

shukaria shukaria janab..
muje ap ka se izhar-e-sataish boht pasnd aaya...
ameen

Muhabbat mein mehkate teri yaadon k gulab..
Milte hain muje zindgi k aasar teri har nishani mein..

wwoowowo.......Annu kya baat hai...
loot li tumne to mahfil yaraa..
kalam tor diyaa...wah wah wah...
gr8 job...
Allah kare zor e bayan aur zyadaa...

 

[Zee Leo]

mashallah buhat achi poetry likhi hai annu aap ne keep sharing

 

[Nelly]

Sataish to meri ek frnd ka naam hai annu

 

[Qawareer]

hmmmmmm acha

Sataish to meri ek frnd ka naam hai annu

 

[dolly]

woww...very nice job ...keep it up...........

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

Hmmmmm waooooo bohat achi hai

Sb kuch sonp kr apna sile mein koi khawaish nhi kabi.. Muhabbbat to ik anaayat hai zindgani mein.....

Bohat aaalaaa.....

 

[Prince-Farry]

topic to koi dei deti ghazal ko

 

[Qawareer]

ghazal ka har shair ka mufoom alag hota hai..
nazm hoti to nam deti..

 

[Prince-Farry]

hmmm...ghazal aur nazm mei kia farq hota hai?

 

[Qawareer]

ghazal ka matlb 'hirn ki ankhon wali" hota hai wese is ka 1 matlb uraton se baten krna b hai(jo purane zamane me islamat hota tha) ghazal 4 ya is se zyda shairon ki hoti hai..us k pehle shairon ko hum-qafiya hona chaheye,jadeed udru me ghazal ka har shair ka mafoom alag hota hai..
nazm k lye is tarha ki koi pabandi nhi hoti

 

[Prince-Farry]

ghazal ka matlb 'hirn ki ankhon wali" hota hai wese is ka 1 matlb uraton se baten krna b hai(jo purane zamane me islamat hota tha) ghazal 4 ya is se zyda shairon ki hoti hai..us k pehle shairon ko hum-qafiya hona chaheye,jadeed udru me ghazal ka har shair ka mafoom alag hota hai..
nazm k lye is tarha ki koi pabandi nhi hoti

sab dimaag ke opar se nikal gaya..