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[DesiGirl]

kuch baaten meri samaj se bala tar hen.. agar koi bata saky to...

Shayar ki tashbeehaat me ajeeb za imtezaaj nazar aaya..

jaisey PALAK ko hijaab kaha aur Nazar ko b .... aur stah hi Nazar ko Fareb-e-Amar-o-Nahi b farmaya..
Labon ko Pankhadi b kaha aur sath hi Lazeez bhi...
Gala .. Sooz o Saaz b qaraar paya aur.. sath hi Cheekh bhi..
Hatheli ko Sandal b keh diyaa.. aur Sufaid aur Doodh Dhuli bhi..


yeh AIK hi laila ke Khawaas biyaan kiye gyeh hen naa?? ;thinking:

may be yeh shaair sahib ziada he roman-parwar hon or ek ziada lailaaon sy dua salaam rakhty ho

 

[H@!der]

may be yeh shaair sahib ziada he roman-parwar hon or ek ziada lailaaon sy dua salaam rakhty ho

matlab Shayad Mosoof ka Character Mashkook he..

magar shayad Acha shayar banney ke liye 5-7 nakaam Ishq aur 5-7 Haseen Lailaaen honi Shart e Awwal he

 

[DesiGirl]

matlab Shayad Mosoof ka Character Mashkook he..

magar shayad Acha shayar banney ke liye 5-7 nakaam Ishq aur 5-7 Haseen Lailaaen honi Shart e Awwal he

/me is searching in Haider's profile if he is ALSO A POET!!!

 

[H@!der]

/me is searching in Haider's profile if he is ALSO A POET!!!

hahahha...

me ne oper jo qualification bataai he ek Mustanad Shayar honey ki.. kasam le len un me se main EK par b poora nahi utertaa

 

[Hoorain]

wah amazing,,kia Tashbeehat hain
shayer ne saari lughat laila k liye hi use kr li ya aijad hi Laila k liye ki
ab to laila ko daikhne ko dil karing

 

[DesiGirl]

wah amazing,,kia Tashbeehat hain
shayer ne saari lughat laila k liye hi use kr li ya aijad hi Laila k liye ki
ab to laila ko daikhne ko dil karing

lolxxx aap larki ho ker lailaa ko talaash karny nikal rahi hain.. or jo larky hein yahan woh yahan tashbeehat main sy tasaadum (contradictions) dhoond rahy hein

kion @h@!der

 

[H@!der]

wah amazing,,kia Tashbeehat hain
shayer ne saari lughat laila k liye hi use kr li ya aijad hi Laila k liye ki
ab to laila ko daikhne ko dil karing

no doubt ke Tashbeehaat me Masters kiya he lagta he Qais sahab ne..

magar aap dil par haath rakh kar bataaen.. EK hi laila Gori b aur Kali b ho sakti he on d same time..
Ek hi Laila.. Farishta b aur Shaitaan b ho sakti he ...

isi liye me ne kaha.. aur jaisey Mohterma @DesiGirl ne bhi farmaya.. .. yeh kahani EK laila ke idr gird nahi ghoomti lag rahi muje..

aur wese b aaj kal to .. har gali me aap ko 2-4 aisee lailaaen mil jaaen gi.. jin ko Pataney ke chakkar me 10-12 majnoo har waqt Sahi-e-La-Hasil me rehty hen.. to aap ko dekhny ki zaroorat nahi

 

[H@!der]

lolxxx aap larki ho ker lailaa ko talaash karny nikal rahi hain.. or jo larky hein yahan woh yahan tashbeehat main sy tasaadum (contradictions) dhoond rahy hein

kion @h@!der

wo yeh dekhna chah rahi he ke LAILA me koi INSANO wala wasf bhi he ke nahi

aur Contradictions ki baat nahi.. me sirf thoda Mohtaad ho raha hon.. aisa n aho ke yehi tashbeehaat kahin me Apni Laila ke samney biyaan kar baithin.. to wo Sandal utaar le.. ke kon he wo Moi ... jis ki tareef me yeh Zameen Aasman ke qalabey milaa rahy ho

just... precautions u know

 

[Hoorain]

no doubt ke Tashbeehaat me Masters kiya he lagta he Qais sahab ne..

magar aap dil par haath rakh kar bataaen.. EK hi laila Gori b aur Kali b ho sakti he on d same time..
Ek hi Laila.. Farishta b aur Shaitaan b ho sakti he ...

isi liye me ne kaha.. aur jaisey Mohterma @DesiGirl ne bhi farmaya.. .. yeh kahani EK laila ke idr gird nahi ghoomti lag rahi muje..

aur wese b aaj kal to .. har gali me aap ko 2-4 aisee lailaaen mil jaaen gi.. jin ko Pataney ke chakkar me 10-12 majnoo har waqt Sahi-e-La-Hasil me rehty hen.. to aap ko dekhny ki zaroorat nahi

issi liye to daikhna chah rhi hun k ye konsi laila hy jo roop badling
waise aik hi time may gora kala to ho sakta hy koi ,,,wo nae daikha makeup se pehle aur makeup k baad

 

[H@!der]

issi liye to daikhna chah rhi hun k ye konsi laila hy jo roop badling
waise aik hi time may gora kala to ho sakta hy koi ,,,wo nae daikha makeup se pehle aur makeup k baad

u mean yeh un Sab Parlor ki mari Lailaaaon ke liye likhi gye ehe???

agar Qais sahab ne likhty hue yeh sab soch liya hota ...


to... shayad ..... likhty hi na... nahi?

 

[DesiGirl]

no doubt ke Tashbeehaat me Masters kiya he lagta he Qais sahab ne..

magar aap dil par haath rakh kar bataaen.. EK hi laila Gori b aur Kali b ho sakti he on d same time..
Ek hi Laila.. Farishta b aur Shaitaan b ho sakti he ...

isi liye me ne kaha.. aur jaisey Mohterma @DesiGirl ne bhi farmaya.. .. yeh kahani EK laila ke idr gird nahi ghoomti lag rahi muje..

aur wese b aaj kal to .. har gali me aap ko 2-4 aisee lailaaen mil jaaen gi.. jin ko Pataney ke chakkar me 10-12 majnoo har waqt Sahi-e-La-Hasil me rehty hen.. to aap ko dekhny ki zaroorat nahi

har gali me aap ko 2-4 aisee lailaaen mil jaaen gi.. jin ko Pataney ke chakkar me 10-12 majnoo har waqt Sahi-e-La-Hasil me rehty hen.

matlab statistics ky mutabik majnoo ki tadaad lailaaon sy ziada hy...

 

[H@!der]

har gali me aap ko 2-4 aisee lailaaen mil jaaen gi.. jin ko Pataney ke chakkar me 10-12 majnoo har waqt Sahi-e-La-Hasil me rehty hen.

matlab statistics ky mutabik majnoo ki tadaad lailaaon sy ziada hy...

Physically na b ho to Virtually zyada he.. kyunke EK hi majnoo ba-yak waqt un sab Lailaon ko Service provide kar rah ahot ahe..

so in a sens u can say... Jazba e Ishq ki Quality chahey achi na ho.. magar Quantity par koi Shub'ha nahi..

 

[Hoorain]

Haha muje yaqeen hy'agar tb b likhte to kuch rad o badal zarur karte'

u mean yeh un Sab Parlor ki mari Lailaaaon ke liye likhi gye ehe???

agar Qais sahab ne likhty hue yeh sab soch liya hota ...


to... shayad ..... likhty hi na... nahi?

 

[H@!der]

Haha muje yaqeen hy'agar tb b likhte to kuch rad o badal zarur karte'

muje to ab Shak hona shuroo ho gyaa he ke Mosoof kahun khud to is business me nahi hen??

 

[Hoorain]

Jitna dil lga k likha hy lgta to yhi hy waise end may ad line use hosakti hy

muje to ab Shak hona shuroo ho gyaa he ke Mosoof kahun khud to is business me nahi hen??