bahut creative he mashAllah.. aap ke khyalaat ki oonchai ka biyaan he.. aur jazbaat ko alfaaz me dhalney ka hunar.. khuda ki dain he.. aur apa mashALlah khush naseeb waqa hua hen .. so mubarak baad qabool farmaiye
.. thou meri urdu zyada achi to nahi magar.. phir b.. agar kuch points xplain kar saken to mere jaisey kodh maghaz ko samajney me aasani ho gi..
Title miss kar diya aap ne shayad (internal).. kyunke kuch clear nai hua mere naqas zehen me ke Actually baat kis ke bare me ho rahi he.. kyunke jab DO dilon ki baat aati he to wahan Zindagi ka biyaan kuch.. tishnagi chorr jata he ..
aur Sahelon me Kashtiyan aur Hamsafar.. Tashbeeh kuch .. samaj me nahi aai.. Sahil to Jamed hoty hen.. aur Sahelon pe mojood kashtiyan bhi.. aur Hamsafar to hua nahi jaa sakta aisee soorat me..
aur Sorraj ki Kirnon ki Terha Sakht.. aur Raton me Thandak ko aap shayad punctuate karna bhool gye .. aur is jumley ka Muhani yak-sar tabdeel ho gya .. is liye please .. thoda sa educate kijiye ga apney khayalaat ki gehrai pe..
mashkoor rahon ga..
likhtyt rehiye.. mashAllah bahot potential he aap me
Allah kare Zor e Qalam .. Aur zyada..
Aamin
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