Poet Of The Month February 2013

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Rahath

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dekho ek bat muje boht achi lagti hai
or wohi bat ap bar bar meri khushi ke lye karti rehti ho
to jiski khushi ka itna khayal rakha jata hai
woh dushman kaise hoa?[DOUBLEPOST=1360778226][/DOUBLEPOST]
maine poetry ki bat kab ki/:)
maine to apni bat ki thi
hahahaha meri tu or be bhut c addatien hain agar kisi ko pasand hai tu main kya krun es sy dushmani khatm nhe hoge hunh
 

Jahil

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to rahath jee apki jo b adat ho lekin dushmano ka itna khayal krengi to wo apko dushman kese samjhe ga phir?by the way thanks again for ur hunhhhhhh




rahath, post: 1910611, member: 65196"]hahahaha meri tu or be bhut c addatien hain agar kisi ko pasand hai tu main kya krun es sy dushmani khatm nhe hoge hunh[/quote][DOUBLEPOST=1360778973][/DOUBLEPOST]wah wah boht bara karnama kr lya apne aise shoq na paal kr
warna hum log to yahan ap jesi azeem hastiyon se mazaq urw
ane ke liye hi bethe hote haina
mjhy koi shauq nii kisi ka mazaaq udany ka :|
 

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wah wah boht bara karnama kr lya apne aise shoq na paal kr
warna hum log to yahan ap jesi azeem hastiyon se mazaq urw
ane ke liye hi bethe hote haina

o b skta hy {(popcorn)}
aapko shauq o skty hyn aisy toh auron ko o nii skty kiya /:)
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lena
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Jab Raggon Main Laaway Ki Surat
Lahu Tumhaara Dourta Tha
Jab Teri Shuja'at Ka Qissa
Dushman Ki Zuban pe Hota Tha
Sarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata Tha
Per Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta Tha
Or Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus Ker
Tu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta Tha
Kaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa Jihaad
Or Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal Kahan
Kisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya Gira
Phaans Tere Dil Main Thi Chubi
Jab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi Uthi
Takleef Thi Tere Chehre Se Jhalki
Jab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOi
Kisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta Tha
Ho Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh Tu
Allah Ki Raah Main Nikalta Tha
Kaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya Safaid
Dil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Haan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe Chaya
Wehshaton Ka Saaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se Nikla
Wapis Na Lout Ke Aaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon Ne
Asmaan Ko Hilaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton Ne
Apne Baba Ko Dafnaya Hai
Laathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe Ne
Jawan Laashe Ko Uthaya Hai
Haan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal Main
Kitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa Hai
Or Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat Leti
Gherat Ko Behlaya Hai
Kaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna Behas
Dil Main Chubte Ab Sawal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..
[DOUBLEPOST=1360775723][/DOUBLEPOST]yr poetry se oper wala msg maine kisi or thread main likhna tha ghalti se yahan type hogaya plz mods delete this

Assalaamu alaikum MASHA'ALLAH behad khoob @DuFFer brother bohot bohot achhi likhi hai
likhte rahiye aage bhi aur haan mene wo ooper wali post edit kar di jiska kaha tha aap ne @DuFFer : )
 
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Jahil

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riddle wale thread main nhi uraya tha mera mazaq.?kher abi main tablet pc se online hun isliye lar nhi sakta coz know har jaonga jb pc se aon tab ana tum

XcuseMe ... main kab mazaaq kiya hy aapky saath??????????? :|
[DOUBLEPOST=1360779691][/DOUBLEPOST]thanksss alot chiragh brooooooo


Assalaamu alaikum MASHA'ALLAH behad khoob @DuFFer brother bohot bohot achhi likhi hai
likhte rahiye aage bhi aur haan mene wo ooper wali post edit kar di jiska kaha tha aap ne @DuFFer : )
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Rubi

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riddle wale thread main nhi uraya tha mera mazaq.?kher abi main tablet pc se online hun isliye lar nhi sakta coz know har jaonga jb pc se aon tab ana tum
Oo hello .. kab hua yeh sb ????? main koi mazaq nii udaya :| u ka khud mann kr raa hy MAZAAQ BANNY KA so can't help it/:)
 

Jahil

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faariiiiiiiii
thanku ike krne keliyeeeeeee[DOUBLEPOST=1360784275][/DOUBLEPOST]
nice buhat hi achi likhi hai aur ye na ho ap ki poetry awartd ly ury :Dbest of luck @DuFFer
thank
karne ke liye thanu faari poetry like karne ke liyeeee main pc tablet se online hu isliye msgs nhi horhe thik se
 
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ShyPrincess

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hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lena
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Jab Raggon Main Laaway Ki Surat
Lahu Tumhaara Dourta Tha
Jab Teri Shuja'at Ka Qissa
Dushman Ki Zuban pe Hota Tha
Sarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata Tha
Per Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta Tha
Or Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus Ker
Tu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta Tha
Kaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa Jihaad
Or Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal Kahan
Kisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya Gira
Phaans Tere Dil Main Thi Chubi
Jab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi Uthi
Takleef Thi Tere Chehre Se Jhalki
Jab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOi
Kisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta Tha
Ho Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh Tu
Allah Ki Raah Main Nikalta Tha
Kaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya Safaid
Dil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Haan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe Chaya
Wehshaton Ka Saaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se Nikla
Wapis Na Lout Ke Aaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon Ne
Asmaan Ko Hilaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton Ne
Apne Baba Ko Dafnaya Hai
Laathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe Ne
Jawan Laashe Ko Uthaya Hai
Haan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal Main
Kitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa Hai
Or Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat Leti
Gherat Ko Behlaya Hai
Kaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna Behas
Dil Main Chubte Ab Sawal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..
niiiceeee bahot khoooob :-bd
 
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Hoorain

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hi frndzzzzzzzz this is my poetry thori lambi hogayi lekin plz bardasht kr lena
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Jab Raggon Main Laaway Ki Surat
Lahu Tumhaara Dourta Tha
Jab Teri Shuja'at Ka Qissa
Dushman Ki Zuban pe Hota Tha
Sarr Dharr Se Alag Gir Jaata Tha
Per Zulm Ke Aagay Na Jhukta Tha
Or Tanha Saf e Dushman Main Ghus Ker
Tu Allah Hu Akbar Kehta Tha
Kaise Imaan Se Alag Hoa Jihaad
Or Kho Gaya josh O Jalaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka AB Woh Ubaal Kahan
Kisi Aankh Se Koi Aanso Kya Gira
Phaans Tere Dil Main Thi Chubi
Jab Tees Kisi Ke Bhi Thi Uthi
Takleef Thi Tere Chehre Se Jhalki
Jab Saat Samandar Paar Bhi KOi
Kisi Zulm Ki Aag Main Jalta Tha
Ho Ke Lazzaton Se Be Parwahh Tu
Allah Ki Raah Main Nikalta Tha
Kaise Lahu Ko Tu Ne Kya Safaid
Dil Main Uthte Ab WOh Wabaal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan
Haan Aj Bhi Tere Sheher Pe Chaya
Wehshaton Ka Saaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Koi Ghar Se Nikla
Wapis Na Lout Ke Aaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Mamta Ki Cheekhon Ne
Asmaan Ko Hilaya Hai
Haan Aaj Bhi Do Nannhe Haaton Ne
Apne Baba Ko Dafnaya Hai
Laathi Ke Bina Na Chal Sakte Burhe Ne
Jawan Laashe Ko Uthaya Hai
Haan Aj Bhi Ek Behen Ne Aanchal Main
Kitne Aansoun Ko Chupayaa Hai
Or Aaj Bhi Tu Ne Karwat Leti
Gherat Ko Behlaya Hai
Kaise Ho Gaya Tu Itna Behas
Dil Main Chubte Ab Sawal Kahan
Dil Pochta Hai Ay Musalman Bata
Tere Lahu Ka Ab Woh Ubaal Kahan..
[DOUBLEPOST=1360775723][/DOUBLEPOST]yr poetry se oper wala msg maine kisi or thread main likhna tha ghalti se yahan type hogaya plz mods delete this
speechless!
zabardast thoughts,,bohat umda likha :-bd
aap itni achi poetry karte hain to share b karte rha karain!
gud Luck :-bd
 
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Jahil

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thank u so much shyyyyyyyyyyyy
e="ShyPrincess, post: 1910854, member: 67824"]
niiiceeee bahot khoooob :-bd[/quote][DOUBLEPOST=1360814316][/DOUBLEPOST]
speechless!
zabardast thoughts,,bohat umda likha :-bd
aap itni achi poetry karte hain to share b karte rha karain!
gud Luck :-bd
thank u so much hoor han inshAllah ab krunga share ab u ne or chiragh bro ne b like ki na
 
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Jahil

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oo pagal is tarha ki baaten mat kya kro warna mera to koi bharosa b nhi main khush fehmi b paal leta hun
Awwwwwww:eek:
kisne kaha ke u nai ache lagte..:p
tumhari harketen nai pasand bas..:D
[DOUBLEPOST=1360815675][/DOUBLEPOST]kher meri poetry ki tareef nhi ki shayed apne abi tk plzz jaldi se tareed kren muje numbers chahiye zyada se zyada
 
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