+YouR Own Poetry ConTesT-

[saviou]

wow MASHALLAH bro yaqen nahe hta ap itni achi poetry bhi likh lty hain

bohot shukriya hina
abhi bhi apko yakeen nahi k ye hamne hi likhi hai

mashallah bohot achi hai

shukran bro

Excellent shairing saviou keep it up.god bless you

bohto bohot shukriya spark

savio bhai really nice shayari

bohot shukriya Bint e Aisha

wow very nice

shukran pari

 

[*shehzadi*]

masha Allah

kya baat hai choti bohot hi acha likha hai apne

thanks ...

 

[419]

nice potry jamila

 

[Atif-adi]

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lafzon ki kamai khane wale kiya jane
k lafzon ki kharat kiya hoti he

ye shairy ye gazel ye misre ye lafzon ki tan ban
ye sab to tere dimag ki karsatani he
tu kiya jane dil ki awaz kiya hoti he

waqt waqt ki bat he,ye rut gulab ki nahi
mager jeb gulab ka waqt ae ga to tujhe zaroor dikhe ga
ke asa phool tune gulshen me kahin nahi dekha hoga
mager tu thehra sada bahar phool tu kiya jane k khizan kiya hoti he

choti mashallah...but tumari shyeri jab bhi perta hun esa lagta hai dant per rahi hia
kya ghussey me shayeri kerti ho u

BTW bht khoob humari choti si tiny si behna shayera bhi hai​

 

[saviou]

nasir..im truly amazed...this is awesome stuff..tho some words went over my head & i couldnt figure two lines...nevertheless i would like to say{(urock)}

bohot bohot shukriya sangitha....
haan aapko jo lines samajhme nahi aayi hamse kahen usko aasan karke batayenge

mashallah...nicely written saviou bro..
Allah apko hamesha khush rakhein..ameen..

shukran janab
Aameen

amazing Saviou..
bhot achi h...​

shukran marina

 

[*shehzadi*]

choti mashallah...but tumari shyeri jab bhi perta hun esa lagta hai dant per rahi hia
kya ghussey me shayeri kerti ho u

BTW bht khoob humari choti si tiny si behna shayera bhi hai​

thanks adi bhai

 

[saviou]

isme polling kab hogi

 

[RedRose64]

ab ap sab or entries nai submit karwa saktay
LM absent hain TM se, wo 1-2 din may aa k polling laga deingay.


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