yeh barishein..!!!

[rko]

abhi tka ki sabsai best hai yeh shayri . yeh aap ki likhi hui kuch batai ab thora hum bhi arz kardai ijazat ho

baarish kai bheegai woh pal woh yadai woh har waqt kata aap kai sath aj bhi mujhai yad hai , kaisai kahu ab kia shaam thi kia pal tha kia nazara tha jab bhi daikhta tha aap ko toh ajeeb si kashish dikhai daiti thi ap mai, kahu aap sai toh aap sharmati ho na kahu toh rooth jati ho

 

[Qawareer]

G..boht khoob...
ACHA LIKHA AP NE..

abhi tka ki sabsai best hai yeh shayri . Yeh aap ki likhi hui kuch batai ab thora hum bhi arz kardai ijazat ho

baarish kai bheegai woh pal woh yadai woh har waqt kata aap kai sath aj bhi mujhai yad hai , kaisai kahu ab kia shaam thi kia pal tha kia nazara tha jab bhi daikhta tha aap ko toh ajeeb si kashish dikhai daiti thi ap mai, kahu aap sai toh aap sharmati ho na kahu toh rooth jati ho

 

[mmdc]

thankx

 

[Khamoush_Naina]

wow!! zaberdast really owsum {(yahoo12)}

 

[Qawareer]

BARISH k barsane ki dil'fareeb awaz or matti se uthne wali khushbu humesha hi apne sath guzre lamho ki boht si dil'kash yaadain ly kr aati hai...jis me bheeg kr ek bar phr zindgi ka ehsas hota hai zindgi phr se ji uthti hai..halan'k barishon k woh masoom kahen boht peche reh gye hain or phr loat k nhi aane wale,yahan bachon ki masoom se kehke,phoolon se bhari barish me nahai huvi motiye ki bail, sehan se uthne wali mitti ki khushu or sakhiyon ki sangat ek sath thi..han kbi loat kr rhi aaye ge..lekin jb jb barish ho gi ye yaadain yon hi muje bhigoti rahen gi..​

 

[NXXXS]

BARISH k barsane ki dil'fareeb awaz or matti se uthne wali khushbu humesha hi apne sath guzre lamho ki boht si dil'kash yaadain ly kr aati hai...jis me bheeg kr ek bar phr zindgi ka ehsas hota hai zindgi phr se ji uthti hai..halan'k barishon k woh masoom kahen boht peche reh gye hain or phr loat k nhi aane wale,yahan bachon ki masoom se kehke,phoolon se bhari barish me nahai huvi motiye ki bail, sehan se uthne wali mitti ki khushu or sakhiyon ki sangat ek sath thi..han kbi loat kr rhi aaye ge..lekin jb jb barish ho gi ye yaadain yon hi muje bhigoti rahen gi..​

awsome...........................hw old r u ??

 

[Qawareer]

awsome...........................hw old r u ??

is sawal ka likhne se koi taluq?

 

[NXXXS]

Kal halki halki barish thi​

Kal sard hawa ka raqs bhi tha​

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Kal phool bhi nikhray nikhray thay​

Kal un pe aap ka aks bhi tha​

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Kal badal kalay gehray thay​

Kal chand pay lakhon pahray thay​

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Kuch tukray aap ki yaad kay​

Bari dair say dil main thehray thay​

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Kal yaadain uljhi uljhi thin​

Aur kal tak yeh na suljhi thin​

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Kal yaad bohut tum aye thay​

Kal yaad bohut tum aye thay …​

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is sawal ka likhne se koi taluq?

aisey hee poocha ...bura lagatu saoory

 

[Qawareer]

nhi...

 

[mirza37]

BARISH k barsane ki dil'fareeb awaz or matti se uthne wali khushbu humesha hi apne sath guzre lamho ki boht si dil'kash yaadain ly kr aati hai...jis me bheeg kr ek bar phr zindgi ka ehsas hota hai zindgi phr se ji uthti hai..halan'k barishon k woh masoom kahen boht peche reh gye hain or phr loat k nhi aane wale,yahan bachon ki masoom se kehke,phoolon se bhari barish me nahai huvi motiye ki bail, sehan se uthne wali mitti ki khushu or sakhiyon ki sangat ek sath thi..han kbi loat kr rhi aaye ge..lekin jb jb barish ho gi ye yaadain yon hi muje bhigoti rahen gi..​

WOW ANNU KIYA ZABERDST LIKHA HAY AP NAY ,, NICE SHAIRING,,,