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Fantasy

~ The Rebel
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Aaahum .. Asslam o alykum ... to me poetry share krny wali hun :D khud ki likhi hui ...

Koi pathar koi kankar sehan me aaye to
koi jugnu koi taara nazar na aaye to

kisi khamosh kahani me bolty rishty
be'sabab be'wajah toot'ty jayen to

surkh konpal pe mandlati hui titli k
sabhi rang koi cheen k le jaye to

aas baqi na rhy umeed b jab kho jaye
dill se jab baat her ik mehav bhi ho jaye to

aks apna he jab zehan k darechun me
kuredny se bhi yad na aa paye to

waqt be-dard ki zanjeer koi nafs-e shareer
khench k zeest ki gaari ko rok jaye to

sabr dena mujhy umeed b dena ya Rab
esa koi sitam agr mujh pe guzr jaye to

noor dena mujhy roshni ata krna
kaala badal jo meri zindagi pe chaye to
 

Kavi

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Aaahum .. Asslam o alykum ... to me poetry share krny wali hun :D khud ki likhi hui ...

Koi pathar koi kankar sehan me aaye to
koi jugnu koi taara nazar na aaye to

kisi khamosh kahani me bolty rishty
be'sabab be'wajah toot'ty jayen to

surkh konpal pe mandlati hui titli k
sabhi rang koi cheen k le jaye to

aas baqi na rhy umeed b jab kho jaye
dill se jab baat her ik mehav bhi ho jaye to

aks apna he jab zehan k darechun me
kuredny se bhi yad na aa paye to

waqt be-dard ki zanjeer koi nafs-e shareer
khench k zeest ki gaari ko rok jaye to

sabr dena mujhy umeed b dena ya Rab
esa koi sitam agr mujh pe guzr jaye to

noor dena mujhy roshni ata krna
kaala badal jo meri zindagi pe chaye to

Wow wow wow
.... Kya baat hae @Fantasy...kamal lekhti ho aap to :-bd

Thanx for sharing it with us and hope ke aap ka likha huwa are bhi
parrhney ko miley ag :)
 
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well sab ki comments parh kr lag raha k shair kafi acha likha hai aapne
but mujhe itnii pure nhi atii esliye theek se nhi samjhii :s
 

Fantasy

~ The Rebel
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well sab ki comments parh kr lag raha k shair kafi acha likha hai aapne
but mujhe itnii pure nhi atii esliye theek se nhi samjhii :s
no problem aap smjhy bghair b tareef kr skti hain {(moc)}
 

ujalaa

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aahhh! khoobsurat shairy ki khushbu....... khainch layii hai hamain.....
.buhat classy sellective sharing...perh ke acha laga..v nice keep it upp
 

MysTeri0uS

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Aaahum .. Asslam o alykum ... to me poetry share krny wali hun :D khud ki likhi hui ...

Koi pathar koi kankar sehan me aaye to
koi jugnu koi taara nazar na aaye to

kisi khamosh kahani me bolty rishty
be'sabab be'wajah toot'ty jayen to

surkh konpal pe mandlati hui titli k
sabhi rang koi cheen k le jaye to

aas baqi na rhy umeed b jab kho jaye
dill se jab baat her ik mehav bhi ho jaye to

aks apna he jab zehan k darechun me
kuredny se bhi yad na aa paye to

waqt be-dard ki zanjeer koi nafs-e shareer
khench k zeest ki gaari ko rok jaye to

sabr dena mujhy umeed b dena ya Rab
esa koi sitam agr mujh pe guzr jaye to

noor dena mujhy roshni ata krna
kaala badal jo meri zindagi pe chaye to
Bohat khoob...
keep sharing...khush rahiye
 
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