*~Result of TM Poet competition Sep 2011*~

[Amreen]

Congratssssssssss Amreeeeeeeeen mubarak hoo {(dancing)}

thx zeee...

 

[Amreen]

Walaikum As salam................
Ek baat mei yahan kahna chahungi Annu ji k Ye Award Hausla afzaayi k liye diya gaya hai..apka ye Aqdaam qabil e satayesh hai
Aur Amreen siss e bhi bila shubhaa bahut umda likha hai lekin shayeri k lehaaz se lafzon me wazan nahi tha...

Any way Bahut bahut Mubarak Amreen sisssss...............
Plzzz khafa mat hona meri pyari sweet siss...jo lga mujhe kahdiya..
Meri ye islaah tameeri hai tanqeedi nahi...plzzz Negtv mat lenaa.....plzzzzzzzzzz

koi bura nahi laga jab tak tanqeed na ho husn nikharta nahi hai ... shukriya dear...

 

[mirza37]

Bohit bohit mubarkh ho amreen siso..

 

[Rubi]

congratzzzz sis...{(hugy)}

 

[~Bahaar~]

koi bura nahi laga jab tak tanqeed na ho husn nikharta nahi hai ... shukriya dear...

Thanxxx Amreen sissoooooo
apne meri baton ko ghalat nahi samja.....
Haan Khuda kare apke qalam ka yh jaadoo aur nikhre,aur parwan charhe...Ameen

 

[Qawareer]

Walaikum As salam................
Ek baat mei yahan kahna chahungi Annu ji k Ye Award Hausla afzaayi k liye diya gaya hai..apka ye Aqdaam qabil e satayesh hai
Aur Amreen siss e bhi bila shubhaa bahut umda likha hai lekin shayeri k lehaaz se lafzon me wazan nahi tha...

Any way Bahut bahut Mubarak Amreen sisssss...............
Plzzz khafa mat hona meri pyari sweet siss...jo lga mujhe kahdiya..
Meri ye islaah tameeri hai tanqeedi nahi...plzzz Negtv mat lenaa.....plzzzzzzzzzz

Bahaar ap islah b kar deti..jahan apko thek nhi lgi ap Amreen siso ko bataen k wahan kya galti hai aur kya alzaf hote to zyda manasib tha..ta'k un pe waziha ho sake..ok

 

[Tariq Saeed]

Walaikumsalam Wrwb......

Ɔσиɢяαтʋℓαтισи Δмяɛɛи {(dancing)}

 

[Deep Silence]

wa alikum asalam...

masha Allah buhot buhot mubarak ho

 

[Asma24]

waow nice poetry ....and congratulationssssssss