Muqadar

[Tariq Saeed]

MUQADAR​

Vo sardiyon ki aik lambi raat thi, chand bhi kisi konay may mun chupaey khara tha. Main garam shaal orhay apnay sehn may be khud saa aasman per sitaaray dekh raha tha, sitaaray dekhtay dekhtay main achanak be ikhtiyar ho gaya, meri aankhain pur num or dil be qaabu ho gaya, meray labon per be avaaz shikway or saanson may thandi aah thi. Inhi toot’tay lamhon kay darmiyan aik sitaara holay say bola….
“” ham sadiyon say yehi aahain, yehi aansu or yehi khamosh shikway suntay or dekhtay aa rahay hain. Ham kai mohabton kay raazon kay amen hain kai vaadon kay khamosh gavah hain. Or her nasal ko sardiyon ki lambi raaton may yehi kehtay aey hain kay………
Azal say

“”mohabaton ka yehi MUQADAR hai””​

{(Sad1)}​

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[Hoorain]

well done tari bhayaaap ko koi novel likhna chahie

 

[Tariq Saeed]

well done tari bhayaaap ko koi novel likhna chahie

thanks hoorain......i need too much time for novel......but Insha'Allah i will Try.....

 

[Atif-adi]

mmm bhht khoob tari bhai...ap ne likhi hai?{(dancing)}

 

[SaRkaR]

hmmm..ager khud likhi hai tu nice work..

 

[Tariq Saeed]

khud likhi hai bros.........

thanks for appreciation......

 

[unique-style]

superb Tari bro

 

[Abgeene]

very nice

 

[Nelly]

very nice TARI bhaiyya
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[Black Rose]

kia khoob likha hey,,
magar kia hi acha hota agar isey zara arrange kr k post krtey,,

 

[Tariq Saeed]

aray bhai thanks......
muje to samjh nahi aa rhai thi kay is ko post kahan keron......

ye to bhala ho kay aik mod nay is ko yahn per move kiya hai....

 

[Pari]

bht zabardast!

 

[MAH!]

Mah!

Amazing..... tari bhaiya {(Sad1)}
keep it up!!!!

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Super yaar super...................................tu tay puttay chuk ditay nay yaar

 

[Tariq Saeed]

Super yaar super...................................tu tay puttay chuk ditay nay yaar

Oh thanks

brother.......for appreciation

 

[Umm-e-ahmad]

very nice tari really heart touching {(Sad1)} apko novell zrur likhna chahye

 

[H!N@]

great...
keep it up

 

[AdhoriMohabbat]

very very nyc written Tari....
Keep it up..

 

[yoursks]

nice sharing.. Tari

keep sharing...

 

[Ocean-of-love]

Nyc Sharing.