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saviou

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doston ye dusra marhala hai pehle me to apne mehboob ki tareef suni isme uska milna aur phir bichadna aur sath hi aane ki umeed wo intezar hai....hope k apsab ko hamara likha ye kalam pasand aayega






Teri Chahat Teri Justuju Is Dil Me Hai
Meri Jaan Haan Mujhe Tum Se Mohabbat Hai

Tera Wo Muskurana, Sharmake Palken Jhukana
Dabe Honton Se Phoolon Ki Wo Saugat Yaad Hai

Phir Lagi Kiski Nazar Tum Huye Door Mujh Se
Tera Aankhon Me Ashk Bahate Jaana Yaad Hai

Meri Koi Khata Na Thi, Na Teri Koi Khata Thi
Wo Bichadta Huwa Lamha Wo Siskiyan Yaad Hai

Tu Laut Aayegi Ek Din Mujhe Hai Itna Yaqeen
Aaj Bhi In Ankhon Me Tera Intezar Hai

Phir Ayega Mausam e Ulfat Ka Wo Zamana Nasir
Barkarar Hai Umeed Haan Mujhe unse Mohabbat Hai

 

saviou

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bohot bohot shukriya nelli......
aap bhi dua kijiye ki isse behtar hame koi mile


ahan kya baat hai saviou bhai

aap ki choice bohat acchi hai

thanx and keep sharing wid us
 

MSC

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Jheel se ankho mei...
wahhh Zabardast..
very nicely written
aise pur umeed aur pur khloss aj kul bahut kaam mile hai jais aap ne poem mein mention kiya hai
keep up good work Nasir
Good luck!!!
 

saviou

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bohot bohot shukriya msc
apko pasand aayi hame ye jaan kar achcah laga
aur shai kaha apne aaj kal kahan hai aisa umeed par ham kar rahe hain
insha Allah baki uski marzi hai...Jazakallah khair


wahhh Zabardast..
very nicely written
aise pur umeed aur pur khloss aj kul bahut kaam mile hai jais aap ne poem mein mention kiya hai
keep up good work Nasir
Good luck!!!
 

Amreen

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Phir Lagi Kiski Nazar Tum Huye Door Mujh Se
Tera Aankhon Me Ashk Bahate Jaana Yaad Hai

Meri Koi Khata Na Thi, Na Teri Koi Khata Thi
Wo Bichadta Huwa Lamha Wo Siskiyan Yaad Hai

Tu Laut Aayegi Ek Din Mujhe Hai Itna Yaqeen
Aaj Bhi In Ankhon Me Tera Intezar Hai

Bohat khoob Nasir Bhai...aap to acha khasi shayeri ker lete hain bus zara si or mehnat ki zaroorat hai or perfect ho jayenge...bohat khoob...=D>
 

saviou

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Phir Lagi Kiski Nazar Tum Huye Door Mujh Se
Tera Aankhon Me Ashk Bahate Jaana Yaad Hai

Meri Koi Khata Na Thi, Na Teri Koi Khata Thi
Wo Bichadta Huwa Lamha Wo Siskiyan Yaad Hai

Tu Laut Aayegi Ek Din Mujhe Hai Itna Yaqeen
Aaj Bhi In Ankhon Me Tera Intezar Hai

Bohat khoob Nasir Bhai...aap to acha khasi shayeri ker lete hain bus zara si or mehnat ki zaroorat hai or perfect ho jayenge...bohat khoob...=D>
bohot bohot shukriya Amreen

inhsa Allah aap sab ka hausla milega to koshish jaari rakhegi :)
 

Qawareer

میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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wah..boht khoob..{(ok)}

bhai ab to intazar khatam ho gya na..{(popcorn)}
 
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