\\\*Kyun marne ki faryaad karoon*///

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalam o alaikum doston aap logon ki khidmat mein mera eik newely shared
poem peish hai khaas kar Atif bro ki request per hum yeh poem yahan
share kar rahe hain umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi

Kis lehje ke baare mein baat karoon mein
kis bewafaa ki bewafaai ko yaad karoon mein
chout mila hai dard-e-jahaan se bhi gehra
warna tu hi souch kyun marne ki faryaad karoon mein

***S_ChiragH***

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[saviou]

Wa Alaykum Assalam wrwb
masha Allah bohot umda sharing janab

Atif ke kehne par apne share kiye
to kya ye unke liye hi likhe the aap ?

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa Alaykum Assalam wrwb
masha Allah bohot umda sharing janab

Atif ke kehne par apne share kiye
to kya ye unke liye hi likhe the aap ?

Shukria ji shukria ji nahin likhe ot hum kaafi waqt
pehle the per yahan shre unke kehne per kiye

 

[~Bahaar~]

Assalam o alaikum doston aap logon ki khidmat mein mera eik newely shared
poem peish hai khaas kar Atif bro ki request per hum yeh poem yahan
share kar rahe hain umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi

Kis lehje ke baare mein baat karoon mein
kis bewafaa ki bewafaai ko yaad karoon mein
chout mila hai dard-e-jahaan se bhi gehra
warna tu hi souch kyun marne ki faryaad karoon mein

***S_ChiragH***

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wah wah wah.....
zabardast................
Agar bura na manay to ek ghalti apki dikhayi di hai..arz karti hun...
chout mila hai dard-e-jahaan se bhi gehra
yahan p mila nahi mili hona chahiye bro....
Waise bahut umdaa..Hum tanqeed karne lagte hain to khu hi bure hojate hain.agar apko bhi mujhse koi prob hai to kahdijiye..aiynda ehtiyat..

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

wah wah kia baat hy chiragh

kia ap khud likhty hy kiaaa

 

[Dawn]

bahot khoob janab bada accha likha aapne aise hi likhte rahen.

 

[mirza37]

Waha ji waha kiya baat hay br likan thora kam hay kuch likhain

 

[Khwahish]

Assalam o alaikum doston aap logon ki khidmat mein mera eik newely shared
poem peish hai khaas kar Atif bro ki request per hum yeh poem yahan
share kar rahe hain umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi

Kis lehje ke baare mein baat karoon mein
kis bewafaa ki bewafaai ko yaad karoon mein
chout mila hai dard-e-jahaan se bhi gehra
warna tu hi souch kyun marne ki faryaad karoon mein

***S_ChiragH***

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very nice
thanks for sharing...........

 

[Nelly]

walaikum assalam n nice sharing

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah wah kia baat hy chiragh

kia ap khud likhty hy kiaaa

Ji haan yeh humari apni likhi huwi hain jo bhi TM,s poet forum mein
shared hain and thank you very very much for liking my poetriez​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah wah wah.....
zabardast................
Agar bura na manay to ek ghalti apki dikhayi di hai..arz karti hun...
chout mila hai dard-e-jahaan se bhi gehra
yahan p mila nahi mili hona chahiye bro....
Waise bahut umdaa..Hum tanqeed karne lagte hain to khu hi bure hojate hain.agar apko bhi mujhse koi prob hai to kahdijiye..aiynda ehtiyat..

first ov all thanks and then urdu ki baari

ji aise mistakes aap nikala karengeen ot humare liye hi behetteri hai
aap na ghabrayen humein zara bhi bura nahin lagta

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

bahot khoob janab bada accha likha aapne aise hi likhte rahen.

shukria dost aapka aur aap jaise doston ka saath raha to insha'ALLAH likhte rahengein

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Waha ji waha kiya baat hay br likan thora kam hay kuch likhain

Shukraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ji insha'ALLAH aapki peish e khidmat mein is hi thread mein eik aur sheir
peish karoonga

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

very nice
thanks for sharing...........

Thanks and welcome

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

walaikum assalam n nice sharing

Shukria behna shukria

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Ujde huwe dil tapte sehra se sab hi munh morh lete hain ChiragH
aabaad dil pur araish sheher me bus kar use ujaadne aate hain zamane wale

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[*Sonu*]

walikum salam
nice one
​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

walikum salam
nice one
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Thankyou​

 

[Amreen]

oho... Masha Allah very nice Ashaar saif...

 

[Zee Leo]

buhat khoob janab . zabardast sharing hai