Kehta Hai Sharabi Na Roko Mujh ko Sharab Se

[saviou]

WOW
bohat achi likhi hy boht khoob

shukran mohtarma

 

[saviou]

Walekum Assalam WRWB Nasir Bhai

Bohot hi zabardast likha hai aapne, aur aise mauzu per likhna bohot hi bari baat hai, aage bhi likhte rahiye

ALLAH TAALA aapko Jazae Khair de Ameen..

summa Aameen
bohot bohot shukriya bro
inshAllah zaroor likhte rahenge

 

[Asma Shah]

Aryyyyyyyyy wah ji wah.kia baat hai............keep it up seviou bro.........

 

[Hoorain]

ahaaaaaaaaan bohat zabardast saviou bhaya

 

[Aayat]

Waalikum Aslaam

bohat hi acha likha ap ne .....

 

[Asma24]

bht khoob mohtram bht acha likhte ho aap keep writing

 

[melody1000]

u r too good nasir...baaki sab poets ki chutti kar doge

 

[$HADOW]

Bohot Khoob Saviou Bhai !
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[saviou]

Aryyyyyyyyy wah ji wah.kia baat hai............keep it up seviou bro.........

shukran behna
inshAllah zaroor

 

[saviou]

ahaaaaaaaaan bohat zabardast saviou bhaya

shukran behna

 

[saviou]

Waalikum Aslaam

bohat hi acha likha ap ne .....

bohot hi shukria aap ka

 

[saviou]

bht khoob mohtram bht acha likhte ho aap keep writing

bohot shukriya mohtarma hausla afzai ke liye

 

[saviou]

u r too good nasir...baaki sab poets ki chutti kar doge

shukran shukran sangitha
array thora ahiste se bolo bade bade paye ke shayar hain yahan aur kahin dagh dehelvi ne sun liya to hamari khair nahi

 

[saviou]

Bohot Khoob Saviou Bhai !
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shukran bro

 

[Umm-e-ahmad]

bohat nice hai
u r great bro

 

[saviou]

bohat nice hai
u r great bro

shukran behna

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Waisy tu ma nay yeah pehli be read ker chuka hoon but comments nahi diye thay

No doubt its a superb sharing

May Allah Bless You (Ameen)

 

[saviou]

Waisy tu ma nay yeah pehli be read ker chuka hoon but comments nahi diye thay

No doubt its a superb sharing

May Allah Bless You (Ameen)

summa Aameen
bohot bohot shukriya mohtaram

 

[kirpa bai]

like it,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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[saviou]

like it,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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shukran mohtarma