Halki Halki Ye Barish Kyun Ho Rahi Hai

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Nelly

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woh tou patah hai MASHALLAH
aap ne ek sher main nazar kamzor ka zikar kiya na tou is liye keh ri thi main:D matlab k mazaq kar ri thi/:)
acchi poem likhi hai MAHSALLAH:) likhte rahen



shukran behna :)
iska matlab apko glasses hain waah :p
nahi jee hamari ankhen masha Allah se bohot achi hain aur pyari bhi :)
 

saviou

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woh tou patah hai MASHALLAH
aap ne ek sher main nazar kamzor ka zikar kiya na tou is liye keh ri thi main:D matlab k mazaq kar ri thi/:)
acchi poem likhi hai MAHSALLAH:) likhte rahen
jee jee pata hai aap mazakh kar rahe hain :)
waise badon ko mazakh karne ki aadat hoti hai :p
 

Qawareer

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wssalam u alaikum
mashaAllah
boht acha likha..:-bd
Nazr kamzor kyun ho rahi hai.. yeh kuch manasib nhi lg raha..
 

Amreen

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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb :)
ek aur poetry barish par /:)
wo asal me contest k liye ek likhte likhte do likh diye the
to ek contest k liye share kiye aur ye bhi mukammal hogayi to ye bhi apke samne hazir hai
umeed hai ye bhi pasand aayegi







bohat hi umdah poetry hai nasir bhai...aaj pata chala ke aap barish se itna darte hain...:p
 

saviou

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wssalam u alaikum
mashaAllah
boht acha likha..:-bd
Nazr kamzor kyun ho rahi hai.. yeh kuch manasib nhi lg raha..

shukran shukran :)
shayad sabke comment ka asar bhi hai ke ye line munasib nahi lag rahi
phir bhi koshish hogi ainda se khayal rakhne ki inshaAllah
 

saviou

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bohat hi umdah poetry hai nasir bhai...aaj pata chala ke aap barish se itna darte hain...:p
array nahi na ham to hargiss nahi darte barish se :)
waise bhi ankh taras jaati hai barish dekhne kyun ke yahan to barish hi nahi hoti
ye to bas poetry me kuch khayalat kuch haqeeqat ko jama kiya hai hamne
baki barish to Allah ki nemat hai aur us nemat par likhne wale the lekin mukammal nahi hua
to isliye yehi post kardiye :)
 

Qawareer

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shukran shukran :)
shayad sabke comment ka asar bhi hai ke ye line munasib nahi lag rahi
phir bhi koshish hogi ainda se khayal rakhne ki inshaAllah
inshaAllah..:)
main ne baki sb k comments nhi parhe..
 

*Sonu*

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walikum salam
:)
masha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai bro
:)
n really very well designed by sabah sis
:)
 

Khwahish

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Walikum salam
mashallah ye poetry be bohot achi hai
and es mein koy shak nahe hai ki aap bohot acha lekti hai:)
thanks for sharing with us bro
 
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