Halki Halki Ye Barish Kyun Ho Rahi Hai

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Jheel se ankho mei...
acha theek haiiiiiiiiiiiiii............../:)
whatevaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...........phr bhi aap ne khud pe tanz kiya.......quite funny{(haha)}
 

saviou

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Wassalam

bro its great sorry per kuch mistakes humein lagin
and great desinged Sabah sis i liked it

shukran bro :)
koi baat nahi bro likhte likhte sahi hojayenge
aap sath denge to galtian bhi sudhar jayengi inshaAllah :)
 

Dawn

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bahot umda ghazal janab.
halki halki ye baarish kyun ho rahi hai.
yahan salon saal baarish ka naam nahi hai aur aapke paas barish hori ye kahan se aapne baarish dekhli.jab aap ye likh rahe thei shayad tab aap sahra me thei jahan peene ko paani nahi tha.

nice design sabah.bahot umda.
 

saviou

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bahot umda ghazal janab.
halki halki ye baarish kyun ho rahi hai.
yahan salon saal baarish ka naam nahi hai aur aapke paas barish hori ye kahan se aapne baarish dekhli.jab aap ye likh rahe thei shayad tab aap sahra me thei jahan peene ko paani nahi tha.

nice design sabah.bahot umda.

shukran janab :)
aur sahi kaha apne jab likh rahe the to sehra me hi the aur ab parh rahe hain to bhi sehra me hi hain
asal me shayar apne tasawwur apni soch apne khayalat me ye bataen lakar likhta hai ye aap bhi jante hain jaise apne bhi to barish par apni pehli nazm likhe
 

Nelly

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walaikum assalam
ek aur khoobsurat poem ki entry bro:-bd bot accha likha hai
wese agar nazar kamzor ho ri hai tou aap mere glasses borrow kar sakte hain:-B:p
 

saviou

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walaikum assalam
ek aur khoobsurat poem ki entry bro:-bd bot accha likha hai
wese agar nazar kamzor ho ri hai tou aap mere glasses borrow kar sakte hain:-B:p

shukran behna :)
iska matlab apko glasses hain waah :p
nahi jee hamari ankhen masha Allah se bohot achi hain aur pyari bhi :)
 
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